Stuff in " is being said. This is thoughts ' (' not ") (the stuff in
parentheses is my comments) Everyone has a color, although I know it won't
show up. ^^; This is in Erick's P.O.V., it changes if I need to put a scene
in where Erick isn't there. I would like to thank Koneko-chan ^_^ as she
helped me out writing this, and even co-wrote the first part of this fic.
Disclaimer: I own Erick! Yes, I do! Tomoyo runs over. "No! You can't own him!" Erick sighs, "I'm afraid she's right." "I also own Seby, but I don't own anything else that belongs to someone else, if I think of something I use I'll mention it later."
'Today. Today was the day my father would return home.' That thought in my mind I woke and rushed into the living room. Seby stood there, and I knew. He shook his head. 'My father wouldn't be home today.'
"Your father left these tickets, along with his apologies." Seby held out 6 tickets.
"Thank you, Seby." I took the tickets. I was disappointed, but in a way not surprised. What I needed was someone to cheer me up, and I could think of no better person than the object of my affections, Tomoyo Daidouji. So I dial Tomoyo's number, which of course I have memorized. The phone is picked up and that heavenly voice says, "Moshi moshi."
I smile at her, even though she cannot see me doing so. "Hello Tomoyo-chan"
Like music to my ears I hear her respond, "Oh, hi Erick-kun"
"I've got good news. Like cruises?"
"Of course."
'This could be a good day after all' "Would you like to go on one with me?"
I could just tell she was smiling "Yes. That would be fun."
"Can you leave on Friday?" (It's Wed)
"Sure." (And vacation time, summer that is)
"Great, I'll pick you up at 8 sharp in the morning."
"All right."
'Any chance to talk to Tomoyo should be extended for as long as possible.' "Any questions?"
"No."
'Ok, you win some you lose some' "Alright, ja ne then."
"All right. Good bye"
After sitting a couple of minutes relishing the fact that Tomoyo-chan would be with me on this cruise I move on to use the other 4 tickets. So I dial Syaoran's number.
"Hello?"
"Hello Syaoran."
"Hello Erick."
"Would you like to come on a cruise with us?"
"Who's 'us'?"
"Well, currently myself and Tomoyo." '90% chance if Tomoyo is going somewhere so is Sakura'
"I guess."
"Of course my next call is to Sakura." 'In this case, 100%'
"I'll pick you up Fri at 8 a.m. ok?"
"Fine."
"Bai" So I hang up, and proceed to make my statement true. I dial Sakura's number.
"Hello?"
"Hello Sakura."
"Hi Erick"
"Wanna go on a cruise?"
Sakura's P.O.V.
"I'd like to, let me ask my dad."
So I put Erick on hold and walk downstairs. I get puppy-dog eyes and say, "Dad, can I go on a cruise?"
"If you bring Touya with you."
I sigh, just a small one. "Ok." I then go and knock on Touya's door* "Touya!"
He opens the door. "Yes, kaijuu?"
I stomp on his foot. I feel he should be nicer to me, I _am_ his sister after all. "You're going on a cruise with me and my friends."
"Now, why would I want to do that?"
"Because Father said so."
"Then I guess I'm going. But I'm bringing Yuki.""
I shrug. "Fine, I'll go see when we're leaving."
I walk back upstairs "Erick?"
ZZZzzzZZzzzz....
ERICK!
Erick's P.O.V.
Sakura took awhile so I set down my head, after an ear-splitting shout I wake up. "Yes."
"When is it?"
"We'll pick you up at 8 a.m. on Friday alright? We being Syaoran, myself, and Tomoyo."
"Oh, my dad says Touya has to come with me, and Touya says Yukito has to come with him."
"Ok, see you then, bai."
"Ja ne"
Sakura P.O.V.
I walk downstairs "Touya! Leaving on Fri, 8 a.m.!"
"Ok, kaijuu. I'm going to call Yuki."
'Just ignore him.' I walk upstairs. I'll call Syaoran, it would keep my mind off of Touya. I dial Syaoran's number on the pink cell phone.
"Hello?"
"Hi Syaoran-kun!" I beam into the phone.
"Hi Sakura."
"Touya was annoying me, so I thought I'd call."
"Glad you called."
"Glad you're home. Won't this cruise be fun?"
"Yeah, lots of fun."
"Too bad Touya has to come."
"We'll probably be able to avoid him enough."
" It's me, Touya, Yuki, you, Tomoyo, Erick right?"
"As far as I know."
I paused. " What about...?"
"He didn't mention her."
'We should find somebody for her.' "I thought so."
"I'm going to call Tomoyo now, see you Fri?"
"All right. Bye."
"Bai."
I hang up and dial Tomoyo's number.
Tomoyo, my best friend answers. "Moshi moshi."
"Oi Tomoyo"
"Oh, hi Sakura."
