abandoned
This is my first story constructive critisism is acceptable no burns
I do not own Percy Jackson and the Olympians I am not Rick Riordan
R&R
Jason p.o.v
"JASON WAKE UP, NOW!" I sat up, jumped out of bed, and flipped my coin looking for any sources of danger to me or my beautiful face. Then I heard giggling
There was a sparkling rainbow in the corner of the cabin I could see my sister and her friends A.K.A the hunters of Artemis "it's Saturday and its only 9:00 what do you want" I snapped "we wanted to tell you that we were coming to camp"
"that's all"? I asked "yep, bye" Thalia said. As soon as the IM dissipated I crawled back into bed to sleep for about 4 more hours
When I woke up I walked outside my cabin I could already see Apollo's sun chariot I crept slowly towards the lake lurching and rumbling I could tell that Thalia was driving. Then before I could blink twice it sped towards the lake killing the grass directly under the chariot/bus. It smacked the silver waters. arcs of water shot into the air turning into steam I ran towards the lake "THALIA'' I screamed "WHERE ARE YOU!" I was so scared I could feel sparks shooting out of me I took of my tank-top ready to jump in then Percy and Annabeth ran towards me "no" Annabeth said "the electricity coming off of you will kill everything in the lake including the hunters" "I'll go" Percy said "I can try to pull them towards the surface" without a second glance he jumped in and left me, sitting on the shore worrying about my sister
Thalia's p.o.v
As soon as we hit the water the bus broke into pieces of shrapnel leaving us hunters to sink to the bottom of the lake I tried to stay awake as long as possible but soon found myself passing out, next thing I knew I was surrounded by a bubble of air Percy looked down at me " you okay Thals" he whispered "yeah" I replied "wait the hunters there still down there" I said "yeah I know we can only carry one at a time" he said suddenly all the hairs on my neck stood up straight just like they had on Mt. tam right before our car exploded lightning I muttered then Percy caught on, he thrust his arms up sending us shooting out of the water the lightning struck about half a second later lighting up the whole lake. By the time we landed on the ground then the water in the lake flew everywhere, like somebody had threw a bomb into the water the water soaked me than fear gripped me and I passed out
NICO P.O.V
Jason ran towards me exasperated "you okay" I asked "Thalia, lake, lightning, boom" I caught on"go" I screamed we raced towards the lake it seemed like the world slowed down "oh Hades this takes to long I said I grabbed Jason's arm and ran towards a tree the faster I approached the thicker the shadow got we went straight through the tree and appeared by the lake then I saw something that will haunt me forever