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It was almost time, I heard a quiet ringing noise. I watched as people fled a large building leaning against the dark crimson PT cruiser I called my car. I reached into the pocket of my dark jeans and pulled a cigarette packed out. I slid a single "death stick" ,as my blond friend called then, I put it in-between my lips. I pulled out a lighter, and then I lit it as I saw a blond headed figure come my way. He looked so beautiful, and he was my Blondie. I put the lighter away and blew out some deathly smoke. I smirked. All mine, and no one else's. And the blond walked up to me I met him half way.

"Hello, un!" He exclaimed hugging me around the waist. His book bag barely hanging on his shoulder. I took the cigarette out of my mouth and I leaned down a bit a kissed him full on the lips. I pushed my tongue past he's defenses and enjoyed our lascivious kiss. It normally was when we met after a long day of work, or school in his case. When I pulled away, licking his lips slowly as I did, he cringed. "Ugh, nicotine. I thought you quit, yeah" I frowned a bit. "I thought you were a girl till I-"

He let me go and pushed my lightly."Don't change the subject, un. You told me you quit!"I sighed and opened the car door and promptly jumped in as I waited for him to get in too. He got in and slammed the door shut before he glared at me. "Listen I said 'I'm trying to quit' I never said I did" I put the cigarette back in my mouth and blew smoke out my nose. He continued to glare at me as I started the car. "But you're not trying, un" he growled buckling up.

I pulled out of the school parking lot and started driving down the road. "Dei, sweetie. it's an addiction. I'm trying, I reall-"Bullshit, un!" he growled then reached over pulled the cigarette out of my mouth. I frowned as he threw it out the window but kept my mouth shut. "Give them to me, un" he demanded holding out a firm hand.

"What?"

"Give me your cigarettes. All of them, un!"

I sighed and dug into my pocket pulling out the pack of cigarettes. I handed them to him and he put them in his book bag.

"And? I know you have more, un"

I groaned and rolled my eyes. He shot me a look so I reached over him and opened the glove department. "There"

"Anymore, un?"

"The rest are at the house"

"Maddy you have to quit. Please quit for me, un"

I looked over at him, big mistake; he had the cutest face on. "Alright…just for you" I sighed

"Good boy. If you don't smoked a single cig for the week I'll give you a lil' something, un" he purred tracing his finger in-between my legs. I moaned and put my hand on his so he would press down harder. He smiled and started to unzip my blue jeans. He pulled my pants and boxers down a bit so he could reach easier. I moaned louder and arched my back as his cold fingers started rubbing against my hard member.

"Promise to tell me where all you cigs are, un?" he asked ticking his fingers over my erection, teasing me

"Y-yes" I groaned glaring at him.

"promise to quit smoking', yeah?" He slid his thumb over the slit whipping the pre-cum over the head.

"Y-yeas, please" I moaned bucking my hips a bit.

He smiled and started to stroke my member. I moaned arching my back and barely kept my eyes on the road. He pumped harder while rubbing the pre-cum over the tip with his thumb.

"Ah~ Dei~ faster " I moaned trying to keep my eyes on the road.

He did just as I told him to. He started to breathe on my erection, sending waves of pleasure through me. "Ah~ Deidara!" I moaned Cumming in his hand and on the steering wheel. Great. I panted trying to catch my breath back, when I heard a loud honking noise. I looked out the window on my side of the car and saw a green Porsche speeding towards us. I quickly hit the gas to see if I could out run the collision. It didn't help. Everything went so fast, I started to black out. The last thing I heard was someone calling my name. No. They were screaming it.

A/N: That's right people I'm rewriting it! I thought I could improve it add more detail. So for those who just found this story, thank god it was terrible before. Anyways I shortened this chapter to add suspense. Enjoy the rewrite.

Madara: so since you're rewriting it can I not lose my-

Tobifan: SHUT UP MADDY-DONO YOU'LL RUIN IT!!!!

Deidara: yea, Madara, un

Madara: =-= . . . anyways. Please review or I'll T. Bone your car with a green Porsche.