I'm sorry if my dialogue skills aren't perfect, this is only one of my first stories and I read stuff online for dialogues so it should be better than my first.
Olivia's apartment at 11:13 AM
It had been one year since Olivia had adopted Noah, and she loved him to death. She had just had this anxious feeling that she really wanted another kid. She really did want another child but she didn't know how Brian would react if she had told.
Olivia said, "Brian, you know, I've just been having this feeling that i want to adopt another child." "And I know you think it's odd, but I just have this feeling in my gut that it would be best," said Olivia hoping for a good answer. Brian said, " Well, I really don't know what to say to that."
"I hope that doesn't mean you think im crazy," said Olivia with doubt. Brian couldn't say no just looking into her beautiful brown eyes. "Well, I guess, but it would be a huge change, and if we do, how are you going to tell the squad," Brian asked. Olivia said "We'll deal with it when the time comes, I'll probably tell when i go back tomorrow." Olivia had 4 days off because of a minor injury Noah had gotten at the playground.
Precinct at 6:47 AM the next day
"Glad your back Liv," Nick said in a calm voice. Amanda asked, "How's Noah doing?" Olivia said, "hes doing great." "And um, me and Brian were looking into adopting again." "Well that's good," said Finn in surprise. Olivia said, "So what's this case?" "The girl was found dead with vaginal trauma in a river," said Nick
The conversation had ended just as Brian had rushed in. "Liv can we talk in private," Brian asked. She nodded to him and stepped outside. "Liv, I found a 15 year old girl that we should look into for adoption," said Brian in hope that she would agree to check it out. Olivia said, "Ok, ill meet at home in 5, I'll tell them it's family business." He nodded and walked to his car as she went to tell the squad.
Olivia's apartment at 8:00 AM
Brian had pulled up the girl on an online adoption site for New York. Her name was Emma and she had brown hair and blue eyes. She was 5 feet 0 inches and weighed 102 pounds. Her profile said that she loved country music, loved to sing, and loved to socialize.
"Well she looks like a sweet little girl," said Olivia with hope of adopting her. "That's why I mentioned her," Brian said nodding as if he knew they were thinking the same thing. "Why don't we call the number," Olivia said with glee.
After a long phone call, Olivia leaped into Brian's arms and said, "They accepted us!" Olivia and Brian had been in so much glee and couldn't wait to try and tell Noah as if he knew what it meant.