Hey, I am back. What a two weeks it has been for me. Since Tyler is working back at his old job, I now have him as a boss. And the store we work in is undergoing a huge retro fit.
We're only two weeks into it, and Tyler already got injured.
On Wednesday, he was drilling into a support beam for a shelf, when the drill bit suddenly snapped, and drilled right through his left thumb, going in right above the nail on the left side, and came out near the tip of his thumb. I wasn't there, but from what my co-workers told me, he was just laughing the whole time, making jokes.
But now because of it, he has lost temporary us of his index finger and thumb, and still has a small shard of metal inside. And the sick idiot, for a laugh, sent me the photos of the injury. I almost threw up on my computer because of it.
So this is my series re-edited. And there is a few things you should know. Redemption and Lost are no longer part of the series. This is the best I can do without having to completely re-write the story. I decided not to change too much, because I figured it shows how much I improved as a author. I got ride of the spelling errors (a lot of spelling errors) and added a little more depth.
But like I said, in order to make it really good, I would have to re-write the whole thing. This is all to prepare for the final story, which the trailer, incase you didn't see, is posted on my profile.
Enjoy, and now it should make a little more sense.
Chapter 1 No Control.
Dave gave a long and tired yawned as he drank his warm coffee. He could feel a small boost of energy, but it was hardly anything. He set his mug down on the counter, reaching for a knife as he spread some jam on some bread for his kids his kids as he prepared their breakfast.
It has been seven months since Alvin received his powers. Seven months had passed, and his control over them didn't seem to be getting better, it seemed to be getting worse, and sometimes, violent.
Every time Alvin had a nightmare, the whole house would shake and rumble. It was like a earth quake was was going on in their house. Everyone would also notice items would randomly burst into flames into the point of almost a inferno and then go out with no fire damage. The items felt like they never even touched fire, they were untouched.
Things in the house would suddenly turn into little back particles, disappear and reappear days later. The most scary part though wasn't all that, is was when Alvin tried to regain control, he would suddenly panic and the problem would only become worse, causing chaos.
Just the other night, a cup of water began to boil on it's own, so much that the hot water was spilling over the edge, burning almost everything it touched. Alvin tried to make it stop, staring and concentrated on the cup, trying to control what was going on. But he suddenly panicked and the water in the cup exploded with such force that the cup shattered in three large shards, and dust.
These problems also were happening at school. Computers would go crazy, some short circuiting and sparking. The PA system would make weird sounds, like erie whistles, static, and sometimes, voices that sounded like Alvin speaking.
Lights would explode into dust, suddenly shattering like in those horror movies.
Students were getting scared, some saying that there was something unworldly in the school, while school officials were blaming everything on faulty wires. But the students were getting scared, some even refusing to return until everything stopped.
Dave sighed, wondering what he was going to do with Alvin. He had no idea about any of this stuff. The only one that did, was the one that gave him his powers to begin with.
"Guys, breakfast" he called out, as he placed the meals on the table.
After only a few moments, all the chipmunks came running into the room, climbing up the table, and sat in front of their meals. Alvin however just slowly walked in, looking tired and stressed. His shoulders were slumped down, looking lifeless.
They all stared at him as as he slowly walked in, his eyes looking heavy and blood shot. Everyone could tell the stress was taking it's toll on him, and it was quickly wearing him out.
They were all worried for him, especially Brittany. She felt so scared and worried for Alvin, she really cared for him and hated to see him in the state he was in. She missed his usually lively and fun loving nature.
Simon also notice something about Alvin that no one else seemed to be noticing. Every time when Alvin's powers began acting up, two of the tiny triangle in his hand would glow, but the third on the top remained normal, staying dim as always.
He tried to figure out. Wishing he knew what it meant, what it means, but ever since he saw giant robots and his brother come back to life, he wasn't sure of much. It was like everything he knew was wrong, and he had to relearn everything.
Alvin quietly jumped onto the table and began to eat his meal, not bothering to say a word. Doing this routine now wasn't so unusual for him to everyone. The only time he seemed his old trouble making, fun loving self was when he was playing and having fun with his family, it seemed as if that is how he would forget his troubles and be himself again.
"So is everybody ready for school?" Dave said trying to sound cheerful to break the tension, hoping to take everyones mind off of Alvin's troubles.
Everybody gave a cheerful reply except Alvin, who only groaned in frustration.
Dave looked down briefly, before he stood up, and sat down near Alvin. There was silence for a moment, as Dave just stared at his son, then gave a small quiet sigh.
"Alvin, I know it's hard to go to school now that you are still struggling with your new gifts." Dave then he paused, finding it very hard to try and find the right word for Alvin. "But what am I going to say to the school? 'Alvin's missing school because he has unearthly powers.' I can't do or say something like that, no matter how much I want to."
"You can say I'm sick and won't be attending school for a while" Alvin said pleadingly as he looked up at Dave with desperate eyes.
"Alvin, we don't how long this will last. You could be missing school for months because of this. And when the media finds out, and they will find out, they will surrounding this house constantly, trying to get a photo of you. And not to mention the most important reason. If you lose control again, you could destroy this house more. And I don't think this house can take much more."
