Since I didn't really like the first version here's a rewritten version
The reasons why is in the first story
Anyway
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Chapter 1: A Unknown Reunion
Percy's P.O.V
Three months after the Gaea "incident" everything's been good. New campers, new cabins, and even Camp Jupiter was doing great, Did mention we can go visit the camp at anytime? Well, even if I didn't you guys would know, some how.
Anyway, The strangest thing (Well...one of the strangest) happened today. I was out standing by Thalia's tree with Annabeth, Jason, and Piper. Talking about how the camps were doing. (Did I say that Piper went to stay at Camp Jupiter with Jason?... No?... well now I did) Then all of a sudden 'Wham!' someone bumped into me... well now that I think about 'bump' would be a understatement it was more like Crashed into me, Heck, It was like this person fell from the sky and landed on top of me. It hurt like Hades.
When I looked to see who this person was, after I got over my dizziness, I saw a girl with black jet hair, like mine.. though her's was tameable. She had on ripped blue jeans and and a Royal Blue tank top shirt with ruffles (...note to self stop hanging out by the Aphrodite cabin for a while) the clothes looked a bit torn up. she must've been in a fight and it must have been pretty bad if she collapsed like that... but then again... I did the same. Other then that she seems... familiar
"Ahem" I heard Annabeth 'cough' out. I turned to her and asked, "Do you what something, Wise girl?" She sighed at my comment and said, "No, I just want to give you some candy." I was about to say something about the candy before she hit the back of my head. "Yes, I what something!!" She practically yelled at me. "Okay, Okay!" I put up my hands putting them in the 'I surrender' mode. "Gods. I was joking." I mumbled rubbing the back of my head. She glared at me, while I just gave her a sheepish smile.
Annabeth rolled her eyes and said, "Back to what I was about to say. Percy, Do you know who that is?" I shrugged. "I'm not sure. She does seems a bit familiar, but I don't know why." Piper soon walked to the mystery girl. "Um, Is it strange that I think she's a bit familiar to me too?" I shook my head at her. "I don't think so." Jason walked beside me."So you guys both probably know her?" He asked. "Basically." Me and Piper said at the same time. We soon shivered at the unison we did. I looked at Annabeth, just to see a face I've seen thousands of time. "So what are you thinking about, Owl head?" I asked her. "That we should take her to Chiron and see who she is." then she looked at her clothes, "and also get her healed. And I say we get her there now."
We nodded. I started to pick up the girl, Bridal style, as carefully as I can and started to walk to the Big House with the others. 'Weird, I thought to myself, I normally feel uncomfortable when I pick someone other than Annabeth like this. But with this person... I feel completely fine.'
Timeskip
After a lot of people staring at us, mostly me, we finally made it to the Big House.
"Chiron, We need you're help!" Annabeth called out. A few minutes later Chiron came out. "What is it that you need,child?" He asked. Annabeth nodded her head to the girl I was carrying. His eyes drifted to where she nodded at, his eyes widened slightly. "I see. Follow me, Percy." He said. I nodded as I followed him to the guest room in the Big House. "You can put her on the bed here." he told me. I nodded again as I put her on the bed carefully. "Should I get some Ambrosia or Nectar?" I asked. He shook his head. "Not yet, My boy." He got some water from the sink in the bathroom and walks over to the girl with it. I looked at him confused at first but the slowly turned into shock as he poured it on her.
I saw her wounds slowly closing afterwards. "A daughter of Poseidon?!" I said confused, shocked, and excited. 'I have a sister...and Chiron knew?!' Questions keep running through my head as I started to gap like a fish out of water. (Not a joke you can enjoy!... but that was good) "Percy, You should close you're mouth before flies get in." Chiron said, breaking me out of my thoughts. I slowly closed my mouth, still in shock. I turned towards him and said, "So, I have a half sister... How old is she?" He looked at the girl silent for a bit then finally said, "You're age,18." (Remember it's been three months since Gaea, so yea...18)
I looked at him in shocked and confused. 'She's the same age as me??!' I got over my shock, after a minute, and said, "Chiron, can we talk about this outside the room." Not wanting to wake her up. He nodded and followed me outside the room. "So, You knew I had a half sister?" I asked. He nodded. "and didn't tell me?" I added. "She didn't want to make herself known to you." I looked at him confused. "What do you mean by 'not wanting to make herself known'?" I asked mimicking his voice a bit. He chuckled at my bad imitation and said, "That's not my place to tell." "Then who is?" I said confused. "Why not ask it to the person you're talking about." I heard a female voice say.
I turned towards the sound to see the gir- My half sister. "Y-you're awake." She chuckled silently as she rolled her sea-green eyes. "What do you think I'm doing? Sleep walking?" she joked. "Nice comeback" I told her. She smiled, "Why, thank you." She paused as she looked at me. "You're Percy, right?? As in Percy Jackson?" I nodded. "Yep, that's me. What's you're name?" "I'm Percie." "Percie?" She nodded and said kind of shyly, "I have a weird name, don't I." "No, That's a nice name." I told her, reassuringly. She looked a me with what looked like shock then smiled, "Thanks."
