Zoey 101
A.N this is my first time writing a fanfic so i dont know how to go abt this. I would love some advice. Btw (by the way) i do not own Zoey 101 or any of teh characters but im making up a new character soon. Well c ya and hope u enjoy teh story.
"Nicole, hurry up we are going to be late to meet the boys for the movie", shouted Zoey Brooks to her best friend, Nicole Brastow. "I'm coming", a voice yelled back from the bathroom, "You know I won't go anywhere if my hair is frizzy". She heard the door opening and told Dana Cruz, her other roommate, that they were going to catch a movie on campus with the boys of dorm 204 and if she wanted to come. "No way Zoey" the girl replied back, "sitting next to Logan and then listening to him talk about himself, I think I'll just stays here and finish reading this magazine and go for a walk". "Finally, no frizz", Nicole chirped, holding her hair in her hand showing them. "Come on", Zoey said holding Nicole's hand and dragging her away from room 101. "Bye Dana", they said as heading out the door.
"So Zoey why are you so eager to go to the movie early", Nicole asked curiously. "What do you mean" Zoey asked back with a confused look on her face. "Oh come on, you know what I mean" Nicole said getting excited, "is it cause of a boy"; she asked watching Zoey's face very carefully. "I really don't know what you're talking about Nicole", Zoey said carefully, without looking in her eyes. "Hey look what you know we are here", Zoey said, facing the door of room 204. She knocked. "Who is it" said a muffled voice from behind the door. "It's me and Nicole" Zoey replied. "Coming", said the same voice again. The door opened and there standing by the door was Chase (sorry don't know his last name). "Hey Zoey, hey Nicole, we were just waiting for Logan to finish admiring himself in the mirror", Chase said with a blank look on his face, "wait weren't we going to come get you", he asked? "Hey Chase, that is so like Logan, and yeah you were going to come get us but we got dressed earlier so we decided to come get you all", Zoey replied. "Hey Chase, who is it", came a loud obnoxious voice, coming closer to the door. "Hey guys, wait there is only two of you where is I'm-so-good-in-sports-girl", Logan asked with a disappointed face. "Well she didn't feel like coming and sitting through a whole movie with you while you talk about yourself so she decided to stay in the dorm and read a magazine", Nicole said quickly. "Oh ok", Logan said in a small voice, "lets go, or we will be late", he said with a fake grin. "Michael come on get up", Chase said to a boy who was sitting on the couch eating a bag of potato chips and watching the whole scenario. Michael got up and they left the dorm, talking and laughing. At the movies they decided to see The DaVinci Code (A.N If you haven't seen The DaVinci Code movie yet you must see it, It is GREAT). They went into the line and got their tickets, then went to get something to eat and drink. They decided on three jumbo size popcorns and 5 medium cokes. They went into the theater and sat down in an empty row. (A.N: the seating order was Chase, Zoey, Nicole, Michael, and Logan at the end) Throughout the movie they kept on talking, all except Logan who looked a bit down, halfway through he said he wasn't feeling well and left. They screamed when the guy came out of nowhere and attacked the girl, Zoey held on tightly to Chase, and Nicole with Michael. At the end of the movie they went for a walk.
A.N well i hope u like it. i am welcome to any critisism (dont kno how to spell it) since it my first time. R and R