Okay guys I am back. I published a story called First Kiss and it was doing pretty good. After chapter two it wouldn't let me add any chapters at all. I had to delete the story. Now I am making a totally different story... I have been trying to find a good story to read where they are vampires but the only stories i can really find they are human... So this story is going to be a vampire story. I had a weird dream the other night of what really would happen in Breaking Dawn so this is my version of it...

I was going to name it Breaking Dawn but then i decided on ...

Breaking Love

(no Bella and Edward will not break up but a lot of love will be breaking in my story)


This is where Eclipse left off with the couple.

Bella's Pov

I was ready for this. Nothing in the world could stop me from marrying Edward, not even my father.

I was counting m steps until I felt Edwards hand on my shoulder. We were now in front of my door. I went to open my door but he stopped me. I opened my mouth to say something but my lips were now covered with his. His cold hands traveled up to caress my face. My world was spinning around me but before I passed out Edward released his lips from mine.

He smiled and opened the door that lead us to an evil dangerous monster also known as Charlie.

I heard Charlie fumbling around in the kitchen mumbling curses under his breath. I coughed causing his to jump and hit his head on freezer door. Edward and I couldn't help but laugh. Edward lead me to the table, pulling out a chair for me. I sat down at the same time Charlie did.

Charlie eyed us both and waited for one of us to speak.

"Sir I have come here to do the right thing and ask for your blessing to have your daughters hand in marriage." Edward spoke so smoothly I wasn't sure my dad could even say no.

Charlies face started to turn red, "Your not even in college yet, neither of you have a job, and you just graduated. Your too young."

"Dad, we are going to college in Alaska, Edward has a job as Carlisles assistant and earns 17 an hour. I do know we are young dad but Edward is the love of my life. I know I am going to marry him so why should I wait. I don't have forever to live!" I wanted to laugh at that last sentence but kept my face serious.

"Your just going to make the same mistake I made with your mother Bella! Dammit why can't you see that? How do you know he won't leave you again Bells?"

His words dug deep into Edward making him speak out for himself. " I'm sorry sir but your mistaken. I love your daughter so much I would die for her. I was lost until the day I saw Bella. Yes your right I did leave her, but did I come back? I'm not perfect and I'm not good enough for your daughter but we are still in love. I came to ask for your blessings. I do plan on marrying her with you there or not. Now I'm going to go up to Bella's room to start packing."

My dad didn't have a chance to reply for Edward was already out of his seat and out of the room.

"Charlie... I have to go pack. I will be done moving out by the end of the week. I will still come by to visit you. I'm 18 and you can't really do anything about this. I love you dad." With that said I handed him the wedding the invitation and headed upstairs.

The Next day

I woke up and looked to my side. Edward wasn't cuddled up to me but instead he sitting up.

"Edward?"

He turned around and looked at me. His eyes held sadness and pain.

"Bella...why?"

"Edward?" I reached for him and he pulled away.

"I think that...your making a mistake. "

Suddenly the clock hit 8 and my radio started going off. I heard a song so familiar to this situation that I could even tell Edward noticed it as well.

I dont mind where you come from
As long as you come to me
But I don't like illusions I cant see
Them clearly
I don't care, no I wouldn't dare
To fix the twist in you
You've shown me eventually what you'll do
I don't mind
I dont care
As long as you're here

It was kinda funny how one song could mean so much to Edward and I.

"Turn it off."

"No just talk to me Edward."

Go ahead and tell me you'll leave again
You'll just come back running
Holding your scarred heart in hand
It's all the same
And I'll take you for who you are
If you take me for everything
And do it all over again
It's all the same

Hours slide and days go by
Till you decide to come
But in-between it always seems too long
Suddenly
But I have the skill, yeah
I have the will, to breath you in while I can
However long you stay is all that I am

I waited for him to talk as I listened to this song. I couldn't take it any longer. I crawled over to Edward and sat on his lap. He put his head on my chest and started to take in my scent. I felt his lips brush against the top of my tank-top.

I dont mind, I dont care
As long as you're here

Go ahead and tell me you'll leave again
You'll just come back running
Holding your scarred heart in hand
It's all the same
And I'll take you for who you are
If you take me for everything
And do it all over again
It's always the same

He picked me up and sat me back on the bed. I didn't want him to leave but then he started to slowly climb on top of me leaving a trail of kisses along the way. I shivered at his touch. He layed on top of me not putting any weight on me. He kept his head nuzzled into my shoulder and breathed deeply.

Wrong or Right
Black or White
If I close my eyes
Its all the same

In my life
The compromise
I'll close my eyes
Its all the same

Go ahead say it
You're leaving
You'll just come back running
Holding your scarred heart in hand
It's all the same
And I'll take you for who you are now
If you take me for everything
Do it all over again
It's all the same

That was 'All the Same' by Sick Puppies...

He started kissing my collarbone making me moan.

"Edward," I breathed, "The only mistake I am making right now is not kissing you."

I felt his lips on mine. His actions were hungry for me. I arched my back and kissed him deeper. In the next second I was on top of Edward with my hands searching his bare chest. I felt him lift up my shirt and I held up my arms with no argument.

I stopped to breath for a second but Edward held no mercy and started kissing me when I had only had on breath. Right now there was no one else but Edward and I. I felt my shorts coming off and my underwear soon following. I reached to take off Edward's pant but he had me by the wrist pinning me down. Within the next minute I was completely naked.

Edward being Edward never looked down. I suddenly remembered that I wanted to wait. We only had month to go before the wedding. I was about to mention so but then Edward broke our kiss and smiled at me.

"Now you didn't actually think I would go so far today did you? Silly human." I had no clue what he was talking about until I realized I was being brought to the shower.

Evil evil vampire fiance.


Okay so I will update this asap. If it wont let me I will open a new name.

Also lucky reviewers might get a part in this story so leave a review and I will choose them randomly (I wont use them til chapter 3 or 4 so you have time to review :PP)