"My name is Henry Mills and this is my story about how a Savior can become a ruthless Monster. A story that it's hurt me so much when I'm just thinking, but I need to write this, because I'm the Author and this is my job, to record the events, even if don't like to tell because it's just my fault, or isn't ? I don't know… You can tell me on the final of the story if is my fault or not…"
Story Name: THE FAULT
Chapter 1
I just become the new Author and I reverse everything that Isaac have done. But I didn't want to do that, I didn't realize what I have done, I was just a teen who didn't think on consequences and who forget this "The Magic Always Come With a Price!" and this price I didn't wanted to pay. When I reverse everything I didn't changed just the Alternate World, I changed everyone who were affected by the Author in past like Cruella now she can kill again, but this does not matter now because she is dead. My mother Emma killed her, but she didn't do that because she was dark, evil or something like that, she did this to protect me, she saved me and now, how I rewarded her by turning her into a MONSTER? The darkness from Lily was going back on Emma. Everyone is back to normal, less my mother or she is now who really is actually? I don't know I try figured out and I didn't answer me, maybe you guys who read this you will see the truth, but I can't say because it's too painful for me.
I see my other mother Regina who come to hug me because I saved her and everyone. "Henry you save me!" Regina says. "I'm so happy that you are alive, I can't lose you!" I say.
Then I was going to hug my other mother, but she rejected me. "Sorry kid but I don't want to talk now, I'm still confused" Emma says pushing me away. She didn't do that me before, she always wanted to hug me. "Mom what happening!" I say. "I don't know but I need some rest after this adventure" Emma says before she leave and go home, I was thinking she want to see her parents and Hook, but she didn't care about that, what she now care is about herself and nothing else, not even me. But I was too happy about how I was saved everyone from that Alternate World to think about why my mother is acting different. I was going with the Apprentice to talk about what I become, the new Author and my responsibilities. "Henry, now you have the power to change the word but you should not think about that. The power of the pen it's tempting isn't? You can't revive your father Baelfire" the Apprentice tell me. "Why?" I was asking. "Because he died in the real world, this is the real world no this book, see this book it's empty now but this book isn't and you must record…" CRACK! He didn't finish what he have to say because I was broken the pen and say "No one need to have so much power to change things like that!" "Perhaps we really find the right person for this job" the Apprentice says to me and leave me.
I was try to think about what I have done, what responsibilities I have now, was the first time when I was really thinking about consequences. I need to do some rest after this adventure like my mother Emma, that is what I was thinking she is doing but she have other plans. Meanwhile Emma enter in the house angry. "Emma! I'm sorry about what was happening there, we wasn't ourselves" Snow and David says. "I didn't really care what was happening!" Emma says. "But I killed your boyfriend!" grandpa says to Emma. "And… how I say I don't care, he is not my boyfriend, he deserve to die after what he did in the past, he is just a pirate" Emma says. "Emma! How you can say something like that, I know you like him!" grandma says to my mother, but she didn't want to hear more and wave her hand and teleport with magic to Granny's. "She really think that about me?" Hook appear to say. "I know that my daughter love you I have hoop she is just tired about this adventure" Snow says. "I'm sorry Hook, I'm really sorry…" David says to Hook. "You don't need to apologize mate, this wasn't really you!" Hook says to grandpa. "I think we need to go to Granny's to see what the others are doing and maybe we find Emma there" Grandma says.
Meanwhile In Granny's Maleficent and her daughter Lily hug each other as ever. "Mom I miss you I'm so sorry about what I say about you and my stupid revenge, I don't need that anymore I just want to be with you and lived here a happy ending" Lily says to her mother. "Oh my pure and innocent child! I'm glad that you see this like this now" Maleficent says to her daughter. "Mother I'm fell now different like the all darkness from me is gone" Lily says. Emma appear and Maleficent and Lily go to thank her, because she reunited a lonely mother with a lost child. "Maleficent, the only think that you need to thank me is that I didn't kill your child when I had the opportunity" Emma says with a hate on her face. "What? You wanted to kill my child? You the Savior" Maleficent says to my mother. "Mom we don't need to be angry on her now we can live here happy, we didn't need something to worry about and Emma I really want to thank you for spare me, I know I was acting bad and now I want fix this. I know when I was a child I creating you a lot of problems and you abandoned your family, but now Emma I didn't feel any darkness I finally feel happy" Lily says happy to my mother, but my mother says angry "Next time I will kill you!" she go to a table and try to thinking about what Lily says about the darkness. ,,She says she didn't have my darkness anymore after the adventure with the book, that seems like the darkness disappear, No! this can't be possible, darkness didn't disappear like that and I'm finally feel better like I'm complete now, I didn't fear to say what I'm thinking and I liked. I feel like the darkness has come back to me and complete me to make me who really I am. I think Henry reverse my darkness back to me, I don't know if he realize that but I want to thank him for that. I will go to tell him about that,,
Emma want to leave Granny's but she it's stopped by David and Hook. "Emma I want to say you this I love you!" Hook says to my mother but she respond with a grin smile "Perhaps you love me but I didn't love you, I never loved you!". "Emma!" Snow says to her daughter but before she can respond Belle come in panic to Granny's. "I need HELP it's about Rumple, he is almost dead". "That are good news, this imp need to pay for". "He says, if he died the Dark One will be free and start to destroy the town!". "Then you need my help, we need to hurry because if the Dark One is release we are doomed" the Apprentice come and say.
Emma, Belle, grandma, grandpa and the Apprentice go to Gold shop.
The Apprentice use the hat to remove the the darkness from Rumpelstiltskin. "Rumpelstiltskin was The Dark One for centuries will be hard for him to be the man who was before the curse" the Apprentice says to everyone. The hat it's feel like can't hold that much darkness and the Dark One it's released from the hat and star to wave around the room. Emma feel so much darkness in the air and it's feel so familiar to her like this is a part of her. "I want that power!" my mother says before she stab the darkness with the dagger and become enveloped by the darkness. "Emma NO! What are you doing?" everyone see her when she take the powers of The Dark One for herself. "This is what I always want to be, powerful not just a simple little Savior" Emma says with a evil smile on her face. The darkness take her and she disappear, but she lost the dagger with her name now on it Emma Swan, the dagger fell on the floor of the shop and everyone are scared about what just happen in front of them, Emma is the Dark One now.
If you liked the story please leave a comment with impressions about the story and my new try for a story. This time I like my style, I didn't use the dialogue like in other stories. Please let me a comment to know if you like my new style of writing I want to know if I need to continue.