OK so I'm a big fan of the show and I have always wanted to actually write my own version of this show if I were to play a character. Luna is my favorite Loud sister of the family but I feel like we don't see enough of her so here is her story just not in her point of view. I created my OC for this show and it's about him but mainly the louds.(Obviously I don't own the show)

Chapter One: At First sight

Waiting in line is one of the hardest things people do for such outrageous events. Dressing up like dorks and standing in in a ten thousand mile line just to meet an actor. Or waiting in line for the DMV is hell in its finest form, complete with complaining, bumping into one another, and that one dude standing right behind you breathing hard on your neck, then concentration starts dripping down your back.

"yeah what a great way to spend your Saturday" Marcus thought to himself.

SMOOCH had recently just started selling tickets at the Royal Woods Mall and almost everybody in town was there. Marcus couldn't help but feel out of place. Being a musician himself he should have been yelling his guts out, jumping up and down screaming their name. Yeah no he was a professional and wouldn't dare stoop to that level.

He let's out a big sigh, "What the Hell am I even doing here, I don't even like SMOOCH." It's true SMOOCH may have been awarded the best band of 2016 along with several other awards but it was no where near on his list of enjoyment. Marcus had been "invited" by James, his friend/lead singer of their band "Silent Ritual".

Invited was too kind of a word for this matter, let's go with more along the lines of no choice. James had made a bet to which the loser has to do whatever the winner wanted, if Marcus hadn't lost he would have been having James clean his Yamaha Majesty 400.

He began to take out his pack of cigarettes, opened the top and pulled one out. He reached for his lighter and flicked it on about to light his boredom saver. He glanced up at the no smoking sign hanging from the stairwell rail. "Damn it" he muttered before putting out his light and tucking away his cigarette behind his ear.

His watched beeped, he stare at it and growled "Its only 4:30 and they still haven't sold tickets. Where is James? He should be here by now, it's bad enough I have to hold his spot but why does it have to be for one of the worst bands of all time!!"

He looked around at all the people standing in the line. Most of the fans were overweight men with big bushy beards and ponytails that had thinning hair at the top. If you weren't looking like that then you must have been the most clichéd looking rock star fan with the spiked mowhawk along with the nose ring and earrings

"Hey Marcus!" A loud semi high pitched voice mixed with a gruff deepness yelled over the crowd.

Marcus peeked over the clichéd rocker behind him and saw a young man running towards him holding a fanny pack to keep it from falling off.

"Finally" Marcus huffed, as the young man came forward huffing and puffing out of breath.

"Thanks Marc, I'm sorry I didn't come sooner...*coughs* t..there was traffic."

"Whatever Jim let's get this over with so I can go home " Marcus replied annoyed. The two teen stood in line for a matter of 30 minutes waiting for it to

Just as the line began to move Marcus heard yelling closer to the back of the line. He saw two kids, possibly 11 years old running up to this brownhaired girl. She was yelling something out to them.

"Yo bro!, I saved you a spot in line!" She then stuck up her hands with and form the devil horns.

"Who is that?" James replied scrunching up his face in disgust.

"I don't know" replied Marcus "but she has spirit".

The two teens got their tickets and headed towards the opening of the door. James quickly pulled a SMOOCH t-shirt out of his fanny pack.

"Hey Marc imma go change."

Marcus stared at his black and red shirt. "Really Jim? A SMOOCH shirt? He scoffed and laughed.

Jim turned back around annoyed "Well at least I have spirit, are you really going to poke fun at what I'm gonna wear when your threads are crap."

Marcus stared down at his outfit. He was wearing a Silent Ritual shirt with dark blue jean's and army boots completed with a long black hoodie unzipped that came down to his kneecaps. "Dude go change and I will save us seats."

Rolling his eyes James walked off into the men's room to change. A couple minutes pass and the boys go inside and find their places to sit.

The first song Marcus thought was decent but very slow. The way the lead singer sand into the microphone looked as if he were trying to eat an ice cream cone. He than stuck out his tongue jeering his head back and forth spraying a bunch of saliva.

Thinking to himself "Do we actually do shit like that?"

Marcus turned his head in annoyance. He glanced at James who seemed to be having a better time. James started to bob his head to the music and imitate everyone in the stadium.

The lead singer than announced the second song and they began to play. Out of no where these three people show up on stage.

It was the brown haired girl and the two boys that were with her fromother earlier. Whoever this chick was she seemed to be having a good time. She was so...beautiful. Marcus had seen several cute girls in his life but none of them seemed to compare to this girl.

He kept on staring and staring at this girl. Nothing could pull him out of this trance. Whatever spell she had shot over the crowd he was hooked.

All Marcus had left to say was "Damn"

This concludes chapter one and I hoped you all enjoyed it. Sorry if it wasn't mainly focused on your favorite Loud family member but hopefully they can appear on the chapter But for now see you in time.