This is my first story so I don't know whether I'm good or not so please criticize (but if you like it please make sure to tell me.). And please check my page!
It was a bright sunny day at the zoo all the animals were out enjoying the sunshine . . . except the penguins. They were franticly running around and bumping into each other. Marlene noticed this and disided to see what was wrong. When she got to the habitat , there was paper flying everywhere and skipper yelling out orders. In a hurry to grant skipper's orders Rico,Privet and Kowalski all ran into each other nocking them selves out cold. Marlene burst out laughing. She felt bad about it but she couldn't help but laugh. Skipper look away from his men and glared at Marlene. She stopped laughing at ounce and smiled sheepishly smiled. "Marlene what are you doing here?" skipper asked in a questioning tone. "Well I just noticed you guys were acting a little strange and disided to see what was wrong" "Well-" Privet said before Kowalski cut him off "well there are going to be six new arrivals and five it seems are scheduled to be droped off at our habitat" "ooooooooooooooh . . . wait what about the sixth one?" " it seems that one will be released in a new habitat south of the polar bears" Kowalski finished " and if its true they could be spys and if they are were out numbered" skipper shouted "ooooooooor there not spys and your just over reacting" she sayed sarcasticly slow "well maybe your just under reacting" skipper shot back "what ever, well im gonna go get our 'spys' some welcome gifts see ya later guys" and with that Marlene left to get ready.
This was really short but I promise they will get alot bigger than this.
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