I'm very excited about the cruise. "I can't decide what to do first. There'll be so many things to do. I bet Erick will go straight for the buffet." 'You know it's true'
She laughs. "Probably."
"It's not fair, Touya has to come."
"Oh, I'm sure it can't be too bad."
"He's bringing Yukito with him. Are you bringing your camera?"
'Even though I know the answer'
"Of course."
"Of course, of course."
"Are you bringing yours?"
"Yea, but I don't plan to use it much. I plan to make the fullest of this cruise." (Dun dun dun)
"Well, I better start packing, I'll see you Friday Tomoyo."
"All right, see you then. Bai."
"Bye."
::Friday, 8 a.m.::
*Everyone standing on deck* (room info: Very nice staterooms, two people each. There are two beds a room
Syaoran and Erick in one, Sakura and Tomoyo in another, and Yuki and Touya in the last)(back to Erick's P.O.V. btw)
"Thanks for inviting us on this cruise Erick."
"Yes, thank you."
"You're welcome, I'd be bored if you all weren't here." 'Pass up a chance to be near Tomoyo? I think not.'
The ship starts off. "I'm off to the buffet, if anyone cares to join me." Tomoyo and Sakura smile, I'm not sure why.
Sakura turns to Syaoran. "What do you want to do first, Syaoran?"
Touya walks off to the buffet, I follow after him. When we arrive Touya starts eating as much as he can. I just eat like I always do. Yuki finally arrives and sits eating normally next to us. (Well normal for him) Sakura's P.O.V.
"We could go look around the ship if you want Syaoran-kun."
"Sounds good to me."
"Ok, lets go." Since Touya isn't around I grab his arm and start walking around, looking at the ship, meanwhile Tomoyo goes to look in the stores, and Syaoran follows me.
Authors Notes: What did you think? I'll just put down some quick translations.
Oi means Hey
Moshi moshi is something you say when you answer the telephone, or want to get someone's attention.
Kaijuu means monster
If I left anything out please remind me. I woulda typed more up but this is all that was on the file, you see I had to change it from 3rd person to 1st person. I promise the later chapters will have more of Erick's P.O.V. and be much more interesting, this was just to establish the setting. So pretty please, have a heart and review. I don't ask for much, two words would do. "Nice story" even that would make my day. I know you cant see it, but I do work very hard and color the lines, so if you really want I can send you a copy via yahoo mail and you can see the colors. Well, it's late now, and I have no idea what to title this chapter. Ja ne! oh btw, if nobody wants to see me continue this just don't comment, I mean why waste my time on a story if no one it going to read it? So comments and I continue, no comments and I'll work on a different story instead.
Disclaimer: I own Erick! Yes, I do! Tomoyo runs over. "No! You can't own him!" Erick sighs, "I'm afraid she's right." "I also own Seby, but I don't own anything else that belongs to someone else, if I think of something I use I'll mention it later."
'Today. Today was the day my father would return home.' That thought in my mind I woke and rushed into the living room. Seby stood there, and I knew. He shook his head. 'My father wouldn't be home today.'
"Your father left these tickets, along with his apologies." Seby held out 6 tickets.
"Thank you, Seby." I took the tickets. I was disappointed, but in a way not surprised. What I needed was someone to cheer me up, and I could think of no better person than the object of my affections, Tomoyo Daidouji. So I dial Tomoyo's number, which of course I have memorized. The phone is picked up and that heavenly voice says, "Moshi moshi."
I smile at her, even though she cannot see me doing so. "Hello Tomoyo-chan"
Like music to my ears I hear her respond, "Oh, hi Erick-kun"
"I've got good news. Like cruises?"
"Of course."
'This could be a good day after all' "Would you like to go on one with me?"
I could just tell she was smiling "Yes. That would be fun."
"Can you leave on Friday?" (It's Wed)
"Sure." (And vacation time, summer that is)
"Great, I'll pick you up at 8 sharp in the morning."
"All right."
'Any chance to talk to Tomoyo should be extended for as long as possible.' "Any questions?"
"No."
'Ok, you win some you lose some' "Alright, ja ne then."
"All right. Good bye"
After sitting a couple of minutes relishing the fact that Tomoyo-chan would be with me on this cruise I move on to use the other 4 tickets. So I dial Syaoran's number.
"Hello?"
"Hello Syaoran."
"Hello Erick."
"Would you like to come on a cruise with us?"
"Who's 'us'?"
"Well, currently myself and Tomoyo." '90% chance if Tomoyo is going somewhere so is Sakura'
"I guess."
"Of course my next call is to Sakura." 'In this case, 100%'
"I'll pick you up Fri at 8 a.m. ok?"
"Fine."
"Bai" So I hang up, and proceed to make my statement true. I dial Sakura's number.
"Hello?"
"Hello Sakura."
"Hi Erick"
"Wanna go on a cruise?"
