Okay explanations first!

This is going to be a series of all of my rejected/unfinished works. Most of these were scrapped because I couldn't extend them out longer like I wanted to, they were just to cheesy, I couldn't get inspired, or they were just plain bad. I will have a brief explanation after each one telling about it, and you will get to see all of my failures that I'm usually too embarrassed to show the world.

Enjoy!

Oh one last thing!

These will be pulled directly from my folder and put on here with no fixing of the things that are so bad so you get to see why I scrapped them. (Although I will be fixing spelling errors before posting them, but that's it I SWEAR.)


Ditzy was nearing the ground. She had never been allowed out on her own before, not with her eyes the way they were. Ponies thought she would get lost or hurt herself. They never trusted her! To them, even to her parents, she was just a special pony who had to be protected.

She took a deep breath and closed her eyes, releasing the anger. It didn't matter now. She was away, if only for a little while, and she was going to enjoy every single minute of it.

Now close to the ground then she had ever been before, she soared over treetops, tilting so that her wing tips brushed those of the fresh summer leaves. It felt amazing! She had never before been able to fly as she pleased at whatever speed she dreamed of. The world around her seemed so different then the city above that she knew so well. It seemed so full of life. She caught a glimpse of animals all about her. Some busy and some just standing about watching as she zoomed overhead. She even passed by a few birds, content with an easy fly on a perfect summer day. She would have loved to fly with them, but she flew about leisurly all the time!

She dipped down to fly among the trees, to be among everything. She weaved back and forth, thrilling in her daring flight. The trees grew tall with many limbs, some weaving among each other and connecting the trees together like a sheild.

Looking ahead, she saw something sparkle in the distance. Excited,she flew faster, and burst through the treeline. Water scattered around her, and her bright mane and tail blew back, some of it shipping about her face as she arched her back. She felt an exhileration she had never felt before. She looked up and time seemed to stand frozen. She seemed safe surrounded by water as she was. The way that the sun looked through the smallest of droplets made her heart soar even higher. It was beautiful, and she could feel the droplets raining down on her wings and back, cooling her off as it spotted her coat turning it a darker grey like the clouds before a rain.

Time spead up again, and she flew on, relishing her freedom. Finally, exhausted and dry once more, she made her way back to her home in the clouds hoping that nopony had noticed her absence. She had flown far and was now heavy to her wings with exhaustion, but she regretted none of it. She would happily accept any punishment that came. Alighting outside, she let her wings spread out as she stretched tall on her front hooves,feeling the late afternoon sun on her as she stretched. Looking back at them, proud of her speed and agility, she gasped. Her cutie mark! It was there! She had gotten it!

Her mind went around in circles and she couldn't seem to think of anything at all. She just stared, her mouth hanging open in a wide grin at the water droplets now on her flank. The same water droplets from her flight through the waterfall, reflecting within them her freedom in the afternoon sun.


I don't really remember the original idea for this one. It did have a concept at one point that was going to be made into a longer, multiple-chapter thing (at least I think so) but...yeah I have no idea.

This is basically a little brainstorming piece I was doing to get the feel for what it would eventually become...Whatever that was going to be...

Hope you enjoyed getting a look into my brain, and this is something I am going to try to update every week or so since I get a lot of rejected ideas. But don't worry. I won't be posting (at least very many) ones that I scrapped because they're boring. I do want to entertain you with this.