This is my first fic ever. It may be really good, but it may suck. That's
where you come in! PLEASE, PLEASE read and review. Tell me if you like it.
Tell me if there are any fics I can read to get help. Also, if there is any
good romance/action/adventure fics about the goddesses in LOZ!!! So thank
you all and enjoy! : )
The Godesses of Hyrule
Nyrue walked into the room where her fellow godesses were sitting most likely discussing what she had come to talk to them about.
"Have you gotten the vision yet?" Nyrue asked.
"So all our dreams have been haunted," Din stated grimly.
"This is not good!" Faroe yelled. "What can we do?! We knew this would happen!! Why did we make this world anyway??!!"
"Calm it way down!" Din yelled back at the green godess. "Obviously we must reveal to someone who we are. We can hide in the city no longer."
"This is true, but who would belive us?" Nyrue asked. "We could tell the Royal Family."
"And how, my true bule friend, will we get into the castle to tell them? We can not go to the Royal Family of Hyrule."
"It seemes that the only people who would belive us are thoses who can only listen like the Deku Tree," Faroe said in the sadest tone you have ever heard.
Because no one wanted to hear such a said voice of their sister the Godesses pondered what they could do. There was no one they could go to. This troubled them very much.
"WAIT A MINUTE!!!" Nyrue screamed. "You are the smartest person ever, Faroe! We can go to the trees!!! They are wise and will allow us to build in their forest! After them the mountins, the water, the desert, the dead!! We have granted all of these things gifts no one else has. A Sage to keep them safe!"
"Yes we must go to the sages and give them a home," Din said. "We must give them Temples. This way if those that plauge us ever return, the people of Hyrule can call upon the Sages."
All the Godesses agreed that this was the answer. Those who would come would bring evil and such maddness that the people of Hyrule would surly die. They knew not what they would encounter but they had to stop the Demons from coming and destroying! END
Ok what do you think. I know it was not the best but help me be better by reviewing this story!More chapters will come so give me ideas of what to do.
The Godesses of Hyrule
Nyrue walked into the room where her fellow godesses were sitting most likely discussing what she had come to talk to them about.
"Have you gotten the vision yet?" Nyrue asked.
"So all our dreams have been haunted," Din stated grimly.
"This is not good!" Faroe yelled. "What can we do?! We knew this would happen!! Why did we make this world anyway??!!"
"Calm it way down!" Din yelled back at the green godess. "Obviously we must reveal to someone who we are. We can hide in the city no longer."
"This is true, but who would belive us?" Nyrue asked. "We could tell the Royal Family."
"And how, my true bule friend, will we get into the castle to tell them? We can not go to the Royal Family of Hyrule."
"It seemes that the only people who would belive us are thoses who can only listen like the Deku Tree," Faroe said in the sadest tone you have ever heard.
Because no one wanted to hear such a said voice of their sister the Godesses pondered what they could do. There was no one they could go to. This troubled them very much.
"WAIT A MINUTE!!!" Nyrue screamed. "You are the smartest person ever, Faroe! We can go to the trees!!! They are wise and will allow us to build in their forest! After them the mountins, the water, the desert, the dead!! We have granted all of these things gifts no one else has. A Sage to keep them safe!"
"Yes we must go to the sages and give them a home," Din said. "We must give them Temples. This way if those that plauge us ever return, the people of Hyrule can call upon the Sages."
All the Godesses agreed that this was the answer. Those who would come would bring evil and such maddness that the people of Hyrule would surly die. They knew not what they would encounter but they had to stop the Demons from coming and destroying! END
Ok what do you think. I know it was not the best but help me be better by reviewing this story!More chapters will come so give me ideas of what to do.