Sakura's P.O.V.
"I'd like to, let me ask my dad."
So I put Erick on hold and walk downstairs. I get puppy-dog eyes and say, "Dad, can I go on a cruise?"
"If you bring Touya with you."
I sigh, just a small one. "Ok." I then go and knock on Touya's door* "Touya!"
He opens the door. "Yes, kaijuu?"
I stomp on his foot. I feel he should be nicer to me, I _am_ his sister after all. "You're going on a cruise with me and my friends."
"Now, why would I want to do that?"
"Because Father said so."
"Then I guess I'm going. But I'm bringing Yuki.""
I shrug. "Fine, I'll go see when we're leaving."
I walk back upstairs "Erick?"
ZZZzzzZZzzzz....
ERICK!
Erick's P.O.V.
Sakura took awhile so I set down my head, after an ear-splitting shout I wake up. "Yes."
"When is it?"
"We'll pick you up at 8 a.m. on Friday alright? We being Syaoran, myself, and Tomoyo."
"Oh, my dad says Touya has to come with me, and Touya says Yukito has to come with him."
"Ok, see you then, bai."
"Ja ne"
Sakura P.O.V.
I walk downstairs "Touya! Leaving on Fri, 8 a.m.!"
"Ok, kaijuu. I'm going to call Yuki."
'Just ignore him.' I walk upstairs. I'll call Syaoran, it would keep my mind off of Touya. I dial Syaoran's number on the pink cell phone.
"Hello?"
"Hi Syaoran-kun!" I beam into the phone.
"Hi Sakura."
"Touya was annoying me, so I thought I'd call."
"Glad you called."
"Glad you're home. Won't this cruise be fun?"
"Yeah, lots of fun."
"Too bad Touya has to come."
"We'll probably be able to avoid him enough."
" It's me, Touya, Yuki, you, Tomoyo, Erick right?"
"As far as I know."
I paused. " What about...?"
"He didn't mention her."
'We should find somebody for her.' "I thought so."
"I'm going to call Tomoyo now, see you Fri?"
"All right. Bye."
"Bai."
I hang up and dial Tomoyo's number.
Tomoyo, my best friend answers. "Moshi moshi."
"Oi Tomoyo"
"Oh, hi Sakura."
I'm very excited about the cruise. "I can't decide what to do first. There'll be so many things to do. I bet Erick will go straight for the buffet." 'You know it's true'
She laughs. "Probably."
"It's not fair, Touya has to come."
"Oh, I'm sure it can't be too bad."
"He's bringing Yukito with him. Are you bringing your camera?"
'Even though I know the answer'
"Of course."
"Of course, of course."
"Are you bringing yours?"
"Yea, but I don't plan to use it much. I plan to make the fullest of this cruise." (Dun dun dun)
"Well, I better start packing, I'll see you Friday Tomoyo."
"All right, see you then. Bai."
"Bye."
::Friday, 8 a.m.::
*Everyone standing on deck* (room info: Very nice staterooms, two people each. There are two beds a room
Syaoran and Erick in one, Sakura and Tomoyo in another, and Yuki and Touya in the last)(back to Erick's P.O.V. btw)
"Thanks for inviting us on this cruise Erick."
"Yes, thank you."
"You're welcome, I'd be bored if you all weren't here." 'Pass up a chance to be near Tomoyo? I think not.'
The ship starts off. "I'm off to the buffet, if anyone cares to join me." Tomoyo and Sakura smile, I'm not sure why.
Sakura turns to Syaoran. "What do you want to do first, Syaoran?"
Touya walks off to the buffet, I follow after him. When we arrive Touya starts eating as much as he can. I just eat like I always do. Yuki finally arrives and sits eating normally next to us. (Well normal for him) Sakura's P.O.V.
"We could go look around the ship if you want Syaoran-kun."
"Sounds good to me."
"Ok, lets go." Since Touya isn't around I grab his arm and start walking around, looking at the ship, meanwhile Tomoyo goes to look in the stores, and Syaoran follows me.
Authors Notes: What did you think? I'll just put down some quick translations.
Oi means Hey
Moshi moshi is something you say when you answer the telephone, or want to get someone's attention.
Kaijuu means monster
If I left anything out please remind me. I woulda typed more up but this is all that was on the file, you see I had to change it from 3rd person to 1st person. I promise the later chapters will have more of Erick's P.O.V. and be much more interesting, this was just to establish the setting. So pretty please, have a heart and review. I don't ask for much, two words would do. "Nice story" even that would make my day. I know you cant see it, but I do work very hard and color the lines, so if you really want I can send you a copy via yahoo mail and you can see the colors. Well, it's late now, and I have no idea what to title this chapter. Ja ne! oh btw, if nobody wants to see me continue this just don't comment, I mean why waste my time on a story if no one it going to read it? So comments and I continue, no comments and I'll work on a different story instead.