It's my first story on here, tell me if they're errors or better ways to write! Thx :P

Naruko's POV 8 Years Old

crash* I awake to the sound of someone breaking into my room.

"Demon Brat(he spits out), its time to die for your sins!"

I sit up, and calmly look at him. The man, has brown short hair and a little stubble on the chin, has a disheveled appearance, and he reeks of alcohol. Lunging at me with a knife to kill me before I can react, his knife cuts through my skin like a knife through hot butter. It feels like thousands of wasps are stinging me, until the knife reaches my heart.

I start coughing up blood, I know im going to die but, I didnt want it to end this way! I wanted my existence to be acknowledged. I wanted to be Hokage. I pass away wishing this was a dream and regretting wanting to protect this place, and wishing I had another chance to redo it all!

I wake up to lots of dings and popups?

You Died!

-Naruko System Unlocked-

-Unyeilding Hatred-

-Pain Resistance MAX-

Points

75,700 (70,000 Torture, 5,000 Kept good Attitude, 700 Premature Death)

-152 (-100 Hatred, -52 Bad Diet)

Calculating Benefits...

All Blood Lines, Cheat store, Gamer Skill

Remaining points 25,700

Choose Remaining Benefits

'This list is really long I guess I'll just choose any that sound useful or that I want.'

- Instant Health Regeneration 100

- Infinite Chakra 300

- Immortal (Age stagnant at Prime) 500

- Bloodline Bestowal 100

- Undying Stamina 500

- Skill Bestowal 300

- Poison Resistance LVL Max 100

- Taijutsu LVL Max 100

- Perfect ChakrChakra Control 1,000

- Limitless Potential 5,000

- Always Clean 500

- Soul Bound Greatsword 1,000

- Soul Bound Bag of Holding 2,000

- Soul Bound Set of Kunai/Shuriken 2,000

- AutoRepair all equipped 3,000

- Lying LVL Max 100

- Lie Detection LVL Max 100

- Silky Skin 100

- Silky Hair 100

- Hourglass Figure 500

- Flexible Limbs 200

- Dragon Pet 1,000

- Concealment LVL Max 100

- Perfect Eyebrows 100

- Perfect Lips 100

- Small Nose 100

- Small Ears 100

- Small Feet 100

- Small Height 100

- Blackhole stomach 1,000

- Unblemished Skin 400

- Hair Is Never In the Way 100

- Concealed Muscles 100

- Amazing Natural Scent 100

- Saiyan Cells 1000

- Undeniable Beauty 500

- Silver Left Eye 100

- Violet Right Eye 100

- Soft but Firm Boobs 100

- Soft but Firm Ass 100

- No Mental Exhaustion 400

- Perfect Vocal Cords 100

Points Remaining 2,800

Ugh, why am I even doing this I thought I died? Whatever, its kinda fun. But, I dont know what to spend my remaining points on? Oh I'll just do these.

- Perfect Vagina 100

- Haggler LVL Max 100

- Grant Chakra 1000

- Fear Resistance LVL Max 100

- Environmental Affinity LVL Max 500

- Granted Fathers jutsu's 500

- Granted Mothers jutsu's 500

'Geez, finally that felt like hours.'

0 Points Next

'Ah, ok Next'

Select Difficulty

- Easy

- Normal

- Hard

- Very Hard

- Impossible

'Why would anyone decide Impossible?'

Impossible Selected, Have Fun.

Wait!!! I didnt wa.a...

Welcome to Naruko Have Fun in your game, To see stats look in status.

Impossible Benefits

- 50% extra EXP Rate

- 50% extra Skill Rate

- 50% Harder Relations

- 50% more Hatred

- 50% Less Kindness

Oh, thats exactly what I wanted its good to know it'll be even harder to get friends now.

Hmm, might as well try that status thing.

Status of Naruko

Age: 0

STR: 152(10)

AGI: 148(10)

DEX: 264(10)

INT: 57

WIS: 46

STA: INFINITE

Affects: Just Born, 0 year old