Hey Everyone,
This is my first FF ever. I couldn't find a Beta on short notice so this is just my bad grammar.
English in't my native language so some mistakes are in there.
Summary : The Fire Nation just started the was a few years ago. And someone has to defeat them. And the Avatar has to be the one to do just that. But what do you do when your Avatar is a 16 year old girl who can only bend one element. You train her. But who are her teachers ?
Rating : K+ for now.
No Quinn in this Chapter.
Enjoy, And I would love some feedback for next chapter
I was born in a small village in the Earth Kingdom. My dad is am Earthbender and so is my older brother. My family hoped I was one to. And I turned out to be an Earthbender. But I'm not a normal Earthbender like my dad and my brother. No, I'm special. I'm the most powerful bender in the entire world. I'm the only person in the world who is capable of bending all four elements. Water, Earth, Fire and Air. I'm the Avatar. Now follow me on my journey to learn all the elements.
When I was 8 years old, my dad started to learn me the basics of Earthbending. I was a strong bender for my age. Everyone in the village could see. And the people I trained with could feel. At the age of 9 I would fight my 2 year older brother Puck ( but I call him Noah). And till this day I always won. But Puck, the sore loser he is, never stopped trying. And still gets hurt every time he tries.
When I was 12 years old the war started. The Fire Nation captured all Air nomads and they killed most of them. There are only a few of them left who survived. Two years after the attack on the Air nomads, the Fire Nation attacked the Southern Water Tribe. They captured all adult Waterbenders and warriors and put them in prisons somewhere in the Fire Nation. With Fire Lord William Schuester, Fire Lord Schue for short, the Fire Nation was unstoppable. I never realized what happened because we live in a small village. Far away from the war. Until my story began.
The day my real story starts is my 16th birthday. Until that day I didn't know I was the avatar and that I was meant for great things. It started out like every other day. My parents worked out on the field while Puck and I toke care of all the animals at our farm. Feeding our Hybrid pigs ( animals with the head of a pig but the body of a cow or a sheep ) was never a nice job. They were messy and loud like really loud. We also have some Turkey ducks ( Ducks with the head of a Turkey ) but they're always lost. And they only come back for food. We also tidy up the house. After all that Puck and I went to our barn to visit our Ostrich horses (( wiki/Ostrich_horse ) Brown, bird-like creatures they're ten feet tall and are used like horses. They can jump extremely high and run along vertical surfaces ) Mine is named Kai and Puck's is named Kui. We trained them really well and they're so awesome to ride. We saddle our horses ( I'll just call them horses ) and mount them. We put them into gallop. My Goat dog ( Looks like a dog. Only shorter legs with hooves and longer hair. ) Ozi run with us. And the horses ride us to the mountains not far away from our farm. When we arrived by the mountains Ozi fall flat on his back with all his fluffy hair into his face.
I went over to Him. And I pet him. "Good boy Ozi, but your legs are way to short for a run like that. When you run you look like a little hobbit just like me." Ozi puts his legs up in the air as sign for me to rub his tummy. "Weirdo." I rub his stomach for a while. When Puck starts talking.
"Rach ?" Puck asks me a little insecure. "I want to try again today." His face was serious but I could see some fear on I face.
"Noah, are your sure ? You know what happened the last time right ?" I just want him to be sure about it because last time he lost he had a cut on his knee and he was whining for 3 days. 3 DAYS. During those days he stayed in his bed and I had to do all the chores on my own. But he only acts that whiny around me. So that is slightly irritating.
Puck the badass he thought he was said "Don't worry little sis. I can do it."
"Yeah sure, just like the last time you said you could do it." I huffed out. We both knew he couldn't do it but Puck always wanted to be better than me but he never was. But the boy was trying and he gets an A+ for effort.
We go and stand opposite each other. I have to look up to see his eyes while he has to look down. 'God why did you make me so short.' We make sure there is 40 feet in between us. We both do some
stretches and shove some little rocks over the ground.
"Ready ?" He asks. I nod. "Go !"
Puck starts to pound his feet on the ground and he send some rocks my way. I quickly pull up a wall in front of me and the Puck's rocks melt together with my wall. Puck tries over and over again. But I keep dodging or destroying his attacks. He is already panting and out of breath. He's frustrated. He now tries to send some big rocks my way but he fails and the rocks are about to crush him. I try to get grip on the rock that got out of control but I fail. In desperation I sweep my arm with a lot of force in Puck's direction. And when I do that Puck flies through the air against the mountain wall.
I was stunned. 'What the hell just happened.' Was the only thing on my mind. But someones whining pulled me out of my daze.
"Rach. Look, my elbow." I looked over to him when he was pouting and looking at his elbow. His elbow was a little scratched. Seriously. The guy is 18 and he is pouting because he scratched is elbow while he could be dead.
"God, you're such a baby when it's just the two of us." I was still a little distraught about what just happened. And that in combination with Puck whining and pouting ? That makes me a little dizzy.
I took Kai and whistled Ozi awake. "Come on boy, let's leave the baby here crying for his mommy. While we get us some dinner"
Puck looked at me and raised his eyebrow. "Seriously ? You're gossiping about me with your dog."
I give him a smile and mount Kai. "See you at home Noah." I put Kai into gallop. Ozi that little ball of fur runs next to me. God, that dog is so stupid sometimes. Look at his little legs. I keep wondering how he can run on those things.
When I arrive at the farm I make sure Kai has enough food to eat and leave him for the night. When I come closer to our little house I hear voices and when I walk inside I see four men standing in our house. They're dressed in green and beige uniforms with pointed helmets. They're armed with swords and they wear no boots which means they're Earthbenders. I look at the emblem on their tunics. They are soldiers from the Earth King.
When I walk farther into the room all four of them plus my parents are looking at me. Which scares me a little. My mom's eyes are filled with tears and my dad looks a little sad but also proud.
"Rachel ? Rachel Puckerman ?" One of the men asks me. I nod my head when he talks again. "Good. Rachel we're going to take you to Ba Sing Se. You're going to be trained. In orders of the Earth King."
I stare at my dad and he nods his head as a sign I have to obey and do what the guy says. I look to the man who told me the news. "May I ask why I'm getting trained. And why in Ba Sing Se"
The guy stares me in the eyes and answers "The Earth King will tell you everything you need to know. You get one hour to pack your stuff. And then we will start our trip to Ba Sing Se."
At that moment de door closes and Puck steps inside. "Hey everyone.. Did I miss something ?"
'Best Birthday Ever'
TBC
