*Chapter 1 revamped with a new element of excitement! Mega evolution in the Hoenn Region! Will Tom endures Steven Stone's Mega Metagross? Will Mega Ampharos Beat down that tough metal without losing trusts of Tom's Pokemon?

Chapter 1: Champion Tom and a Birthday Boy!

"person's speech'

*thought/actions*

-Telepathy-

translated poke-speech

(My thought)


I'm now standing in this huge, rocky arena. Facing this giant, cyan coloured metal with a large Iron Cross across it's face. Both me and Mega Ampharos suffers in fear, the terrifying Aura of Steven's Metagross.

Steven: "Metagross, you ready? *Points the Mega Brooch at Metagross*"

"Meta~~~~"

Metagross flashed, then all of his legs points toward Ampharos, his claws sharpened, with a Booster like Rocket at the back. And start floating, his Cross turned into gold like Mineral, he grown a large spike at the bottom of the body.

"GROSSSSS"

Metagross Mega Evolved into Mega Metagross!

Steven: "What would you say now? Champion Bound Tom Hudson!"

Steven: "Let's do this Metagross! Use Meteor MASH! Throw your best shot!"

"Metaaaa~~GROSSSS!"

Metagross does a Mega powered swing and Mega Ampharos took a critical hit from it, landed on his feets but fell to his knees short after, yet eagerly waiting for my command. When he took the hit, the pain knocks me on the floor, feeling the pain Ampharos is enduring. I underestimated Steven Stone when I was back in Granite Cave, even though Aggron is easily with Earthquake with my Whiscash, but I did NOT expect he got a bloody Metagross by his side...No wonder he's the champion of the Hoenn Region.

Tom: "C'mon Ampharos don't quit yet! Metagross is the only pokemon he got left, we can win this! He might be very powerful, but do it for our family's legacy! Do it for peoples who have aided us! Remember Brendan and Ash! They helped us to get far to this Pokemon League, you can't quit like that! Remember where I'm from, remember who I am! I'm Tom! One of the surviving Champion-Bound material!"

Steven: "Metagross! Finish him off with Hyper Beam!"

Tom: "NO! Ampharos Dodge it!"

Ampharos turned around and smiled at me, he didn't moved a single bit at all. Suddenly, a spark of electric surrounded Metagross, and Metagross stopped charging.

Steven: "Metagross! No! He's paralyzed from the Thunders that Mega Ampharos brought down a while ago!"

Tom: "Good Job Ampharos, now use Dragon Pulse!"

Metagross cannot move from the paralysis and took a direct hit from Dragon Pulse, a large cloud of smoke broken out.

*I stares at the smoke and hoping Metagross dies by that direct hit, as cloud clears away, it is completely different from what I expect.*

Tom: "WHAT?! How can he not be dead?!"

Steven: "Hahaha, I am surprised that you can deal that much damage to my Metagross. But this is not over yet, Metagross! Use Rest then eat the Chesto Berry!"

Steven: "Now use Hammer ARM! Boost yourself up then smash that Ampharos into pieces!"

I am desperate but to pull the last Max Revive out of my bag, and revived Ben from the instant death of the Armaldo's Water Pulse, hoping that reviving him would help 'melting' that big fat heavy metal Pokemon that humiliated most of my team.

As Metagross heading toward Ampharos, a huge shadow covers the light, and I pray that Ampharos would dodge that.

Metagross is moving closer, and closer, almost the range of hitting zone, Mega Ampharos can hear my pray, he quickly slide behind Metagross, and throws out a Thunder Punch, launching him to the wall of the arena, which also made a dent.

Tom: "Great Job Ampharos, come here, I'll give you some treat!."

I healed him using Max Potion, when I looked at the dent, that Metagross is gone. And before I can react, Metagross dropped off from the ceiling with boosters firing from his back, then he used Hammer Arm at a very high speed.

Tom: "AMPHAROS! WATCH OUT!"

Ampharos tried to slide under him, but it's too late...Metagross smashed him so hard that it made a dent below Ampharo, when Metagross jumped off, I found Ampharos fainted...

Tom: "You have done a fantastic job Ampharos, you can rest in peace now..."

Steven: "So..What pokemon have you got left for my Metagross to...shatter?"

Tom: "Hmph. You got me this time, I won't lose though! GO Ben, do your best!"

"MAAGMORRTARR!"

Tom: "Ben, use Fire Blast!"

Ben used Fire Blast, the flame travels very, very fast that Steven can't even react to it. The Flame hits Meta Metagross, and the fire did not extinguish on it.

Steven: "Now you are on flame...great. Metagross, extinguish your flame then use Earthquake!

