Hey guys I'm putting my other stories on hiatus until I get some new reviews! So this one's more serious. Just R & R please.
Max POV
I envy those of you who are thinking ooh this book looks good I'll just kick back and relax while they fight for their freaking life!
"AAH! Let me go!" I heard my baby Angel squeal as an Eraser snatched her. I was about to go get her when some tall guy came and did a roundhouse kick right to the Eraser's chest.
"Not you again." An eraser whimpered. Wait did I just hear right? An eraser whimpered. After the other erasers saw him they all fled the scene. Now let me get a closer look at this guy. Tall, slim, brown spiky hair, brown eyes.
"Hey you all right kiddo?" The guy asked Angel she just nodded.
"Hey thanks for the help but we could of handled it." I said.
"Sure you could've considering they were beating your butts." He smirked. Hmm this kid's a bit cocky.
"What's your name?" I asked. Yeah that was my best comeback.
"Hawk. And yours?" he answered.
"I'm Max, that's Fang, that's Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy, and the little is Angel." I listed.
"Cool you guys like siblings or something?" he questioned.
"Sort of it's complicated. Why do people call you Hawk?" I asked.
"I would think it's because of these." Hawk answered snapping out white wings with brown and gold speckles all over and on the bottom it looked like it just grazed the dirt.
"Hmm not bad but not better than these." I retorted as the flock and I snapped out our wings in unison.
"Well can you guys do this?" he smirked jumping into the air doing a few swift banks and a summersault in the air.
"We can do better than that." I said motioning for an up and away and tapping Iggy's hand twice. We flew up and quicly formed a v going in circles doing quick smooth banks here and there summersaulting and then we flew up in a stack then stopped for a running landing.
"Impressive." Hawk said.
"Well what's your story?" Fang spoke.
"What story?" Hawk spoke nervously.
"You have wings dude. What happened?" Fang pointed out.
"Fine. Two of the whitecoats were my mom and dad. I was the youngest,they didn't mean to have me just my older brother so they thought I would be good for the school. So they crafted bird dna into me." Hawk said.
So what do ya think should I continue? I was bored thus this story was born. R & R please
