Hi, yes this is my first fanfic so please don't be too harsh but reviews and criticism are wanted badly!
Oh, and just to clarify:

Neru's thoughts
Miku's thoughts
Flashback

Akita Neru was walking home and thinking about her day in general. She had just come home from a 3- hour designer lecture from Miku Hatsune

"Ne~ru-chan!" called Hatsune Miku, the most popular girl at school. She is the best singer in the school and loves to eat leeks. Her school uniform has a teal-colored theme with a short skirt, a silver collared top, a tie, a pair of leg warmers, and arm warmers. She was currently leaning over Neru's desk where Neru was texting someone.

"What." replied Neru. Neru is not the most liked at the school, in fact she might be the most hated. Her uniform is almost exactly like Miku's but with a yellow theme. She isn't a bad singer but not an amazing singer either.

"I want to do something today! We could go shopping, or we could hang out at your place or my place, but can we please do something after school?" asked Miku in a very rushed tone.

"Ugh... fine whatever."

"Yes~! We'll go over to my place!"

"This is going to be sooo fun."

"NERU~!" yelled Miku while throwing herself at the smaller girl, and hugging her to the point where she almost fell over.

"What the F! What was that for?" exclaimed a very pissed off Neru. She hadn't even heard Miku sneak up on her.

Man, I need to focus more. I didn't even hear her. Wait why is she here?

"I missed you~! We had so much fun!" Miku stated as if it was the most obvious thing on the planet. Miku still had her arms wrapped around Neru.

Okay. it's been less than an hour since I left, she as plenty of friends, why does she always come to me? Not that I don't like the fact that she talks to me, it's just, why ME of all people?

You know, this is the longest Neru-chan has let anyone touch her, I wonder why? I never noticed how small she actually was until now.

Unfortunately Neru didn't have a very good filter between her brain and her mouth.

"Okay,it's been less than an hour since I left, you have plenty of friends, why do you always come to me?" Neru questioned.

"You, you don't like me coming to you?" Miku asked a little hurt.

"Wha...? No!" Neru almost yelled taken aback. "It's not that I don't like the fact that you talk to me, it's just, why ME of all people?"

"What do you mean?"

"Like, we are almost complete opposites, you're overly happy, and I'm overly boring. You're optimistic, I'm cynical. You have no problem sharing your feelings, I can't share them for the life of me. Wait... get off of me!"

"But~, Neru-chan~, I don't want to!" whined Miku as she tightened her grip on the smaller but definitely scarier girl.

"Get off of me now! Miku!"Neru ordered while trying unsuccessfully to squirm her way out of the teal-haired girl's grip. Neru could feel the heat rushing to her face.

Crap! I need to get Miku off me, but how? Wait I have an idea, Miku may be an amazing singer but she can't run as fast as me.

"Miku, look a sale on leeks!" Neru yelled, pointing in a random direction.

"WHERE!" Miku whipped around so fast Neru was sure she got whiplash. When Miku turned her back, Neru took off running. Miku turned back around to see Neru running off as fast as she could.

"NERU-CHAN~! WAIT! PLEASE! I PROMISE NOT TO HUG YOU AGAIN!" Screamed Miku, running after Neru.

Keep running, but wait, now I feel kinda bad for leaving her there. I'll slow down and if she really wants to catch me then she'll- Ompf.

Neru's thoughts were interrupted by Miku throwing herself at Neru... again.

Oh sorry for the failedness, this was done at 1:30am. Is Neru too OOC? Is Miku? Again any reviews would be needed to improve my writing style.