Alas my new story is finally coming up…okay so just in case the entire didn't show up out there here it is:
PS: tell me what you think if I get enough comments saying its good I will definitely write it but I didn't wan to just write something people thought was stupid. Oh and if you do like it I would like you to vote for me to update once a week or twice…once a week would make me a little bit more reliable…just so you know. Because I do have work school and…soon swim practice. So up to you
This takes place the summer after Bella, Alice, and Edward graduate. Bella and Edward are in love, of course-and there is no problem until Bella gets sick and– to Edward and his family only–she begins to smell. The reason? Bella is unknowingly the descendent of a werewolf from the Quileute tribe (from like the generation of when Edward first came to the forks area). But that doesn't matter cause girls can't become werewolves right? That's what Bella thought until she becomes one. How will this affect her relationship with Edward? Will they listen to his family and their instincts and leave each other or will they turn their back on what they once believed in to find a way to be together?
This is my first twilight/New moon fic so let me know if the characters don't sound entirely right and let me know if there is a way I could fix them.
And on with the first extremely short chapter of…well I can't think of a name yet
I snapped my eyes shut as the bright sun shone through the small window above my bed. I stumbled out of bed towards my dresser and pulled out Edward's favorite shirt and a pair of khaki colored pants and laid them out on my bed. I continued my stubble half awake towards the bathroom with my bag of toiletries to shower and take my time making my hair impeccably straight.
I climbed into the shower to do my usual de-stressing ritual which became a ritual after Edward had come back, I needed to calm my self and get rid of the constant nagging fear that he would leave me, again. I let the almost too hot water run down my back as I thought only of my fingers massaging the shampoo into my hair. But the whole ritual was wasted because as soon as was out I was overly excited about my 'date' with Edward, it wasn't really a date we were only going to the meadow again because it was sunny.
I sighed as the unwelcome butterflies invaded my stomach and made me nervous for no apparent reason. Wrapping a towel around my body I pulled out my blow dryer and the flat iron Alice bought me for the summer. I brushed through the thick tangles in my hair taking my time; I wanted to look as close to beautiful as possible. I blow dried my hair and tackled the frizzy monster with the flat iron and eventually managed to bring it down to the sides of my head.
I headed back to my room to change. I looked over at the clock on my night stand, 9:45 Edward would be outside in Carlisle's black Mercedes waiting for me in 5 minutes.
I rushed into the bathroom for a pathetic attempt to make me look at least a third of the way he looked. I smeared light pink lip gloss over my lips and pinched my cheeks for blush; Edward would like that better than artificial blush.
I heard two short honks come from the front yard and my heart beat accelerated. I flew to the door knowing the sooner I got out there the sooner I would feel the relief of being with him. I stopped right before going out, 'food' I almost forgot about my trite human needs when I was with him or going to be with him. I quickly grabbed a piece of fruit and a small bag of chips for my lunch and a soda out of the kitchen. Then made my way quickly to the door that kept me from seeing Edward, I yanked it open ignoring the protest from the still frozen door and immediately relaxed once I saw the car.
I walked with determined grace – until I got to the car – I some how managed to trip on a pebble I saved myself with the car knowing Edward wasn't able to move from his perch in the car.
Finally after what seemed like an eternity I reached the car door which Edward opened for me allowing his arm to glitter in the sun for a second. He smiled my favorite crooked smile as I climbed into the car, setting my meager lunch in my lap.
"What?" I asked with mock confusion, I knew full well he was laughing at my klutziness. I faked confusion as began to softly nibble on my chips to satiate my hunger.
"You are going to kill yourself one of these days you know that right?" he asked flashing his white teeth at me.
"Not if I get what I want…" I trailed off; he knew what I was talking about.
"I all ready made my offer, accept that and you're in…you would only need to convince your parents…" he trailed off as well, knowing I knew what his proposal was. "Buckle your seatbelt already…so we can leave." He said with fake anger and impatience to lighten the mood.
"Fine! Sheesh…impatient vampire." I grumbled under my breath as I pulled the strap across my chest for protection that I didn't really need. His driving was immaculate. Like he would crash Carlisle's car anyway.
He pulled smoothly out of Charlie's parking spot avoiding the big hunk of metal that was my beloved truck. Normally we would have taken it but the lack of window tinting made it impossible.
