Hi everyone...welcome to my first fanfiction! This is a Fang x Max...the point of view changes each paragraph.
Enjoy!
Fang grimaced and started to lift Max up. They had been practicing self-defense, and he had hit Max a little to hard. It being 3 am might have had a little to do with it, and her flying all day looking for Total after he chased a female dog, but he hoped that she was okay. In the middle of picking her up though, he stopped and grinned slyly. It was time for a little…payback, say. He chuckled and set Max back down. Then, he leaned down and kissed her.
Max woke up because something warm was pressing on her mouth. She opened her eyes and saw Fang with his eyes closed, about 2 inches away from her face. She was tempted to smile, but knew that that would only succeed in Fang to stop kissing her. She smiled anyway.
Fang opened his eyes quickly. Great- Max was awake. She seemed to be liking it though…Fang decided to go against his nature and deepened the kiss, using his tongue to try to pry Max's lips open. Max obeyed instantly, opening her lips just wide enough for Fang to get his tongue in.
Max was enjoying this immensely. She struggled to sit up so that it would be easier to kiss Fang. Briefly she wondered what would happen if anybody in the flock came out of their new home. She shrugged mentally and kept on trying to sit up. Fang immediately helped her, still trying to get her mouth open even more. Max obeyed his insistence again, opening her mouth wider so she could let his tongue in farther, and let her tongue in his mouth as well.
Fang was delighted, not that that is a word usually used to describe him. This was extremely pleasant…maybe he should kiss Max more often. He squashed that thought quickly. If Angel was anywhere nearby…at that thought, he broke the kiss.
Max frowned. Why did Fang break the kiss? She opened her mouth to ask why, but Fang answered by whispering in her ear. "Angel – let's go somewhere else." Max nodded, and they flew up into the air to find a more private space to kiss.
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