'Dark Doctor', my new Doctor Who fanfic! (A crossover will the online virtual world for kids called 'Neopets')

Summary: The Doctor takes Donna to the ancient ruins of Maraqua, but what awaits them is far worse than either of them could have imagined… The Dark Doctor is back, plaguing the good Neopians of the rebuilt underwater city, and only the Doctor, with the help of Donna and his inner pureness 'The Light Doctor', can defeat him… MAJOR TEN/DONNA!!

This will also be on deviantART at (remove the '-'s) http-:-//-www-.-deviantart-.-ponybelle-.-com-/

Disclaimer: I own nothing from Doctor Who or Neopets (except maybe my own neopets, but I don't really own them, the website does). I only own the OC's that will be in this fanfic... And the places I'll make up, they're mine too.

Chapt. One – Inner darkness

The exotic fish swam ever so gracefully through the underwater caverns, darting this way and that whenever a predator could be heard approaching. Stunning coral reefs glinted in the light, while the happy maraquan neopets played in them. All around, pets and petpets were spinning and dancing. It was joyous time for the locals, as pets from the other cities had come to celebrate and look at all the tourist attractions. It was also the only week of the year Maraqua had a carnival, and everyone loved it. If only they knew of what was to come....


"Everything is in order for the visit?" a man said. He had spiky black hair, and wore a black suit and tie.

"Yess sir. All tasksss have been completed," said a maraquan hissi. His name was Fanger.

"Good. Now I will have my ultimate revenge on the Doctor, if my name isn't... THE DARK DOCTOR! MUHAHAHAHAHA- *cough* *cough* you'd think, being over 900 years old, I would've mastered the evil laugh by now –HAHAHAHAHAH!"

A/N: Yay! I didn't forget to write this! XD I should really be organizing my school bag for tomorrow, but I can do that later... I'm BAAAAAACK! And I got three new Doctor Who novels called 'Prisoner or the Daleks' (read it already), 'The Slitheen Excursion' (just started reading it), and 'Judgement of the Judoon' (haven't read it yet), and they're all freakin' awesome!!

For the consideration of those of you who don't like Ten/Donna or just think this will become one big horror fic: You don't have to read this if you don't want to. Oh, and this is no horror fic. Tragedy maybe. Horror, NO! I'm just gonna shut up now...