He made his way to the one-oh-one and went north. We sat in a comfortable silence and he reached over to intertwine our fingers while he drove. His speed rose to over 100 after he merged onto the freeway. My heart rate increased and I began to panic I tried to act normal but nothing got past Edward's ears; he chuckled and began to rub the back of my hand in soothing circles to calm me. To my dismay it worked, damn him and his perfection.
We made our way out of town and he turned right on the one ten, I remembered the directions from when he first took me, when I first saw his skin in the sunlight; I still remember it like it was yesterday, even though it was well over a year and a half ago, I picked up my apple and began to eat it as I remembered one of the best days of my short life…
(Don't own the next italicized passage from twilight, Ch. 13 pg 260…I changed the wording a bit though)
Edward seemed to take a deep breath, and then he stepped out into the bright glow of the midday sun.
He was shocking. I couldn't get used to it; it was as though he had millions of diamonds imbedded in his pale skin. He lay down in the grass perfectly still like a marble statue. His shirt open revealing his perfectly sculpted abs and bare arms.
I couldn't take my eyes off of his stunning beauty that day, I wonder if ill be the same today.
I looked out of the window and was surprised to see us coming to a smooth stop at the edge of the trail I had walked down over a year ago. Today was the first time coming back here together, though I had been here alone when he was gone, but we stopped speaking of those 6 months it was to painful for us.
He walked around swiftly to open the door. I sat for a moment then attempted to lift myself out somewhat gracefully, I was successful. He looked down into my eyes quizzically.
"What's the matter? You're so quiet today." He asked eyes full of love and concern.
"Thinking…" I replied airily as he turned to allow me access to his back. I climbed on with his help of course.
"About what?" he asked getting irritated.
"Still not used to it?" I asked my eyes glued shut and head nuzzled into his neck as he began his run towards the meadow.
"no, and its quite aggravating when my own girlfriend wont tell me what she's thinking…your thoughts are the only ones I want to hear." He said I could feel him slowing down I dared a peek up from his neck and looked up right at the moment we burst through the trees and ferns into the beautiful meadow that I hadn't seen since he was gone.
Edward let go of my legs so I could slide off his back. I hopped down and sat in the grass looking up and asking him with my eyes to sit next to me. He gave me my favorite crooked smile and plopped down with a deafening thud next to me.
"Ow…" I winced at the sudden unexpected noise and with him being so close to me.
"sorry." He said flashing his brilliantly white teeth at me. It was then that I decided to admire his sparkling skin. I took his hand like I had my first time here and began tracing the blue veins on his forearm. We sat there for what seemed like an hour in the comfortable silence the breeze lightly tousling our hair. I laid down next him and intertwine our fingers once again and began to snuggle into his shoulder breathing in his intoxicating scent.
After several minutes of just lying there he broke the silence. " so what were you thinking about?" he asked softly.
"Hmmm" I replied dazed by the sudden sound. I looked up at him with half lidded eyes drunk off his scent…or at least I felt like it. I was sure I was smiling like an idiot.
"What were you thinking about on the way here?" he asked again getting amused at my drunken manner.
"Oh… just the first time we came here…and then the months when you know…" I trailed off.
"hmmm…that was a while ago." He stated the obvious. I looked up at from his shoulder grinning at his attempt to lighten my mood; even though it wasn't really that dark of a mood. He looked back at me with his smirk and twisted his head awkwardly to give me a quick kiss.
He received the response he wanted; I blushed ferociously for no apparent reason. He smiled and laid his head back down and brushed his lips over my hair.
We stayed like that for hours looking up at the sky watching as it turned from the bright yellow of midday to the light pink of dusk. Then it happened just to ruin the moment, my stomach decided that it was hungry and let out a ferocious growl rivaling that of a lion. He looked down at my stomach amused and decided to listen the thing.
"Time to take the human home for dinner." He said as he turned his gaze back to mine, smirking.
My face fell and he could tell I was silently cursing my stomach for growling. But to show that my mood wasn't ruined I smiled at him and got up. He turned his back, smiling – which made my smile widen – I climbed clumsily on his back and tucked my head in the crook of his neck bracing my self for the ride back to the car.
(A/N) well how was it? I thought it was okay I'm sure I could do better…I thought it was really solemn not very lovey dovey but it'll get better I promise. Let me know if I should change any thing with the characters…because I don't want them to be OOC even though this is an AU fic…thanx luv ya peeps bye)