Author's Note
This is probably pretty common but, oh well. What if Tris lived in Dauntless? What if Uriah was best friends with her and not Marlene? What if her best friend's brother Zeke got a new best friend the year of his initiation? I don't know if I want her with who or what? So I will let you guys decide but, read what she thinks before you pick one.
"Hey Trissy, hate to ruin your sleep but," Just then someone bashes me with a pillow. I screech taking them by surprise. I jump on top of them and wrestle with them to the ground.
"Fine you win!" Uriah my attacker gives in. "I do, don't I?" I gloat, like always.
He laughs "Zeke's choosing ceremony is today and I say we see it!" I chew on my bottom lip. I don't like missing school but, whatever I'm Dauntless.
"Wait how did you get in?" I locked the door last night when I figured out mom and dad weren't gonna be here.
"Well I," a loss for words huh? "You let yourself in!" I exclaim. "Yeah," he shrugs "What about it?" I roll my eyes and kick him out of my room so I can get dressed. I pull on a black tank top and some black skinny jeans. I grab my tennis shoes from under my bed and when I come out Uriah has brought some breakfast.
"Cake for breakfast?" I ask with a hint of hunger. He tosses me the plate and I barely catch it. That would have been a disaster. I send him a glare before digging in.
"Where do you get this stuff early in the morning?" I ask some cake trying to fall out of my mouth. He shrugs laughing at my face. He always has everything and I'm not sure how he gets it tough... When we finish eating we race down the hall, of course he beats me. We stop in the pit to wait for everyone else. Like Marlene, and Lynn. He pats my head. I send him a glare. "I'm not your dog!" I bark out like one. "Sure..." He laughs quietly.
He apparently told them earlier because everyone gets up before me I guess. I see them round the corner, and we jog over to meet up with them meet up with them.
"Zeke's big day, huh?" Marlene asks. Uriah grins. He loves being the center of attention. "Well it's Shauna's too!" Lynn huffs. Oh yeah Lynn's sister I forgot it was her year too.
We walk outside the compound and I see the train coming. We all jump on. I am last and Uriah helps me in.
Next stop Abnegation.
Author's Note
Short I know but, I am a little busy I should be updating soon. Thank you to anyone that reads this first chapter. Please review to tell me if you like the way I am writing it, or have any suggestions for better! ~Kayla Chapter update: I fixed any grammar issues and made it more readable. And more fluent. So one rewrite down!
