My first fanfic. Please review and tell me what you think? This is a darker side to Mulan, everyone gets captured. Many killed. Will Mulan still be able to keep her identity a secret? Will they find out? Or will she save the day?
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Mulan POV
An ear splitting shriek broke the eerie calm of the night. Heart pounding, head reeling, and my stomach churning, I try to regain my not to hyperventilate I brace myself to hear another tortured scream pierce the night. Surprisingly none came. That's a first, I thought bitterly to myself. How did I get myself in this situation?! Just the other day Shang, Ling, Chien-po, Yao, and all the other men who marched into battle with me. How did we end up getting captured, mutilated, and tortured?
Shivering, I pull my knees to my chest, trying to stay strong, just knowing it would be me next. Obviously I would be the logical choice, smallest soldier of the bunch. Thank God they didn't know I actually was a she, not a he. I still felt terrible for deceiving Shang and the gang, but I had to. I would have been killed otherwise, and all my hard work to protect my father would have been wasted. Not to mention dishonored my family clear back to my beginning ancestors.
The door, the black cold, bleak, unmoving door, opens up. A scrawny man walks in, trembling like a leaf being blown in the wind.
Sorry this chapters really, really, really short. But please tell me if its worth continuing? Please and Thank You:)