Dearest
What is the Havens?
Is it not a place
Of peaceful rest
And safe tranquility?
Nay, the path that ends
Undomiel chose;
She followed me not.
Estel now has her;
Together they shall fade,
And become but a memory.
My heart is cloven in two,
For I, her father, was not
Worth living for.
The choice was a gift,
Yet how would it be
If she had it not?
I would be watching her now:
A bloomed flower of intricate craftsmanship.
Yet she is lost.
To sail with me suited her not.
The pain I must bear is too much!
I cannot endure.
A/N- this is a short poem of how Elrond felt when he sailed away from Middle Earth. This is my first poem so plz tell me wut I'm doing wrong! (
What is the Havens?
Is it not a place
Of peaceful rest
And safe tranquility?
Nay, the path that ends
Undomiel chose;
She followed me not.
Estel now has her;
Together they shall fade,
And become but a memory.
My heart is cloven in two,
For I, her father, was not
Worth living for.
The choice was a gift,
Yet how would it be
If she had it not?
I would be watching her now:
A bloomed flower of intricate craftsmanship.
Yet she is lost.
To sail with me suited her not.
The pain I must bear is too much!
I cannot endure.
A/N- this is a short poem of how Elrond felt when he sailed away from Middle Earth. This is my first poem so plz tell me wut I'm doing wrong! (