Uhm, okay. So, I have just recently figured out that this story is quite popular for being so new. So…I have decided to clean up this chapter. So you may notice a LOT of spelling and grammar corrections in this chapter, if you have read the original version. The original little paragraph thing is below:
Hey, I got this idea from one of my now favorite songs (no this is not a songfic) Into everything, by Telepopmusik (it is the correct spelling) and it talks about a girl who is trying to get the one she loves to open his world to her, and this how I got the idea!
The POV changes a lot, so when I introduce the OC it will mainly be her POV. OH! And please go easy, this is my first fic, so please go easy! WARNING:I am only 12 going 13 in 2 months, so be warned there will be NO sex, or complicated jutsu, since I don't know Japanese or anything about jutsus "inner workings", and I spell BAD so there will be many mistakes. R&R please!
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Naruto
I strolled down the road, passing stands and shops. I felt the breeze caress my cheeks, I heard the whispers and hissed remarks directed at me, but I continued walking down the path, pretending I was deaf to the world beyond my thoughts.
But every time that I would try to think of training or ramen to get those words, whispers, and hisses out of my mind, they would snarl or sneer, and I would immediately cringe.
I turned down an alley way and my amble morphed into a sprint, until I found myself running at breakneck speed down a long empty road.
"Why? Why were these things, that I face everyday bugging me so much today?" I questioned myself. I felt so vulnerable, these things never bothered me, until now, so why was I so emotionally vulnerable?
"Oh...now I remember." I felt my eyes become half lidded, my whole body seemed to slump, and my spirits fell.
----Flash Back----
I could not believe my eyes, it was something that I knew was a possibility, yet I just could not come to except it.
Sasuke was pressed against a wall, with Sakura in his arms, kissing.
Suddenly what I felt was not anger, but pity. Pity for myself, for indulging in a fantasy I knew would never come true.
I felt hot tears come down my cheeks and my eyes widened slightly, Sakura let out a soft moan. I could only stop and stare as the girl of my dreams, stood kissing my best friend/worst enemy.
Sakura's eyes opened slowly, her gaze caught mine. Her eyes widened in surprise.
She quickly broke the kiss.
"N-Naruto?" she stuttered. "Naruto, w-wait, COME BACK!" she yelled pleadingly as I found my self running as fast as my legs could carry me (1).
As I sprinted away I heard Sasuke say, "Don't worry about that dobe he will come around", this made me run faster.
I found my way to my small apartment. I was shaking and I scrambled to find my key, I took it out my pocket and opened the door. I hastily went to my bedroom, plopped on my bed, and felt my world fade into black, tearstains adorned my cheek.
----End Flash Back----
I did not cry because Sakura and Sasuke, I cried because all of my dreams of love were broken, I did not run for Sakura or Sasuke, I ran because I wanted to escape the fact that I was a fool to believe I could EVER have a romantic relationship with Sakura!
But, suddenly I realized something, it dawned on me, I had been chasing a total bitch!
And because of her, I was being a total idiot! I was just about to give up! Forever, never try to love again! Come on, I can't believe how stupid I was! I was so nice to Sakura, I always protected her, I gave her my all, I supported her, comforted her in time of need.
And what did she give me in return? She treated me like crap! I clenched my fist, that's IT!
NO MORE! I am NOT going to chase after her anymore, I am NOT going to comfort her anymore, and I will not give her my all, now I will regard her as just my teammate, and my teammate only.
Sasuke can have her. The only reason she likes Sasuke is because all the other girls are in infatuated with him, and because she thought he was hot, she did not take one minute to look behind all that, to his heart.
I looked up the starry sky, it was now nighttime. Wow, nighttime already? Oh no, I'm brooding! He smirked. Heh, I better stop myself or I might become another Sasuke Uchiha.
There are many other girls out there surely ONE of them can learn to love him! Right?
He quickly pushed away his doubts.
Naruto felt so good! He felt free, he was happy, he was finally over Sakura, and he was NOT going back to loving her! Not that she would care anyway.
Little did he know soon it would be the complete opposite.
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Yah, sucky I know. Pointers accepted. I tried! Of course this is only chapter one! Sorry it was so short! I am just so god damn lazy! Tell me what you think; if you don't like it I will try again.
(1) I know Sakura would probably not care but...yah
Lady MF (me):"Yay Naruto got over the bitch in my fic!"
Naruto: "Erm, wow this really makes me think..."
Lady MF: "OMG WHERE IS MY DIARY! I need to write this down "Today Naruto actually THOUGHT!"
Naruto: "OH SHOVE IT!"
Lady MF: "Hey, hey. Just kidding! I LOVE my hunnybunny, naru-kun!"
Naruto: blushes at pet name
Lady MF: K", see ya'll later!"
Sakura:"God, I am a bitch!"
Naruto: "NO YOUR NOT SAKURA-CHAN!"
Sakura: -Punches Naruto's jaw-
Lady MF: "SEE WHAT I MEAN!?"