Ok I rewrote the story, and so I don't look like a jerk I had some help with this story from Disgaealord who is an awesome writer so go check out his work!
I walked outside as the driver opened the door. "Ahh are you ready for your big day?"
"What choice do I have Alfy." I gave a nod shutting the door. Today was no ordinary day, today could possibly be the last day of mydueling life. What I endured my entire life comes down to this dual to
determine if I attend dual academy, or not.I put my raven colored hair, a trademark of my family, into asmall ponytail as I studied my deck.
Maybe I should tell you my name. My name is Raven Princeton,Daughter of Norma and Daniel Princeton, sister to Slade and Jagger,and twin sister to think since my families rich I should be the happiest kid onearth but it's far from it...
-flashback-
Raven looks down in a corner as her father storms in the room with a letter informing him of her enrollment into dual academy "So you think you can go behind my back to just so you can go to this dual
school!"
Ravens eyes began to swell up," I'm sorry dad..dy I just want to dual," wiping the tears pouring down her face "it's not fair Chazz can
go why can't I?"
Ravens father couldn't believe it! How could she ever feel this way about dueling? If only should could just be more like her mother liked the dreamt. "Fine you want to dual, go ahead if you get in and prove to yourself you can go. Which means you must take the dueling entrance exam. And if you lose, you'll never play again…"
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" We're here," I moved my gaze out the window where my last test was, the dueling entrance exam.
I opened my door, not waiting for Alfy to come around, I already knew my opponent wouldn't be too easy if my dad had anything to do with it.
"Thanks Alfy I got it from here. Wish me luck,"
"You don't need any," I gave a quick smile before walking inside the building.
It was barely in there for a few seconds before my dueling opponent came to me, he or she I'm no sure of what the gender is. "Ahh you mustbe Raven your father told me a lot about you. He gave me specific
instructions on how your dual should go, so if you would please follow me to the dual arena,"
"we have a little problem," the guy in the suit running trying to whisper. But I had other things to worry about, like getting my strategy together.
"What? No the slackers late! If he wants a dual tell him to come back next year," instructing him as he turned to me.
"Wait he can dual with me. It can be a tag dual,"
Crowl couldn't believe a third ranked dualist could stand up and talk to him like this. 'She doesn't know what she's in for'. "Well that's fine with me," Crowler said giving a big smile "tell the slacker to meet us on the dual floor,"
I exhaled a sigh of release; I wont have to deal with this dual on my own. I followed Crowell down to the area where our dual was to take place. I looked over at a boy no older than me with two-layered hair with black and light brown, wearing a black jacket and dark pants.
"Whoa you're my dueling opponent? he asked putting his deck into his DuelDisk.
"Try partner," I said approaching him. I pulled my bag over my shoulder and pulled out my dual-disk, holding my deck, and equipped it to my arm. "My name's Raven."
"Ahh sweet! Mine's Jayden," exclaiming before turning over to Crowler "and are you the school the schools mascot?"
Crowler dropped to the floor (imagine it anime styleXD). "Slacker! I'm the head professor and department head of dueling techniques and I have a PhD in dueling,"
"Oh got it teach. Get your game on!"
(Crowler: 4000 Jaden and Raven: 4000)
"So eager but yet do you even know the rules to the game?" Crowler said giving a smile.
"Oh yeah, what are they?" he asked scratching his head. Always so eager?
"First you both will share lifepoints equal to 4000. Second, you may share cards on the field. But, cannot share strategies or help each other. Got it?"
"Yes we got it so lets get this show on the road. Ladies first!" I said drawing my sixth card "first I summon in attack mode Blackwing Shura the Blue flame in attack mode! And end my turn,"
"My draw!" Jaden exclaimed drawling his sixth card "and throw Elemental Avian in defense mode and throw down a face down," I looked over to see his winged-warrior hunched down in defense, as he played his facedown.
'Will this be enough?' I thought.
"Armature moves if you ask me," Crowler said as a card flew out from his jacket.
"Whoa sweet! How do I get one of those?" Jaden pointing to his funky dualdisk.
"This is an academy-issued dualdisk which you get from very high marks and a lot of hard work," 'though of course something you wont be seeing anytime soon!' he thought "now I'll use confiscation and pay a 1000 life points to peek in your hand and destroy one card!" Just then holograms of Jaden and my cards "hmm yes I remember these cards when I was your age. Now I destroy the monster reborn in both of your hands!"
I tossed my card into the graveyard thinking 'Well there goes that idea.'
"Now I play two cards face down and use heavy storm to destroy all facedown cards on the field!" Just as he played it a violent wind blew off all the facedowns on the field, including his own.
"Didn't you have your own cards face down?" I said, as the wind was gone.
"Yeah did you forget you had two cards on the field yourself?" Jaden giving a smile.
"Now you mustn't speak out of turn young scholars," as dark clouds surrounded the field.
"What's going on?"