Metagross rolled around the floor and the fire extinguished, then Metagross jumped up and slammed the floor, making spikes of rock raging toward Ben.

Tom: "Ben, evade the earthquake by jumping on to obstacles, then use Flamethrower!"

Steven: "Use Flash Cannon before he can use it!"

Tom: "Use Hyper Beam to Launch yourself up high! Aim at the floor but at the same time aims to counter the Flash Cannon with Flamethrower that Metagross fired!"

Steven: "What?!" A Loud clouds of dust broke out, Metagross can see barely a thing.

Ben hangs around the ceiling and recharges. He waits for my command while taking the risk of falling off.

Tom: "Use Flamethrower as a booster to gain speed then strike down with FIRE PUNCH!"

One of the Ben's Cannon opens up, and fires rages toward the ceiling, giving him large amount of boost in speed. Then he closes the cannon, his cannon now starts to go on flame, and it flashes brightly, Metagross got blinded by the smokes, and Steven points at Ben.

Steven: "USE METEOR MASH TO COUNTER IT! THERE!"

Ben swings his cannon while Metagross smashed Magmortar with Meteor Mash and a crack sound is heard along with a cry. When it's all over, both Ben and Metagross lies on the ground fainted with a large crack on his head with Metagross...

A movement is seen from Ben, trying to retrieve his Sitrus Berry I gave him earlier on Elite Four while facing Glacia...

Ben snatches it and eats his Sitrus Berry, he stands up with tiredness, but at least he didn't fainted.

Tom: "It's finally over... Brilliant job Ben!" I runs toward Ben and his ability Flame body sets me on fire, I did not resist and keep hugging him. I never felt so relieved when i'm on fire, likewise when I got set on fire by Team Magma's Pokemon. At the same time, I feel invincible.

Steven: "*Dumps water on Tom* Good job Tom, you have done a great job for going this far, I can't believe your Magmortar has destroyed my Mega Metagross, it's a fantastic battle with you, Tom Hu...No...Champion Tom!

Tom: "Yeah thank you for extinguishing me, I guess this is it...here I am, beaten the champion." A feeling that is hard to describe...Invincible? Victorious? No... I might have hurt most of my Pokemon's Feeling...Especially my Gardevoir...who's I would say... 'Almost' dead due to the fact that she created the black hole and shove most Steven's Pokemon in... It's lucky that i'm the only remains of the 'Voice-type' Telekinetic experts that can stop a Pokemon from death... But we will live on. Because for now, I'm Champion Tom!

Lily rushes in and looked at all the mess and a fainted Metagross.

Lily: "Hey Tom, here's some advice before you fight the champ...could that be...have you beaten that champion already?!"

Tom: "..."

Steven: "..."

Lily: "HEY! That's not fair! I thought we meant to go on the Hall of Fame together"

Tom: "Hehe sorry Lily, I'm too victorious to be patient, maybe next time."

Lily: "Nah I'm just joking tom, seriously! Congratulation, you wouldn't have made it that far if it isn't that Mareep I've gave you and the rare Ralts our dad gave you as your birthday gift!"

Steven: "Tom are you ready to step on the Hall of Fame?" I nodded.

Steven: "OK let's go then. Oh Lily I'm sorry but I can't let you in because only the champion can walk in the hall of fame."

Lily: *Groans*

Lily: "Oh well I can't do anything could I, I might be jealous but I WILL beat you one day Tom!"

As I walked into the hall of fame, resting my Pokemon onto the machine, I suddenly thinks about the start of my adventure, how I've got here, and how I got my Mareep and my perfect Ralts...


*flashback*

"Hello my sweetie, wake up! It's your 7th birthday, everybody is waiting for you." I wake up with a blur vision.

"What time is it mom?"

"It's 10 o'clock, let's go get your tooth brushed up and yourself changed, then we'll..." I suddenly interrupted.

"I KNOW! My birthday cake!" I ran off before she can even grab me.

I rushed off to the toilet and I brushed my teeth on my own, then I ran back to my room and get changed quickly.

"Sweetheart, wear whatever you want today, because it's your day where you will live with another...I say 'friend' together in your life!"

*I wonder what is it? I can't wait!* I ran out and see a pile of presents stacked up neatly at a corner, my heart is filled with happiness

"MOM! COME OUT!" She heard that and rushed out.

"What's wrong sweetie?" I pointed at those gift.

"Are those presents for me?!" She nodded.

"Yes Tom but you have to wait until your friend and our relatives to come." I nodded but I can't wait until I opens the present.

At 2:30 pm...

"Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to Tommy! Happy Birthday to you!" A loud cheering voice shouted toward me as I wish and think about what I want.

