I'm giving it a shot. I'm going to try and write a long Vampire: The masquerade story. I hope it will make you happy instead of angry, I love the game, and I don't mean to cause any upset with people.

Though I have a feeling people might say it's corny…

This is slightly based of my time playing the game, so expect nonsense.

Chapter 1-The embrace

The group of teens laughed loudly at one of the jokes as they walked down the street, there were only three of them, but they were the typical teens that made everyone walk passed and hope that they weren't trouble makers. The teens weren't interested in making any trouble-just looking for some fun; however if someone did try to start a fight with them, they would be more than eager to grant that wish. It seemed ironic that Ace didn't-or couldn't-fight as much as he made out to be.

Nineteen in age, fair-haired brown colour and proportionally built, there wasn't much that subtracted him from society. He was well likable, a little too arrogant at times and rather lazy, but his friends seem to find a reason to like him and that was good enough for Ace. But there was one flaw he wasn't particularly proud of-his dislike to fighting. He had no problems with it; he watched wrestling a lot, and he was sure if the right moment came round he would try to defend himself, but in general he just did not like to fight. It was a fact he kept from his friends, they were into fighting with anyone and everyone, and what man didn't like fighting? So he grit his teeth and joined in with them whenever he could, at least no one took any notice on how badly he fought.

Ace stopped walking when a hand grabbed his arm and pulled him back roughly, he turned sharply and saw a woman holding his wrist. She had to be in her late twenties, short copper hair that curled at the front, deep crimson eyes that shone with a begging look, she wore a long trench coat of a dismal grey colour that looked like it had seen better days; threads and holes ruined the coat.

"Please…" She begged, her voice in a mere whisper and lost in all strength "Help me…please…"

"Come on Ace" One of his friends urged, getting rather impatient "Let's go".

Ace managed to shrug the woman's hand off him "It's your own fault you're in this mess. Leave me alone".

Ace slipped his hands back in his pockets and caught up with his friends, the woman however turned to him, her eyes now turning to a burning hate colour.

"Your pride will kill you!" She warned before promptly ducking to a nearby alley and disappearing.

Ace rolled his eyes, not taking her warning very seriously "Sounds like my mother" He muttered, getting a few chuckles from his friends as they walked down the path together.

Ace returned home when it became darker, still living with his mother it wasn't uncommon for his friends to use that fact to inflict some embarrassment on the male; but in all honesty the reason he hadn't moved out of his old home was because he didn't like the idea of leaving his mother on her own. They had managed to get through without his father, but he still had that growing concern that she wouldn't be able to look after herself without him being there to protect her.

It was like the usual day for Ace, his mother was out working late so he had the evening alone to himself. He was sat in the living room in front of the TV, switched to the wrestling channel as he talked to another one of his friends on his mobile; it was a pretty casual and normal time for him.

"Oh! Oh! Come on!" Ace groaned and rubbed his head "Bloody twat. Sorry, what?" Ace sat back and picked up the can of beer as he listened to his friend talk to him on the other line "No…Pfft, I don't care if she likes me she's a slut…okay, she's hot but she's also a slut and a skank" There was a beeping noise and he looked at his phone "Shit. Batteries low, hold on I'm going to find my charger".

Ace then got up from his spot on the sofa, quickly glancing at the TV before quickly jogging up the stairs to his room to find his charger. His room was like most typical teenagers rooms; messy. He cleaned it when he was told to, but it would be minutes before it returned to the state it was before. Stepping over the forgotten clothes and other small trinkets he had laid around his room he came to his desk, he opened one of the drawers and dived in before taking out his charger, only to hear a piercing beep and his phone went black.

"Hello?" Ace called down it, but didn't hear anything "Damn. Must've died. Oh well".

He climbed out of his room once more before returning downstairs, his eyes immediately glued to the screen when the crowd cheered lightly as he walked over to the socket and pushed in the black plug before attaching his phone to it.

"He better not be talking to someone else the git" Ace muttered as he played when his mobile phone lit up.

Then there was an odd feeling of dread, like a cold spark ran through him and whispered something bad was going to happen-it was right. Ace stood up and looked around, his eyes immediately setting on the woman who stood in the doorway. It was the woman from before; though the trench coat had disappeared and she wore something more fashionable in the form of a small purple jacket that cut down her breast and some blue leggings with high heels, though Ace didn't dare question why she had a clothes change, but more or less wondering how she got in when he was sure he locked the front door.

"Who are you?" Ace demanded as he looked around for something to defend himself with "What are you doing here? Get out!"

The woman smirked at Ace's fear "I told you your pride will kill you. It led me here to you. Remember this as your impudence eats you away, that every ignorant person will burn in hell!"

She then quickly disappeared; Ace blinked and looked around confused, not believing how quickly she moved. Feeling a little insecure about the fast moving intruder, he tried to head to the front door, but as soon as he moved a pair of arms wrapped around his waist and chest before feeling something long and sharp pierce his neck. He opened his mouth to try and scream and hope someone would've heard him, but the hand on his chest quickly moved up and slapped itself over his mouth to silence him. Ace's eyes widened as he struggled in her grip, giving all his strength to push her up against the wall hard and hope she would get knocked out, but no such luck. She only tightened her grip on the teen before she pulled her teeth back out of his neck; there was a short stifled scream from Ace as he felt the pain suddenly appear, liquid-his blood-ran down his neck and slipped under his shirt. He was dying, even Ace knew that, his body was becoming weak under the fear and he couldn't struggle to save himself anymore. The woman let go of Ace, he fell under his own weight, landing on his knees before finally falling over and lying flat on the floor as his blood poured out over the floor he laid on. He was weak, so weak; he wished he would just die quickly so he didn't have to watch his blood seep out next to him. The woman approached him as he heard her shoes make a squashing noise as it walked in his blood.

"That's what you get" She muttered, kicking Ace lightly.

Ace closed his eyes, not having a clue what had happened or why it had happened, small tears ran down his face as he was starting to lose consciousness. Relieved that he would die and that it would be over.

Then there was a loud bang like someone kicked a door in, Ace opened his eyes weakly and tried to look and listen. His eyes were blurred from the loosing of a lot of blood, and trying to hear was not as easy as it seemed, the peoples voices were more slurred as it went on. All Ace could tell was that the woman seemed to be arguing with another person, but they were mere shapes to Ace as he watched weakly. But then the second person attacked the woman, pushing her away from Ace all he could hear was her loud piercing scream for a few minutes.

Ace sighed deeply before closing his eyes, he could hear his own heartbeat, slowing down and dying quietly. Ace was rolled onto his back; a small grunt of pain came from him as his neck was moved slightly, someone opened his mouth gently and placed something against it until water dripped into his mouth. At first it felt like water, but as it gently slid down his throat there was a strong sharp metal taste to it, like how blood tasted.

A few more minutes and the blood disappeared; ace coughed weakly a little and groaned as he felt the blood run down his throat and into his body. The person had left as Ace heard the footsteps grow distant; how could he just leave? Ace thought, there was two bodies lying there-and he was clinging onto all the life he had-and his mother would come home soon. Didn't the person want to try and hide the fact on what had happened there?

Before Ace could do anymore last minute thinking, his head tipped to one side as he passed out. Something inside him made his body close down, he quickly blacked out and everything around him became inaudible and dark.

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What do you think? I know it's not going to be the best in the world, and I've probably made a few mistakes here and there, but I'm trying. So tell me what you think-aside from grammar or spelling mistakes-it would be much appreciated.

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