this is the first story I've made, Its not that good.
NINJA NIGHT OUT: TOTALLY OUT OF CHARACTER!!
Part I
It was a bright clear morning in the leaf village, and Naruto had just woken up to find a paper at his door…"Hmmm…
6:00pm- 10:00am, better put that in my advanced planner." Said Naruto quietly. The paper was an invitation to a ninja
night out planned by the hokage, Lady Stunade. Naruto was writing in beautiful cursive in his planner. "I hope they have
tea…" he murmured to himself. Suddenly a loud hammering knock was at Naruto's door. Right when naruto opened the
door, Sasuke burst in, his eyes filled with tears. "NARUTO!!" Sasuke ran straight to naruto and fell into his arms. Naruto
blushed. "your coming to the ninja night thing right!?". Naruto pushed Sasuke away and brushed himself off. "Indeed I am
coming." He said politely and dignified. Sasuke jumped into the air with a babyish smile and ran out of the room singing "
naru's coming naru's coming.!" Then Naruto calmly finished wrinting in his planner. Meanwhile Sakura had just woken up
too. "Ninja night out? What ever… I guess I will go there, it says they had food." Sakura then looked at herself in the
mirror, "ugh… ive gained like 20 lbs since stripeyboots has been writing this story. (Lol.)". but then she started thinking
about the meat and steak and the other foods that could possibly be there. So she decided she could go. Anyway, not far
from her house, rock lee and neji were tending to their personal garden. "So neji-kun, do u think the tomatoes look ripe or
the green beans?" Rock said in a high unpuberty-ish voice. "I think the cauliflower is the ripest, actually." Neji answered
with great concern. "by the way, I got a letter, its an invitation for us to go to the ninja night out!" he said suddenly
changing the subject. "EEEEEEEEEE!!" screeched rock lee in his soaring voice. Neji fell to the ground. "p-please don't do
that again!." Stuttered neji. Not long after they decided to go, Ino, choji, and shikamru were eating breakfast at a café. "Oh
it looks like I got a mail of piece." Blabbed Ino in her usual dumb slow tone. "you mean your crappy piece of mail!!" snapped
choji. "guys!! We shouldn't do that… I would never be angry, choji, and I would never be stupid, ino." Shikamaru said
arrogantly while swirlinga strand of hair between his fingers. "Does my hair look ok guys?" He said changing the subject.
"wait… it ALWAYS looks charming." He said looking down through slitted eyes at ino and choji. "Well what do I care about
ur pineapple head!!" choji shouted. "I got a mail of… uhhh" "PIECE OF MAIL!!" choji said so loud he couldn't talk for the rest
of the day. Shikamaru read the letter. "lets go, its inviting us to go to the ninja night out party! Girls will be all over me
there!" Shikamaru boasted, "I'm gonna go get ready, itll take several hours, see ya choji and ino." With that shikamaru
zoomed out the door with his head a litltle too high. Many other ninja were coming to the party too, including me, but I'm
mostly a stalker of sasuke and naruto… but yeah.
Hope ya liked the first part!
Tell me straight out if u hate it