"Yeah what's happening?" Jaden said,
"Nothings happening, Not Yet!" Crowler said as two golden snake things appeared on his side of the field "but that's all about to change. Ready for your next lesson?"
"You bet! I never remembered when learning was this fun!"
"Well yes I'm quite an excellent teacher. Now I sacrifice my wicked tokens to summon Ancient Gear Golem!" As his two cards exploded and replaced by a huge machine monster you only see in horror movies! I turned to the audience as I heard their chatter explode as he summoned that monster!
"Now don't be too scared of my Ancient Gear Golem," he said giving a sinister smile.
"Nal no way I've always wanted to take one on," I immediately turned to Jaden. Was he crazy? That things way bigger than any monster I had.
"Hahaha Golem attack mechanize malay!" as his monster attacked and destroyed his Avian. And then something happened I didn't expect. He used his special ability to take the difference straight to our lifepoints!
I turned my head from the dual, as I couldn't stand to see what happened next. But unexpectedly, I could hear laughter coming from Jaden. (Crowler:3000 Jaden and Raven: 2000)
"Boy I really want to go to this school now. You really know your stuff teach! Raven it's your move!" Jaden said as he gave me small wave. 'What's wrong with him? Cant he see were losing?'
"Ok here I go…" drawling my sixth card "I use double summon so now I play Blackwing Mistral the silver wing in defense mode and Blackwing Fane the steel chain in attack mode! And I play the field spell Mystic Plasma zone to increase my monster by 500 points. And thanks to my Steelchains special ability he can attack you directly! So go SteelChain Assault!" and he went flying in and attacking him directly. "Now I use my spell card Raptor Wing Strike to send steelchain back to my deck so I can bring one to my hand," I looked through my deck and chose one of my favorite blackwings "now I'm done."(Crowler:2000 Jaden and Raven:2000)
"Ha my turn," Jaden began to say. But as he reached for his card he seemed to be entranced by his card "ok my draw," and once he drew it he still seemed spellbound. "Well ok I summon winged kuriboh in defense mode,"
"You both don't learn," Crowler said drawling his card "Golem attack Winged Kuriboh!" And as he said that his golem gained momentum as he thrashed and destroyed his kuriboh. 'Crap! That's it for this dual...And my dreams...' "Check your dualdisk I think it's broken,"
"Nope. When Winged Kuriboh is destroyed in battle I receive 0 battle damage this turn,"
I gasped, "Sweet move!" I said, surprised he managed to think of life saving move.
"Amateur move, that little fur ball spared you one turn,"
"Hey don't talk about him like that!" Jaden said. 'Why does he care so much for that card?'
"Oh I forgot how young duelists are 'attached' with their cards,"
"I activate my trap hero signal to summon Element Burstinitix to the field!" Jaden said activating his trap "Raven go get him," Throwing me wave.
'The only way for me to help if only I draw a type of card,' I waited scared to draw the wrong card. But I knew if I didn't do anything Winged Kuribohs sacrifice didn't mean a thing. "Ok here I go," drawing my next card. 'Yes I drew it,'
"I play the spell card Stray Lamb summoning two level 1 lamb tokens in defense mode,"
"That's not going to help you. Do I have to remind you of my Golems special ability?" Crowler said, taunting me.
"They're not going to be here for long, at least one of them. I use of my lambs and Shura and synchro summon Blackwing Armor Master!"
"Wait What? Theres no such thing?" Crowler said nervously as my monsters were replaced to summon my monster. I moved my head as I could here them all talk about what happened.
-Flashback-
Raven finished off her latest opponent. She was on her way home before an older man with a red suit and long gray hair stopped her. "Ahhh Youngest of the Princeton family. May I interest you in a little dual?"
"Umm I don't know. And how do you know me?" Raven took a step back, in a gaze wondering if she knew this man.
"Dual me and I will tell you who I am,"
"Oh trust me they are so now my Blackwing Armor Master attack golem!" I said instructing my monster to attack a monster way bigger then him.
"You're monster still has 500 points less than mine!" Crowler screamed.
"I'm not playing to destroy you're monster!" I exclaimed, "my monster cant be destroyed by battle, and I receive no battle damage!"
"Then what was the point of attacking?" Crowler asked in confusion.
"Because when my Blackwing Armor Master attacks he gains a wedge counter. And if I remove a wedge counter I can decrease the Atk. of one of your monsters to zero! So Jaden can you take it from here?" giving him a smile.
"You bet!" drawing his next card "now I play the spell card the warrior returning alive to bring my Avian back to my hand. Then I'll fuse Avian and Burstinitrix to summon Elemental Flamewingman! Now I'll use Ravens wedge counter to have your golems atk. become 0. Now Flamewingman attack Ancient Gear Golem!"
Yes. My dreams may have a chance.
Normally I wouldn't rewrite a story but I reread and seen I might as well, it makes my story better. And once again please read Disgaealords story! He was really considerate for me to use a couple of his own ideas!
And P.S. I know synchros aren't real but I don't care its my story! lol