Alvin looked down sadly.
Everyone could hear him give a disappointed sigh, as he turned back to his breakfast. He remained quiet for the rest of the meal as everyone continued on with their morning conversation about what they had planned for the day at school.
After they were all finished they got dressed, and then grabbed their stuff they needed for school and went with Dave to his car.
Everyone got in as Dave started the car and began to drive to the high school. Along the way, Simon was talking with Jeanette about their planned science experiment in science, Theodore and Eleanor talking about their cooking class, while Brittany sat near Alvin as he looked out the window, looking like he was staring into space.
Brittany looked towards him. The sight of him always made her heart race and her face burn. She had been feeling that way for the last few months. When she first noticed the feelings, she had thought long and hard about what it meant. It took a few months of thinking, but she now knew why she was feeling this way towards Alvin.
Alvin leaned his head back against the seat and closed his eyes, giving tired sigh.
Brittany studied his face closely, then noticed something seeping out of his closed eye. Was he really crying? She almost felt a tear escape her as she looked at him, wanting desperately to try and help him, but not knowing what she could do.
She knew why she felt the way she did about Alvin, it was obvious to her. She thought it was only a simple crush when she first met him at school, but she knew that those feeling have grown. She was in love with him. Just thinking about it made her feel warm and fuzzy. Those words made her happy.
Then a thought hit her head, making a cold rush go through her. What if he doesn't feel the same way? What if his powers will change him so much he isn't the same chipmunk that she knew and loved?
These thoughts pondered in her head as the car pulled up to the school.
Dave climbed out of his door, opened back, letting them all jumped out.
Alvin just slowly and sluggishly hopped out and and followed behind about a meter away from his brothers and the girls. "Alvin wait for a moment please" said Dave said, as he looked down. Alvin stopped and slowly turned to face Dave as he kneeled in front of him.
"Alvin, I'm not going to pretend I know what your going through" he said in a caring tone, knowing it was also sounding a little harsh. "But I want you to know that your strong, and you will get through this. You have gotten through worse, you can do it."
Alvin placed his paws in his pockets as he looked up at Dave, and quietly began to speak. "I wish I could believe you Dave, but I don't even trust myself right now. I caused so much trouble, and you are all suffering because of me. I don't think I can get through this."
"Wait Alvin" Dave replied, "don't be so…" But before Dave could finish, Alvin turned and slowly walked away, not bothering to listen to what he had to say.
Dave sadly sighed as he got back into his car, and drove off, wondering what he could to to help his son.
Later on, Dave walked back into his house, wondering how this day will turn out. Was this day going to go more smoothly than the others, or will it be worse? He took of his coat placing it on the hanger as he began to walk towards the couch. He paused for a brief moment, as he looked toward the kitchen saw his phone giving a small flash.
He slowly made his way over, picking it up off it's holder, pressing the messages and listened. He could hear a man with a heavy german accent speaking, his accent so heavy, he almost could barely tell what he was saying.
"Hello, my name is Claus VonTroffen, I represent Shimlackez Records in Germany. My company have listened to your band play, and ve vould like to offer a deal of produce chipmunk records in our country. You would have a all paid trip to Germany in first class where we can discuss deals. Please call us back at our help number to reply. Thank you for your time Mr. Seville."
Dave groaned as he set the phone down. He was now caught in a dilemma. If he went to Germany, he could open music opportunities to the kids like more money. But then there was Alvin of course. He couldn't pull him out of school and take him to Germany just for a records deal, and he couldn't just leave everyone behind without someone to watch over them, with Alvin in the state he was in.
Dave went to his room and laid down on his bed, trying to think of what he should do.
Nobody he knew could watch them since most were unaware that Alvin was some sort of super being.
Claire was off in England visiting friends, and Toby and Julie were moving into there new house after their recent marriage, they would be too busy.
He turned to his side and then saw a small slip of paper resting on his night stand. He slowly reached out, picking it up and held it up to his face, immediately remembering what it was.
It was the card that thing had given him months earlier, and told him to call if there was any trouble. Dave thought for a few minutes. Should he really have a giant robot watch over his kids? How would it get into the house?
Then again, it was this being that gave Alvin these powers. It probably know what is going on and be able to help Alvin.
Dave shrugged as he grabbed the card and dialled the number on it that was printed across the front.
He didn't even know what the name of this thing was. How was he going to introduce himself?
The phone rang. Each ring feeling like it was several minutes. After several long rings, a deep familiar voice came through on the other end. "Hello Mr. Seville. I had a feeling you would call."
Dave raised his head in surprise "H-how did you know it was me?" he said in shock, wondering how this thing knew he would call? Unless he knew that what was happening to Alvin.
"That's a bit complicated to explain, but I know why you are calling, because Alvin can't control his powers."
Dave was in disbelief, but he decided not to ask questions. It was better just to get this thing down here right now, and get this thing sorted out. "I am going to take a wild stab, and guess you probably know I am phoning."
