Authors note: hey everyone this is just an idea I've been playing with for a while I know it's not long but I would really like some feed back on it its my first kind of fanfiction so while I can take criticism no flames please. Its grimmichi for all you guys and girls
Not always what it seems
The thirst, oh the never ending thirst. The burning sensation in my throat the roaring noise in my ears and the heightened senses sends me into a frenzy. I need to quench it before the beast inside me decides to hunt.
As I walk down the busy Main Street it takes all of my strength to not grab the nearest person and drain them dry I can see and hear the pulses of those around me their jugulars throbbing from the blood that flows through their veins and arteries. I lick my lips unconsciously, dragging myself into a side street and down the back alleys to get away from all the people my fangs throbbing with need 'shit I need to feed'. I take a drag of my cigarette and move myself to the red light district looking for someone who wouldn't be missed yes that's how I work I find a person who's on the very bottom and remove them from the equation yes it's horrible but it also benefits society so sue me.
After searching for what seems like eternity I find a someone a boy, I call him that because he looks no more than 19-20 his violently orange messy hair sticking out like a neon sign. I take a closer look at the child and realise he is completely alone. I take a closer look 'hmm?' It was strange regardless of looks usually there is no one who is by themselves. I look again and see that his eyes are distant and red and I understand 'ahhh' he's high and from the looks of it he's so far gone he doesn't know what s going on around him. I walk over and announce my presence 'yo'.
He looks up at me with a rather young looking face staring blindly at me 'hi' I swallow as the beast purrs with satisfaction he finds this one suitable.
The boy stares at me 'was there something you wanted?' He asks me like he already knows what I'm thinking
'I'm looking for some company for the night you interested?' I finish my cigarette and smirk at him
I see that he is thinking hard about my offer before looking back at me with a shit eating grin 'sure why not I'm not busy today' I chuckle and offer my hand
'Good lets go then' he takes my hand and I helping him up and leading him to the motel I'm staying in.
AN: i know it's extremely short but I would really like someone's opinion please :3 thanks