This is my rewrite of my story "MLP A tear of love", I've changed the grammar and a lot of other stuff, if you have a complain, FUCK YOU!
Please enjoy . (PS. It's pronounced [ ] - I-fie (fie like in field))
Chapter 1: A life worth leaving

I woke up, same old house, same old bed. I went downstairs and took out some bread, ham, butter and of course cucumber. I love cucumber and tomatoes.

After I made my sandwich I walked to the TV and start watching some of the My Little Ponies series, it was a nice Saturday morning for once as I sat and watched when Rainbow Dash did her sonic rainboom on the canterlot wedding.

I turned off the TV to hear the door knock, I decided to check through the mail box in the door, bad idea..

Suddenly a letter poked my eye and I fell backwards, when the pain finally went away I looked at the letter, it was more of a scroll than a letter actually. I opened it and read.

We have seen your pain in school and misery, you are welcome to be with us if you want. I will come over to see if you want to come to my home or not, I hope you will accept.

I looked at those words and then turned the scroll around, there was nothing more.

"Yeah.. sure he or she will.." I lay the letter on the table close by and went upstairs to play videogames.
I woke up, I noticed I fell asleep and I just heard a bottle break, now.. smoke? I ran down stairs and saw that my house was burning, I took my cellphone and my charger and ran out, I saw the whole thing was on fire, then the Molotov glass on the roof.. I sat on the street as the fire men arrived and putted it out, of course I get the blame.

I felt awful, I felt like I should take suicide as I sat there and looked at the ground, a wind blow blew something in my face, it was a pic of my mom and dad, with me, it was a little burned on the edges but you could still see everything important, I put in my pocket and fell asleep on the street.

I felt some one picking me up, I were too tired to care so I kept sleeping. I oddly felt warm on the thing I were sleeping on and strangely fell asleep.

I woke up, I had my eyes closed but I felt I were in a bed, I breathed out into a sigh, I opened my eyes and.. I were in Princess Celestias room, I immediately got up and looked around. I gulped and looked at my hands.. they were human.. but they had fur and my feet were hooves.

I had my Oc Ifys coat color, I got of the bed and stood on my hooves, it was almoste like standing as a human, it felt odd to walk but I got the hang of it. I decide to walk to the mirror and look, yes, I were my Oc Ify, but I were half human and half pony, I looked at my mane, the scar over my eye and the tattoos on my neck, arms and legs, it was awesome.

I started to smile as I saw I had wings and a horn to, I took a sweep with my wings and took off, I were flying, I felt a feeling I haven't felt in a long time.. joy. I heard the door open and landed right in front of Celestia, she was an half human and pony too, I directly hugged her.

"Thank you so much!" I say, I didn't notice I were just as tall as her, not until she actually hugged around my neck. Then I realized it, I just smiled, until I feeled her breasts pressed against me, they were huge!

I looked at her "So.. why am I here?"
"You are here to have a better life" she smiled warmly
I smile and hugged her again, I also kissed her cheek, she blushed up badly and smile.

I smile and I see some clothes and quickly change, it was a black hoodie and a pair of jeans, I smiled as Celestia gave me a key.

"Here, this is for your new house in Ponyville, I would really like to meet you again.. umm.. what was your name?" she looked at me as she tilted her head

I thought for a bit…
"Ify, Ify Shield"

She smiled "ok, thanks Ify" she walked out

I flew to Ponyville and saw the house, it was a big house and as I walked in it was filled with stuff like videogame stuff, some nice decorative stuff and a big flat screen TV, I felt a little spoiled but I didn't care, I went online on the gaming system and oddly they had my favorite game, Counter Strike Global Offensive, I bought it and started to play.

After being called a hacker and cheater by the enemy team do to that I'm good at headshots I turned off the pc and walked to my kitchen, I looked in the fridge and I got a surprise to see meat in it. I shrugged and cooked it, I took a bite when it was done but it tasted horrible, I spat it out, I made a quick salad and it tasted wonderful, almost like meat in the human world would.

I ate up and went to bed, I felt warm and cozy.. well that was until I felt a hand around my side. My eyes shout open and I turned around.

"Hi there Cutie" Nightmare Moon said. I literally jumped out of the bed and stood there.
"Luna!" I whined
"Sry, but Luna and I separated 2 years ago, I'm just Princess Moon" she giggled

*Oh jeez…* I thought. "Well get out of my bed and go home please.." I see that her face turn from happy to sad
"I.. I don't have a home.. I might be a princess but the castle doesn't have a room fitting for me.. and I've tried to buy a house.. but they won't let me.." she tears up alittle as she get out of the bed, her body was smoking hot. *It's a 1000/10!* I thought. She were walking down the stairs.

"No wait.. please come back" I said as I started to feel bad she walked back to me with a low face, she was alittle shorter than me, just a bit shorter than Celestia to.
"Will you tell me to go out the window?..." she looked down at the floor.
"no.. I will let you stay with me.." I smile

She shined up and looked at me "R-Really?!" I noded and she hugged me tightly, I felt her breasts press against mine and she cried out as she spoke "Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!" she smiled in tears, I hugged her back, I felt something strange about her for a second, but I ignored it.

End of Chapter