"You are correct Mr. Seville. You are asking me to help your son, but to watch over your kids."
Dave stood up, looking out his bedroom window, seeing if there were any large robots standing outside. How could this thing know all this?
Dave sighed and asked "How soon can you arrive?" feeling like he was making a mistake as soon as he said that.
"Go to the front door. There you will find the answer."
Confused, Dave immediately hung up his phone, and went straight to the front door. He braced himself for a moment, expecting something large was on the other side.
Dave took a deep breath, then slowly opened the door. As soon as it was open, he almost jumped back when he saw a young man standing in front of the door looking like he was in his early twenties. He held a cell phone next to his face, wearing a white t shirt and dark blue jeans. He was fairly built with short dirty blond hair, standing just over six feet tall with a smile on his face almost turning into a laugh.
"Alright" Dave said angrily, taking a threatening step towards the unknown man. "I don't know who you are, or why you are here, but get off my property" he said pointing toward the way out.
The young man just continued to smile, as he placed his phone in his pockets. "You asked me however to watch your kids" the young man replied, his voice sounding like a normal average voice with the smile still there.
"Listen" Dave snapped, trying to stay as calm as he could. "I don't know who you are, but I know your not the person I was talking to on the phone with."
With the smile only growing his face, his voice suddenly changed to the deep voice he heard only seconds before. "Never judge a book by it's cover Mr. Seville."
Dave's eyes widened as he fell to the ground, "Holy crap" he said in disbelief as he looked up at the young man "Who and what are you?" he asked, unable to comprehend what he was seeing.
The young man just continued smiling as he helped Dave to his feet, and over to his couch. "First off, my real name is Tyler Pauwel, And I am from Earth living in Canada."
Tyler explained his whole story to Dave. Dave was slowly starting to understand, though everything was still a bit over whelming for him. After several minutes of expelling, Dave couldn't find the right words to what he just learned.
"You've had quiet a, 'colourful' life" said Dave. "I am sorry to hear about you and your friend though" he said. Tyler just gave a small shrug, the smile on his face only dimming a little.
"Not much that can be done now for him. He is so blinded by his powers and corruption, that he doesn't care about anything else. It is why he should never have gotten them. He was a good man, but was never meant to gifts like that" Tyler said, his voice sounding pretty neutral.
His smile then brightened again, as he gave Dave a quick tap on the shoulder. "But getting back to why I am here. It is no problem for me to watch over you kids while you are away. I know what Alvin's going though, I can help ease everything. Make things a little easier for him."
Dave let out a sigh of relief as he stood back up.
"Thank you, Mr. Pauwel. You have no idea how this is going to help me and him. I'm going to get packed and I will send a message to the school letting the kids know you will be picking them up."
"Actually" said Tyler as he stood up, "just have the message say that they will know who it is when they see me. Alvin is the only one that knows what I really am, but they don't know my human name. Plus my given name doesn't sound exactly normal."
"Yeah sure, I'll tell them" Dave said, as he went to his room.
As Dave started to pack his bags, he felt a wave of relief wash over him. He was relieved that he found somebody to watch Alvin. He wasn't sure about leaving the kids behind with a stranger, but he figured that this man gave his life to protect his kids. He wouldn't have done that if he was a bad man.
Once his bag was packed and sent the message to the school office, he grabbed his bags and walked into the living room where he found Tyler siting on the couch, reading a book with the title RCMP Training. "RCMP, what's that?" asked Dave bring his suit case to the door.
Tyler looked looked up, smiling as he put down the book and got up. "Royal Canadian Mounted Police. I'm in training right now to become one" Tyler replied with a smile, as he helped Dave with the rest of his luggage to the door.
"Wouldn't that be a little redundant?" asked Dave as they both stepped out the house. "I mean, you are a powerful guardian, do you really need a job."
Tyler chuckled. "Well, I have to make a living for myself, and I always wanted to be a cop since I entered high school. Also, when you get these powers, you want to still hold onto the parts that are still human."
"Your not human?" Dave asked, as the neared the road.
"Technically, yes and no." Tyler replied. They then reached the curve, only waiting for a few moments before the cab began to pull up.
Dave and Tyler immediately put the luggage into the trunk, and as soon as it was all in, Dave turned to Tyler to give him a hand shake, one last bit of information.
"They get off at three and usually do their homework when they get home" he said as he got into the back seat.
"Don't worry about a thing Mr. Seville, they will be fine under my care." With that said, Dave gave a thankful nod, shutting the door as the cabe drove off. Tyler watched the cab pull away down the road.
And as soon as the cab turned the corner, Tyler suddenly began to run down the road, his whole body began to glow as he rolled forward, his size quickly increasing. And when the glow disappeared, what was him was now a blue transport truck with red flames at the front driving down the road, heading for the school.
There, that is the first chapter. It is a little more smoother then it was lat time, though I still think it needs lot of improvement. But like I said, it is the best I can do without having to re-write the whole thing.
It is hard to believe a year ago, I was working on this. The updates will be daily, until the whole series is done.
Later :)