She turned to Chiron with a somewhat serious expression. "Did something happen here, Chiron?" He was about to say something until she added, "Other than the wars." He looked at her and shook her head. "Not that I know." She looked confused. "Are you sure? No prophecy or anything?" She asked. He just shook his head. She sighed and mumbled, "So I'm here for nothing." It seems that only I heard her. "Well... since, I'm here.. I might as well see what's new here." I looked at her shocked. 'She's been here before?!' She looked at me and said, in a 'Matter-of-fact' voice, "Of course I been here before. How else do you think I now Chiron?" I was even more shocked 'Did she just read my mind!!?' I heard her snicker. "Um, Percy." Chiron started. "You're thinking out loud." Percie bursted out into laughter after her said that. I just blushed at my own foolishness. "Gods, I am a Seaweed Brain" I sighed.
Percie started to calm down with her laughter and looked at me still chuckling a bit. "So, Percy, aren't you gonna give me a tour of camp?" I looked confused. "I thought you've been here before?" "I have." "Then why do you need a tour?" I asked. She smirked. "Because, I've heard you changed a few things." I was about to ask how until Chiron said, "That seems right since you are the Cabin Counselor." I was about to argue until I realized how unfair this conversation was gonna be. I sighed and said, "Fine." Percie and Chiron smiled and high-fived each other. "Well, let's get started!" Percie said, obviously excited. I smiled at her excitement and said, "Okay."
We walked towards the door to get out of the Big House, until we saw mostly all the new campers, with Annabeth, Piper, and Jason, in front of the big house. "Well, looks like we got company." Percie told me as we looked out the window. I nodded as I opened the door, as we both walked out I saw, out of the corner of my eye, the new campers looking at Percie with shock on their faces, for some reason. 'Weird, they look like they're shocked to see her here or something.' I thought, but shrugged it off as I reached Annabeth and the others. "So, what happened here?" I asked them. "Well, while we were waiting for you guys these campers, who I'm pretty sure are new, came here all of a sudden." Annabeth explained. "Do you think they know that girl?" Piper asked. I shrugged "I have no idea." Soon, I heard people shout, "PERCIE!!" that ended with a 'thud'.
We turn to see that all the new campers had basically dog piled on my half-sister. (Meaning they jumped on her for a hug but did it so fast and hard that they fell on the ground with her... did that help you guys?) "Um, Hi guys." We heard Percie say. "Could you please get off me, I'm starting to feel my ribs crack." They got off her and waited for her to get up. When she did they surrounded her asking questions, I only heard a few like "What are you doing here?"or " What happened to you earlier?" When I saw Percie trying to calm down the group of kids, but that seemed to not work. I saw from the corner of my eye at the campers that came before/during the war with Gaea shake their heads at the kids while smirking as they covered their ears. I was confused at first until I saw Percie's face slowly have a face of irritation. Soon, Percie yelled, "QUIET!!!!" in a really loud voice.
The group of kids backed up from her after, clearly frightened. She saw they're faces and calmed down. She then bent down to their level as she said with a soft voice, "I'm sorry, guys. It's just I already have a headache, that really hurts, and you guys are kind of making it hurt even more." One of the kids, A daughter of Demeter, walked to her and said with a quiet voice, "But, Percie" "What is it, Emma?" "Why are you here?" Emma asked. Percie shrugged "To be honest, I don't know. I was just sent here." Another kid, who I'm pretty sure was a daughter of Athena, went up by Emma and asked, "Are you staying?" Percie Smiled, "I was about to, but I decided to stay for a couple of days." They all smiled at not leaving just yet. Percie then said, "I know you guys have a lot of questions, but Perce here is gonna give me a tour of camp of what changed here, so I'll answer them later okay." They nodded. "Okay, Now go and have fun with you're siblings." They ran off.
She got up and walked towards us. "Did I by any chance ruin you guy's eardrums?" I shook my head and heard Jason say, "No, Now if only they would stop ringing." Percie chuckled and said, "Sorry about that." "It's nothing, Percie." I told her "Annabeth here trained my ears from stuff like that." Annabeth soon hit me on the back of my head at my joke. "Ow, I was joking." I told her sheepishly. Annabeth just glared at me in response. "Well you two have some relationship." Percie said. "You can tell?" Jason said. Percie laughed, "Of course, It's so obvious that they're together and they look so cute." Annabeth and I blushed at the comment. "Right, They were so made for each other!" Piper said as we blushed even more.
'How did this turn into commenting on how cute my relationship with Annabeth is?' I thought to myself. "Let's just start this tour." I said still blushing. Percie nodded before saying to the others, "You guys can come too, Its been a while since I came here and I love making new friends, not to mention Percy might need some with this tour." "What, I'm perfect at giving these tours. Right,guys" I said looking at them. They turned their gazes away from me and onto Percie. "We would love to come with you." Piper said. "Nothing's wrong with making new friends." Jason told her. "And seaweed brain would need some help with this." Annabeth finished. I looked at them with shock before putting a hand over my heart acting hurt. "I feel betrayed, Wise girl." Annabeth looked at me with her knowing smirk. "You know it's true, Percy."
"Yea but still." The others laughed at my performance. The whole tour was pretty fun with all the impressions and jokes we made and explained. Maybe it won't be that bad of having a sister.
End of Chapter 1
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