I know this is short but read on and it gets longer!
I gaze across to the forest longingly. I remember when I belonged to ThunderClan. I left long ago; I was never truly accepted as one of them. I was an outcast from the beginning although I never noticed it till I became an apprentice. Goldenflower was the only one who protected me. I remember her sweet motherly smell and the warm milk she would give to my brother and myself.
I am still not completely accepted now, for my new clan fears that I will leave them too and betray all of their secrets like my father before me. I would not of course. I am too proud to do that, too proud to return to my birthplace where my heart aches and yearns to be. No, I made my decision a long time ago and I am not going to turn my back on my previous choice as terrible as it was.
I was too young, too frightened, too angry and too excited at the prospect of a completely new life to consider the consequences of my decision. So now I suffer these penalties of my choice too vain to return, so here I will forever remain.
The marshy land beneath my paws is not where I was born. No, I was born over in a land of forest trees and bushes. I was born under the shade of a bramble nursery nestled innocently by my mother's side. How I wish I could still be that innocent kit now. Yes, I was born in ThunderClan without my father and my greatest quest as a kit was to discover whom he was. Now I wish I had never found out. Discovering the truth was the worst mistake I ever made.
Hi! This story is Tawnypelt's story from when she was just a kit. At first it will be the books rewritten from Tawnypelt's point of view but somewhere along the line I will change The story line and make everything more interesting. But I'm not saying when! Please please review or I really won't update. This isn't a priority so if I don't get reviews I will lose interest. Three reviews for each chapter would be absolute heaven. And the more reviews the better the chapter! Review!