Hello and welcome to the first chapter of my first ever story, try not to be too harsh, though criticism is still welcome, in fact I want to be criticized, any way to get better. Anyway, I don't own once, Please R&R
Henry watched as Emma and Snow went through the portal to the Enchanted Forest, he watched as Regina let them back to their world, he watched as his mothers stopped the town from being utterly destroyed, he saw his grandfather kill Peter Pan, he saw his mom get her butt kicked by the Wicked Witch. Henry has seen all these things,wanting so much to be a part of it. And then, when he finally gets to do something, it ends up with "the darkness" being set loose on Storybrooke.
So yeah, he saw, he saw the Apprentice die, he heard him say to find Merlin, he saw his ma take the dagger, and he knew what she was doing. Ignoring the Apprentice, he ran, ran after his mother, towards the darkness. As she's explaining what needs to be done, he tries to sneak the dagger away from her, but she notices.
"Henry, what are you doing here?" said Emma.
"Making sure you don't do something you'll regret," he said as he rips the dagger away from her.
"HENRY NO!" she shouts as they all try to stop him from doing what they know is coming. She runs after him, but it's too late, as he plunges the dagger into the darkness. It seeps into him, as he gets sucked up only one thought occurs to him, 'My Family will find me, and save me. They always do.' And with a flash he's gone.
Sorry for short first chapter, but the next one will be longer. Hope you enjoyed, I think this is going well for a first story but, one way to find out. Feel free to criticize, I'll post chapter two as soon as possible