I'm sorry, but I'm just really annoyed and irritated, so I'm just writing this really short fic. This entire fic takes place in 3rd person, limited on Shulk and his thoughts, or what I think are his thoughts at least. Also, keep in mind this takes place in the near beginning of the game, so don't point out things that happen later in the game if you want to review.
He felt angry. No, angry didn't even cover how furious, how desperate he was at that very moment in time. Thoughts flashed through his head at a mile a minute, thoughts like "how could this happen?" and "why did it have to be her?" What exactly had happened?
Fiora had been killed by the faced Mechon.
He wanted to believe none of this was real, that it was all a horrible nightmare, and he, Reyn, and Fiora could go back to how things used to be, with them constantly hovering over him like mother hens, and laughing at Reyn's expense. But, unfortunately, it wasn't a dream. It was real. Colony 9 was destroyed, the Mechon were everywhere and Fiora was just… gone. Just like that. He looked back at the faced Mechon once more. Fiora's blood stained and dripped of its monstrous claws. A cry of "I'll KILL you!" tore its way out of his throat, and he charged at the mechanical monstrosity, without even thinking. The Monado melted and burned through the face-plate of the titan, inciting a cry of pain from the Mechon. The invader fled the battle, leaving its companions to deal with him, Reyn and Dunban. It was then he swore, to destroy all Mechon. To avenge Fiora, and Colony 9.
So, First Xenoblade Chronicles fiction, please tell me whatever I need to improve on. Again, I'd be a bit more light-hearted but I'm just in a really bad mood at the moment.