Okay, so I'm back again with the first chapter. What I did with was tweaked the story and made some minor changes because as early readers know, this fic was originally started by my sister, who now is too busy with life. So then I took over and now writing the rest of this fic. And if anyone with siblings knows, you don't always agree with their ideas. And I just so happen that I didn't really like some parts in this fic, so I changed it. Simple right? Nope! I hope all of you like it more because it took me a long time to figure all of this out. 'Kay, now let's get on with the fic.
The (Un) Happiest Place on Earth
(my character and mine only)
Rachel- Ray's younger cousin who lives in Japan with the Bladebreakers. She's really eccentric, wild, carefree, and totally random. She also has a bitter rivalry with Hilary and is constantly fighting with her all the time, so they usually have to be separated. Also, Rachel likes to film things with her spy camera, especially Ray's embarrassing moments. She wears a blue cap with her very tiny hidden camera attached on it, blue jeans, red shirt, red wristband, black shoes, and has long black hair with amber eyes.
Yes, I know this is a very vague description. I would make a picture, but I can't draw to save my life. I did make an example of her on dollwizard, but I don't know how to send it to anyone. The reason why she hates Hilary was in one of my other fanfic "Ice of Destiny", but it got deleted. Maybe I'll try to repost it later. Anyway, enjoy my fanfic!
Chapter 1: Good News
Rachel runs into Tyson's backyard after sprinting from her house to tell some exciting news.
"Hey everyone! I've got great news!"
No one answers. She steps closer and sees Tyson busily munching away on a gigantic smoked ham next to Max, who is gulping down a huge bucket of sugar. Ray is sitting on a rock meditating (he's actually asleep), Kenny is typing away furiously on his laptop, and Kai was brooding in a corner. Only Hilary noticed her, but quickly looked away with her nose in the air and ignored her.
Sigh. Who said life was easy? Rachel unzips her backpack and thinks, "How can I quickly get them to notice me?" Her hand slowly touched a mysterious object. Hehehe...
Next few moments because whacking people's heads with a mallet is way too violent for a K+ rating and I do not want to change this to a T-rated story. Fortunately for you readers, there is one word I can use to describe what happened and it's: "Owww..."
"What the heck was that for?!" Ray was horribly multi-tasking between yelling at his cousin and holding a bag of ice on his head (seriously, why can't guys multi-task? oh yeah,everyone else is on the ground recovering from their injuries caused by the evil mallet.)
"Maybe if you would actually listen to me, I wouldn't of had to use my mallet!"
"I was listening!"
"No, you weren't! You were sleeping on that rock," she said pointing directly to the rock he was sleeping on.
Silence. (crickets are chirping in the background.)
"Whatever. But why in the world are you carrying a mallet?" He drops the ice bag and bends down to pick it up (tearing his pants in the process).
"Well besides beyblading, I play Whack-a-Mole. In fact, I've been the champion Whack-a-Mole player for four years straight. But the arcade I go to got cheap and never replaced the mallet after it got stolen. Because of that, I decided to bring my own mallet otherwise arguing with the arcade manager might get me kicked out permanently. So anyway, I go to the arcade to practice every Friday, which is today," she answered swinging the mallet like a baton. And yes, she is really hyper and excited today.
Ray, who couldn't believe all of this, asked, "Is there really an official Whack-a-Mole league?"
"Yeah. It's called WHAMA. It stands for Whack-A-Mole Association."
"And you know today's Monday, not Friday."
"Oh." Silence again (with the crickets even louder).
"So what's your big news?'
"I was going to say that I won a contest to go to Disneyland!"
"Where?!" His mouth dropped open as he dropped his ice pack and bent down to get it again (tearing his pants even more).
"Disneyland! You see, I sent a postcard to this contest I saw on tv that lets you take at least eight people to Disneyland and all of these Southern California places. It's for seven days: four at Disneyland and one each at Knott's Berry Farm and the San Diego Zoo. I just found out today that I won so I ran over here to tell you guys and invite you, but everyone was ignoring me so this happened (points to everyone on the ground). Well anyway, I'm late for dinner so I have to go. Bye!" She quickly left leaving Ray flabbergasted at the news. (Right around now, everyone is getting up with sore heads and in desperate need of ice packs and tons of Advil).
"Hey Ray, what just happened? There's a huge hole in your pants!" Tyson said pointing at him and everyone else started laughing at poor, humiliated Ray.
Well, how did you like the first chapter? Review please!