This is my first story so criticism is welcome. This idea came from what if characters from the Narutoverse gained powers straight out of American comic books. So tell me what you think
'Inner self'
"Tailed beast"
'Normal thought'
"Normal speak"
CHAPTER 1
ORIGINS PART 1
In Konohagakure the village hidden in the leaves everything was essentially a normal day just like any other. With the Academy in the mornings and at evenings a certain blonde eating 30 bowls of ramen. However when that night came something unexpected happened. A wave of a bluish/white light that was so bright that people thought it had mysteriously turned into day. But just as mysteriously as the light came it left. The Hokage quickly mobilized the active shinobi to find out what the light was and looked to see if the village had been attacked in any way. After hours of searching and finding nothing the Hokage dismissed the shinobi to rest and begin searching for an explanation again the next morning.
However the next morning would change EVERYTHING.
AT THE HOME OF NARUTO UZUMAKI THE NEXT MORNING
In his bed sat a blonde 12 year old student at the leaf village Ninja Academy. As he rolled in bed murmuring things about 'ramen' and 'Sakura'. His eyes finally opened and as he got up out of the bed he noticed a few things that weren't right.
'Why do I feel taller?' he thought to himself however he being half asleep didn't really think on it too much. However the next thing he noticed was the chill on his chest. His first thought was that he had simply unbuttoned it in his sleep, but when he turned and looked in his mirror his eyes nearly shot out of his head. He was several inches taller, possibly the tallest person in his class, and his body looked like it belonged to a professional athlete he had noticeable muscles but it was actually more like a runner or gymnast. He could only form one thought through the shock, and strangly enough the 9 tailed fox had the same thought at Naruto's new look.
"WHAT HAPPENED LAST NIGHT!?"
AT THE HOME OF SAKURA HARUNO
Sakura woke up to the sound of her alarm clock. Out of habit she slapped her hand down on it to shut it off hearing a slight CRUNCH. She sat up disappointed. She had been having a wonderful dream involving her and Sasuke, except Naruto and Ino kept popping up and ruining things.
'BUT NO MATTER WHAT TODAY IS THE DAY I WIN SASUKE'S HEART' she thought to herself.
'HECK YEAH CHA!' then she paused in thought, she had been sitting here for a while now and was hoping she wouldn't be late today. 'I bet Sasuke doesn't like girls who run late!' and with that thought Sakura turned to look at her clock to see the time only to find that her clock had been flatted like a pancake and an impression of her hand on the table. For a little bit she didn't do anything, she didn't breathe or make a sound, and then.
"AIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII"
AT SHIKAMARU NARA'S HOME
Shikamaru lay on his bed not moving but just looking up at the ceiling trying to quite his mind so he could go back to sleep he had already shut off his troublesome alarm clock but now his troublesome mind wouldn't be quiet. Now members of the Nara clan were known to be geniuses but this was ridiculous in the last minute and a half he had correctly solved equations to show the distance between the Sun and the Earth figured out how to technologically improve ninja uniforms and had come up with the basic designs of about 20 separate new gadgets to improve various functions of everyday life whether they were part of everyday life or shinobi life. Now most people would call this sudden increase in becoming the smartest person on the planet as an amazing gift. Shikamaru however had just one word to describe it.
"Troublesome."
The 3rd Hokage Hiruzen Sarutobi sat at his desk. The strange light that had appeared worried him, despite the fact that it apparently did nothing. Even so he had been in meetings all night over the light and he was tired.
"Just this last form and I can sleep for a couple of hours" he said to himself already beginning to dream about finally resting.
Only for his door to burst open and have a chunin standing there looking frantic.
"LORD HOKAGE IT'S AN EMERGENCY!"
This was recorded as the day that the 3rd Hokage face palmed.
CURRENTLY
Naruto Uzumaki: Super human condition, Enhanced senses and Danger sense.
Sakura Haruno: Tactile Telekinesis, Telekinesis.
Shikamaru Nara: Super human intelligence, Accelerated thought, enhanced mental capacity.
So let me know what you think. These three are my favorite characters aside from Kakashi. So who should get what powers, some people won't get any and it'll mainly be people older than 10 but younger than 20 gaining superhuman abilities so leave a comment please.