Make Me Whole
A/N This was my most appreciated story before so I thought you guys would want it to be the first remake and continuation done. If you don't know I had an account previously and you can read about it on my profile. Therefore this story has previously been started and never finished and in re-doing it.
Dent to my hard shell
I had slowly stepped out of my car only to have looked up into about three hundred sets of eyes. I was so used to the attention I received when I first arrived at a new school. Sadly I always had the same thought; I wish I had someone here with me.
By the time I had fully gotten out of my car and had started to walk away my mask was up and ready. I put on the same expression as always, I have to in order push others away. Although, I really would prefer it for someone to try and break through. I wouldn't even care if I would be a human. You see I don't have the same need as other vampires; human blood doesn't work the same on me. I suppose it is because I knew what I was getting into, but I never really cared enough to look into it. You might wonder why, but then the fact is I don't care what you wonder.
I had lithely stepped up into the school. My dull eyes scanned the crowds of people, which had appeared the same as always, in my eyes at least. I wished there was a little more excitement with the humans. Then as if my unintentional wish had been granted, I spotted THEM. My eyes grazed them, without an emotional change of course. I was surprised, but my shell was rock hard by then, it made no difference. One unexpectation did nothing to the hundreds years built of my brooding exterior.
The group I had seen was Vampires. One significantly caught my eye. Not only because he was more gorgeous than the others, which was the complete truth. But he looked to be going through the same tribulation as I. I hadn't allowed my eyes to linger on them too long. That would not help what I was aiming for. By then I had continued on my journey towards the office and looked over the rest of the schools population.
The last thought I remembered grazing over my mind, was at last finale an interesting adventure, at least.
That was the day my prayers were answered, and God bestowed me a gift. And when I thought he no longer would listen to prayers from the dammed.
A/N now I don't want you to worry! Unlike my old stories each chapter will be at least one thousand words, excluding introductions and intermissions. This of course is an introduction. Tell me how you like the rewrite or if your knew , just what you are thinking about it. I still don't have a Beta so sorry .