Hi! I got this story idea at night, all of a sudden it came to me, and i said "i have to make this fanfiction" so here it is. I was really excited writing it. Enjoy and please review.
I was outside the tent, watching how Seth kept moving anxiously, my arms around my knees. I didn't want to be alone, yet Seth's company wasn't making it any better. I suddenly wished that I had asked Edward not to fight today, to stay with me, but i knew his family needed him. That was the reason I let this happen, not his reassuring words that everything would be fine, because knew there was a possibility that someone could get hurt—i cringed—and if they did, it would be my fault. By the look on Seth's movement, everything was going good, but what did I know? I couldn't read minds. At least Edward did, he can win. I was being selfish, I was actually wishing that if someone got hurt, at least Edward wouldn't be. Seth abruptly turned his head around into the forest.
"What is it Seth?" I asked anxiously. Had someone got hurt?
He started growling, moving in front of me in a protective form. What was going on? Is there danger? Damn it, Seth! Tell me! I was too scared and nervous to actually say it. Then I saw them. Victoria and another vampire moved out of the forest. My knees buckled and I fell to the ground, but I quickly recovered myself, if I was going to die at least standing. She grinned at me, then looked at Seth. To me he looked terrifying, but Victoria simply showed her teeth at him and approached. I gasped, realizing I hadn't taken a single breath since they had appeared, i started breathing rapidly. She murmured something to the other vampire, a newborn obviously.
"Go Seth" I said in barely more than a whisper. I didn't want him to die because of me, he was too young. He looked at me and huffed —a scoff— with mocking eyes. I guessed it meant something like: are you crazy? I can take this guys down. If I was right, which I was pretty sure I was, how could he say that? Victoria was deadly, and it was 2 against 1.
"Go riley." Victoria ordered in a high soprano voice.
The vampire named riley approached Seth and started circling us while Victoria watched. I guessed that if it wasn't for me, Seth would've started circling too, but he just stayed there, in front of me. Then, in less than a second, I felt something grab me and throw me to the ground. I heard something crack. Victoria was in front of me then. I tried to get to my feet and screamed at the pain, i had broken something, a rib i guessed. Victoria sprang, she was intercepted by something fast, and she was knocked of her feet and onto a rock. She snarled furiously, I searched for whatever had saved me. There he was, my own perfect miracle. Edward was in front of me in a crouch, with a confused, frustrated look. Victoria grinned.
"Like what I found?" she said.
"How do you do it?" Edward said clearly frustrated and angry.
"Riley does it. He protect minds, now you can't hear mine." Victoria's grin stretched even more. Now I understood, riley had a power and could protect minds, Edward's most reliable weapon was gone. A cloud of brown whooshed between us and crashed to the trees. I had barely put attention to the other fight, but it was obvious that Seth wasn't doing good. The fight went to the forest and i couldn't see anything anymore. I didn't quite understand Riley's power. How could he keep protecting Victoria's mind while he's fighting?
Victoria sprang and the fight began. I watched anxiously. Sometimes Victoria would fall, scream or snarl, but sometimes Edward did too and it made me cringe and feel like someone had stabbed me. Edward flew into the air and broke 4 trees. Victoria ran at me and grabbed the same arm James had bitten. Her teeth sank into my skin, just like his had.
"NO!" Edward cried as he got up lightly and threw Victoria aside. I felt the same fire and fell to the ground. The pain was too much. I ground my teeth to keep from screaming, that wouldn't help Edward.
"Bella, no! No no! Oh Bella." Edward cried, cradling me in his arms.
Victoria came and kicked Edward, I fell to the ground and he flew again, but this time deep into the forest. He was obviously too concerned about me that didn't hear Victoria coming. If i hadn't be writhing in pain, maybe this would be funny, every time someone approached me they flew into the air.
Victoria stepped on my leg and broke it, just like James had, she obviously wanted to do it the same. I barely felt it compared to the fire inside me, but it made me scream in agony. Rosalie was right, screaming didn't help at all. I forced my eyes open and she was smiling at me, enjoying it. Getting the revenge she wanted.
Edward came again and the fight kept going. If Edward could read Victoria's mind the fight would've been long over, but now it was clear that Victoria was as good a fighter as Edward. I couldn't really see what was going on. I was using all my self-control to keep from screaming, even though sometime a moan or sob escaped my mouth and Edward would cry for me, get distracted, and end up thrown to the floor. So I kept my mouth shut, my eyes closed tight, my teeth clenched together, and my hands in tight fists, feeling how my nails sank into my skin, from the force.
A grunt and a crash came. I felt how Edward carried me in his arms, flung me over his shoulder a little too aggressively and began running, someone following, but left behind. I felt relief for about a second, then realized this wasn't the beautiful, perfect chest I had been held in before, this wasn't the same scent and they were obviously not the same arms I had been hugged with before. My eyes popped open and I saw the same face that had been in my nightmares. Victoria was carrying me, her revenge wasn't over yet. She smiled at me, victorious and vicious, getting what she had been planning ever since James had died. Then, grateful, I welcomed unconsciousness.
This story is obviously not over yet, but i'm gonna wait for some reviews. I have a major plot twist planned, you guys will never see it coming. Muahaha! Lol. Please review, tell me what you like and what you didn't. The faster you guys review, the faster a new chapter is updated.