*I wish there is Pokemon in one of my gift*

I take a very big breath, and blow the candle with one large blow. Then large applause and clapping started up.

"Congratulation Tom!"

"Happy 7th Birthday!"

"You are growing up fast Tom!"

*I look at myself through a mirror* I have a brown hair, I'm roughly 4'5" with a... I would say square face, a normal sized body and a small feet...I snapped out of it, my mom handed me a plastic knife, aiming at the cake waiting for me to take the knife and cut it while everyone's staring at me.

I sliced the cake and another applause started up. My dad walks in and hand me an oval present.

"Happy birthday son, here's your present! Open it and take care of it!" I nodded hard and tears off the wrappings, found an eggs light blue on top half and white at the bottom half, and orange triangle thing at the middle, excitement filled my heart, and I can't wait for it to hatch.

"Happy birthday sweetheart, here's a Pokeball, you can use the Pokeball when the egg is hatched!" I put it to my storage bag carefully.

"Thank you mom, dad! I will take care of it with all my life!" They smiled as I run to my bedroom and place the egg onto my bed as well as putting my pokeball into the draw next to my bed.

At 9:23 pm

"Happy Birthday brother! I nearly forgot to give you my present to you, here's an egg, I found them randomly in a grassy pitch, take care of it for me please?" I turned around and I saw Lily walked in with an egg, I takes the egg and put on the left side of my bed facing the wall and cover it with my blanket, then I turned around, facing Lily,she has a messy blonde hair, a pretty short, but very intelligent young girl, she's 4"4, similar height to me, she loves me as a family, she always buy me gift whenever it's Christmas or my Birthday.

"Lily why don't you keep that egg? Don't you want to raise a pokemon yourself, you do know that you can even challenge the Pokemon League if you are good enough with this eg..." Dad interrupted.

"Tom, how many times do I have to tell you NOT to mention Pokemon League in this house? I tell you the last time. Don't you dare challenge, or even mention about the Pokemon League because you are STAYING in this house. I gave you the egg doesn't mean you can go out and wander around Hoenn and go battle other trainers. You are still young and you have a lot to learn, forget about Pokemon Leagues and go study in the Pokemon Trainer school first, then we'll think about letting you off to fight other trainers." My eyes is full of tears but I resists to drop it, mom rushes in a push my head toward his stomach, hiding me from my dad's anger.

"C'mon husband it's his birthday, don't make him cry like normally you do to him. I know he's 7 already but it's his dream, he wants to be the champion then let him do it, but obviously not now, all he's acting is excited, can't you let a child having excited moments?" Dad thinks with a red hot face with smoke coming out of his head.

"No, no pokemon leagues, no Champion and all those rubbish stuffs! I don't want my son to get hurt during his adventures. You do realize that there are all those 'Team Rocket, Team Magma and Team Aqua trying to scam people's pokemon and Tom is NOT an exception!" Mum replies calmly, hugging my face as tight as possible, and I saw Lily rans into me and takes me out of the room along with my 2 eggs. I can still hear them arguing...

"Are you seriously concerning about this? Officer Jenny are all over the place protecting peoples from harm!" My dad instantly shouts at her.

"Officer Jenny are RUBBISH! How many people's pokemon get stolen everyday?! Do you understand the pain of Trainer's pokemon got stolen by some of those ruthless, rude and idiotic brats?! All they do is steal pokemon for MONEY! What if Tom's Pokemon got stolen! Have you ever thought about his safety? Ok ok ok let's calm down a bit. What would he feel? Let's think about only family. Would he like his pokemon being torn away by those idiots? Can you afford to repair Tom's feeling? No! Absolutely no! Money can't buy happiness and most importantly. Love, money can't buy love and friendships." Mom came down with tears dropping out of her eyes, and spoke to me while hugging both of us.

"I'm sorry Tom and Lily, your father is right, you can't challenge the champion unless you are able to fight the grunts that belongs to Team Magma, Team Aqua and finally Team Rocket. C'mon let's get some sleep now both of you, you have school to go tomorrow. Let's all settle down and we'll discuss this later on."

I put on my pajamas and my shirt on, pulling my blanket up to my neck, and holding both eggs next to my arm, thinking about what they would look like when they hatch...

To be continued


I revamped this chapter due to the fact that there are indeed PMs for Mega Evolution, there will be OCs in Future chapters. I'm still learning toward creating OCs so this is one of my Practise Series to work on, writing about Pokemon, it's been probably my dream earlier of my age but since I have bloody GCSEs these might be able to help me on creativities. But off from Reality! Hope you guys enjoyed this piece of 'revamped' Mega writing and I hope I'll see you again!