This is my first fanfiction ever so I hope you like it.

It is going to be an Au star wars The Old Republic and Prequels.

The main premise will be that Revan and the Hero of Tython follow the will of the force to create a new Jedi Order in secret on Tython which also becomes a secret. Except the new Order is more like a new society, relationships are encouraged, etc. They are confined to Tython's star system however so they become less of a peace keeping order and more like a secret force waiting to take on Palpatine in the prequels; with Revan as the head of the military(in which everyone is a jedi), and The Hero of Tython as the Grand Master of the new order. Once Revan and The Hero of Tython believe that they have set up the order well enough they choose their successors and go into carbonite to wait till the time of the prequels.

So basically as you can see, Palpatine is going to get his mind boggled and jumbled and he will probably have a heart attack from not predicting this ;)

Well hope you enjoy this and tell me what you think!


Star Wars: A New Age

Ch 1: Prologue

'Galactic War Rages'

Jedi and clone soldiers fight endless armies of droids.

'Deceit reigns supreme'

A dark cloaked figure with sickly skin and glowing yellow eyes blends in with the shadows.

'Light will be consumed'

Cloned soldiers march on Jedi, massacring them.

'If change is not made'

Jedi intermingle and train on a planet lush with wildlife and the force.

'Formed, a new race must be'

Jedi live and train together in families on the recluse planet.

'The race must be formed ahead of time in secret to prepare to war against the darkness'

Jedi are sent in secret by the Jedi order to join others on the Jedi's home planet creating two separate Jedi orders.

'The Gray Knight must act as guardian for when the time comes'

A man with dark robes and a Mandalorian mask is seen in command of a fleet of Jedi ships orbiting a lush garden planet.

'The hero must be the vanguard to salvation for the first order when the time comes'

A female Jedi with brown battle master robes over top of medium armor is seen leading Jedi away from armies of cloned soldiers.

'The Chosen One must hold back the darkness to allow the light to survive'

A young Jedi with darker traditional Jedi robes and an fiery streak to him faces the dark even as it seems to try to seep into him.

'Only then can the light be prevented from being extinguished and balance be found'

Revan gasped as his eyes flew open, the images of what he saw lingering in his eyes. Rubbing his eyes he recalled how he could have gotten here. After nearly 300 years of captivity by the Sith Emperor, he had been freed by a Republic Strike team. Soon after he had gone to the Foundry to build an army of droids to fight the Sith Empire with. Upon beginning his plan however; the Foundry was invaded, his greatest creation; HK-47, captured, and he himself was about to be struck down. That was when he had the vision; a vision of the future destruction of the Jedi order by cloned soldiers, of a way to prevent this future by finding and settling a force sensitive planet with Jedi.

He knew it was himself he saw as the supposed Guardian of , the Hero he recognized as the Hero of Tython for she was part of the strike team that originally rescued him. She would make a fine beacon of hope to the Jedi in this coming future, for the short time he was around her she radiated light like a beacon and seemed utterly determined to do whatever was necessary no matter the personal cost.

The Chosen One was the enigma however, Revan had like most Jedi; read the Prophecy of the Chosen One and would of thought that he himself was the Chosen One if it weren't for the obvious distinction in the vision. No one else however had been born with as many midichlorians as Revan yet so for now he would have to conclude that the Chosen One would be born closer to this future.

For now the best course of action will be to go to Tython since that is the planet that fits the outline of the planet in the vision best and so he could discuss this with the Jedi Council and hopefully the Hero of Tython.

Revan sighed as he reopened his eyes musing how his job is never done.

"How do you feel Master Revan?" Revan finally snapped open his tired eyes to take in his surroundings. He seemed to be on a neatly made bed in a small medical quarters, coloured in warm nature colours. Watching him intently were two Jedi healers; a Master and an Apprentice.

"Where am I?" He asked, wondering where the force sent him this time.

"You are in the healer's ward of the Jedi Temple on Tython."

'Well this certainly helps in getting to Tython and talking to the Council,' Revan mused to himself.

"Do you know how I got here?" Revan asked.

"You just appeared out of nowhere just in front of the temple." The healer answered. " You have been unconscious for two weeks now. For now we are keeping you here on bed rest to make sure you are completely healthy, so no wandering around yet."

Completely ignoring the healer's concerns; Revan slowly but with determination rose and swung his legs to the side to get off the bed he sat on.

"Let Revan be Master Dar'shyla, you have other patients to attend to, I assure you that I can handle Revan on my own." Someone said from the direction of the doorway.

"Yes Master Shan, we will leave you at once." Stated the healers as they left the room. Now thoroughly intrigued by this visitor, Revan turned his head to look toward his visitor.

"B-Bastilla?" Revan stuttered. Knowing this couldn't be right he closed his eyes and stretched out with the force and examined his visitor's force signature. While uncannily similar, it had its differences from his long gone wife. Blinking his eyes a few more times to make sure he is seeing properly, Revan re-examined his visitor again. Standing before him was a young woman dressed in some light but non-traditional clothing for a Jedi. Suspecting her identity though her name; Revan noticed how she looked half like Bastilla and had some of the characteristics of himself. Looking at her standing stoically before him; a near perfect picture of Bastilla, he could see some suppressed enthusiasm much like he felt toward her.

Thoroughly convinced he is looking at his and Bastilla's descendant, Revan decided to be himself and bluntly asked, "Are you my descendant?"

At this his visitor chuckled once again reminding Revan of Bastilla, as she stated with a grin rivalling Revan's own Great Grins – and Revan was a Master of such 'trivial matters'- "Just the way you act confirms it, I am Grand Master Satele Shan; Descendant of Revan."

"Grand Master eh? The force truly runs strong in our family." Revan stated with a smug look.

"We are Jedi however and must attempt to avoid being so smug about it." Satele replied trying to suppress her growing grin but failed and let a chuckle escape.

"As much as I am enjoying this family reunion, we can continue it later as I suspect this was not the only reason you came to see me." Revan stated putting on a stoic expression like his descendant.

"You are correct in your deduction Detective Revan Just after you appeared in front of the Temple; Master Rayeda Sett and myself had the same vision. It involved you, Master Sett and another only identifiable as the Chosen One. You appeared to have roles to play in a restructuring of our Order to save the future of the Jedi."

"Yes, I do believe I had the same vision, I assume that Master Sett is the Hero of Tython?" Revan asked.

"Master Sett is indeed the Hero of Tython and the knight who single handedly slayed the Sith Emperor." Master Shan replied.

"She is definitely one of the brightest knights I have ever seen, the force has chosen wisely with her." Revan stated, "now what must we do in regards to the vision?"

"I have determined as no doubt you have that the planet is Tython, so once we have defeated the Sith we will return to Coruscant. Once this time comes about, you and Master Sett will begin to form a new Jedi Order here on Tython according to how the force wills it. You will need to do this in utter secrecy however to make sure the Sith never find out so you will be cutting ties with everyone. For now however just rest Revan, as we still have a war to win."


So what did you think? Please review and tell me what I can do better.

Updates on this might be slow because I am also thinking about doing an AU Halo X Mass Effect crossover with Forerunners, ancient humans, UNSC humans, Covenant Separatists and Systems Alliance Humans vs Reapers, Flood, Covenant Loyalists and Indoctrinated Mass Effect Council Races.

So depending on reviews I might concentrate on this story or the forementioned, so tell me what you think!

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