To all those who read and reviewed The Message: thank you for all your reviews. I apologize for the crappy, crazy attempt. I wanted to start something different and it ended up being something that sounded much like someone else's work. -_-U
I should say right here it was not meant to sound like someone else's work, I do not pilfer from anyone else's work. I find it very distasteful when people do.
Now as to why I posted that, I have no idea…really I don't…
It was actually suppose to be part of bigger idea, a crossover (sort of) of The Ring and Yugi-oh. Well not any more, it needed work. Lots of it.
So let's try this again…the right way.
My bad and thanks for the second chance,
Shadowwind
PS: The Ring and Yugi-oh are not mine, and I barrow them for my artistic amusement. Flames will not be tolerated, give a little kindness and you will receive kindness.
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In the Iron Dark
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Day 1 (Jonouchi)
Message From: Jonouchi85@bellasia.com
Message To: Gamehermitym@yahoo.com
Message sent: 10/11/03
Time: 10:38 pm
Yo Yug. How's it going in America? Any hot girls? He he ^-^
Hey, do ya know anybody with the email address JargonRational000@starmail.com? It looked familiar but I don't know where I say it.
Anyway I got an email from this guy and when I opened it, I thought I got the virus that's been going around!!
Oh hell! I almost died!! T-TU Thankfully it was this weird video with a poem.
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Message From: Gamehermitym@yahoo.com
Message To: Jonouchi85@bellasia.com
Message sent: 10/11/03
Time: 10:38 pm
Hello! ^-^ It's so good to talk to someone. I can't sleep and Yami is not helping. Sounds like you had a close call.
When did you get a computer? I thought your dad would not allow you to get a computer.
I don't think I know that person, I think I've seen that address too. What's in the video, nude pictures of your sister? He he. : P
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Jonouchi looked at the screen with dumb shock. Sure maybe he was expecting too much, but he was positive, absolutely certain Yugi would be able to help. He's the computer geek. Sort of…I'll just ask one more time to be sure.
He hit the reply button to send Yugi a message but as he started to type in the dark, the apartment began to creek and moan. Not like the after dark creaking and moaning that one would hear in the middle of the night but the kind made when someone is walking in the halls.
Jonouchi shot up with a start. It's too early for Dad to be back.
He stood there like a dumb idiot staring at his closed door.
Who the hell is in my apartment? That is not Dad. For he would be cursing and tripping over himself sound like and idiot.
Shit. Shit. Shit. It was all he thought as he slowly moved to grab the metal pipe he hid under his mattress in case of dire emergencies. His hands were sweaty and shaking and with each load noise he gave a petrified squeak.
However his fears were silenced as quickly as they came when what sounded like an argument erupted suddenly from the apartment next door.
Sigh. The Hirutani's are back, whew…
Jonouchi looked back at the blank reply window.
This is so stupid. It's just an email. What's the worse that can happen?
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Day 10 (Jonouchi)
Message From: Gamehermitym@yahoo.com
Message To: Jonouchi85@bellasia.com
Message sent: 10/21/03
Time: 4:31 am
Not funny Jonouchi. Where are you? I'm not opening that email with the video attachment till you tell me what's going.
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Message From: Gamehermitym@yahoo.com
Message To: Jonouchi85@bellasia.com
Message sent: 10/21/03
Time: 4:35 am
Come on Jou. Where are you? I know you can read this.
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Elevator gears hummed to life as a woman in a black suit walked out with a cell phone to her ear. Her red hair flowed behind her as her high heel clicked in steady rhythm.
"Smith, you could shove the terms of the agreement up their asses and they would still denied certain key-…yes, I know but I also know you realize that they will not be faithful to the terms even if you gave them more time."
Her voice echoed in the near darkness of the car garage as she stepped with frustrated force, passing black car after black car till she had her own black car in her sight.
"I know that's what he said but you of all people should-eh…nothing, I stepped in water." She shook her feet of the water and tried to step lightly in the puddle that surrounded her car. She opened her car and got in and right before she turned the keys she heard a strange beep. She tilted her head in confusion, "could you wait a minute, Smith?"
She opened her door and looked from side to side. It wasn't her car but it sounded close. The noise of the garage the garage became loader and clear. The ventilation system gargled, the hum of traffic below lulled and the airport roared somewhat nearby.
Just as she was about to get back inside her car was when it happened again. She knew what it was; it was the sound a computer makes when it got new mail. Confused she looked to where the sound came from.
A black and silver small laptop computer was under her car smack dab in the middle of the puddle of water. The monitor was bend backwards so the screen was facing the belly of the car.
The women sighed and reached for the cell phone she left on the seat of her car. "I'm back, no it was nothing. Someone left a laptop underneath my car…yeah well did someone at the office mention losing a laptop. Ah-huh…"
The women grabbed the laptop and tilled so she could see whose laptop it might be. She scrolled down to the email icon and was amazed at how many email the laptop received in five minutes. Hmm…must be Tenchi's, he's always the popular one.
However all thought ceased when she caught what appeared to be a tennis shoe from the corner of her eye just a little bit behind her in the reflection of the screen. Sure enough there was a blonde young man face down in the pool of water covered in dirt and blood.
"Ana, Ana!" Smith's voice rang out of the cell phone for apparently Ana screamed.
It took three days to determine the kid was from Domino City and another two to find out whom the body was.
Katsuya Jonouchi was dead.
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A/N: so what you think? Hate it, like it, please work on it… please be nice, it's been a while. ^-^