K, this is my newest story. This is just a short chapter to see if I should go ahead and write the story. After you read this, please write a review, telling me if I should or shouldn't continue with this story. But I won't write it until my other stories that need to be finished get done. Then I promise I'll write the rest. K? ^-^

Full summary: The Cullens have always married and had kids within the family. Gross? Not the way they do it. They always adopt half. They have a certain amount of kids, then adopt someone to marry their kids. Edward loves Bella, more than his own life. The problem? She's not adopted into his family. Everything as going good, well, as good as being hated by everyone I the family. Then they adopt Tanya. She's supposed to be married to be married to Edward. The problem? He just might fall in love with her. Who will he choose? All human.

Disclaimer: Nope, don't own Twilight.

Enjoy!

BPOV

Preface:

Edward and I are your modern case of Romeo and Juliet.

You see, Edward comes from a big, rich, successful family. Everyone in the Cullens have always been successful. And I truly mean everyone. None of that would be a problem, if my family was rich, successful, and well known. We're not rich, somewhat successful, and we're mostly known for our graceful-ness. Or lack of it.

Well, actually, now that I think of it, even if we were, he and I still couldn't be together. The Cullens only marry within the family, go out within the family, and have kids within the family. It's not totally gross, they adopt half of the kids. They adopt the most beautiful, graceful, and most successful prone people. I, sadly, and not any of these.

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The doorbell rang out through the house, signaling me that Edward was finally here. Tonight, I'm supposed to meet his family, to announce that we are together, and plan on getting married someday. They don't even know that he and I even knew each other.

I ran down the stairs, careful not to trip. I flung open the door and into Edward's waiting arms. He leaned down and kissed me.

"Hey Edward!" I said, trying to close the already nonexistent space between us.

"Hi Bella!" He said, mimicking my tone. "Are you ready to go?"

"Not really. But, it has to be done sometime, so why not get it over with."

"Okay then, let's go." He said, obviously excited to show me off to his family.

"Hold on. Just let me grab my coat." I ran back inside and grabbed a coat and ran back outside, locking the door.

He held the door open for me. Always the gentlemen.

The drive was long, a lot longer that I'd though it would be.

There was a silence throughout the entire ride, but it was a comfortable one.

When we arrived, I nearly fainted at the sight of his home.

It was huge!

Sure, I knew he and his family had money, but crow, they have a lot!

When Edward noticed that I hadn't moved for awhile, he spoke.

"We don't have to do this tonight, we can try some other time. If you want."

I sighed. "No, we should get it done."

"Alright." He got up and opened my door, and helped me out.

The inside of the house was even more beautiful than the outside. I could see why Esme was considered the best home designer around.

"Mom! Dad! I'm home, can all of you guys come here?!" He yelled out through the quiet house.

Footsteps were heard throughout the house.

Finally the whole family came around the corner.

SO? Hit or miss? Anyways, I need review to know whether or not to finish the story. This is just a piece of what the first chapter really is, but I only put part of it, to see.

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