Third upload in this category and it's another poem! Yay for poems!
This is Daphne-centric. I wanted to use her sort of more angst-y side (if she has one). I showed this to my best friend, who also read the Sisters Grimm and fan-girls with me. She didn't get it. She thought it was about Puck, Sabrina, Mr. Canis, etc. until I told her. So, hopefully you guys will get it. If not, I'll try to clear it up in a PM or something!
Enjoy!
You feel it at night
Squirming deep inside of you
Inside of your soul
When you're s-u-p-p-o-s-e-d to be asleep
You feel the j.e.a.l.o.u.s.y
And d i s a p p o i n t m e n t
And e:n:v:y
And everything you hide with a s'm'i'l'e
And a giggle
During the day
But...when you're a l o n e
In your bed
The monster of feelings awaken
Rumble and grumble
Wanting to be heard
Shown
Let out
Wanting to show her how it f(e)e(l)s to be
I\g\n\o\r\e\d
Thrown away
Brushed a|s|i|d|e
Looked at like a little girl
Who has no judgment
Or feelings
Or c*a*r*e
Maybe she'll know someday
After the w`a`r
When everyone's s_e_t_t_l_e_d
M^a^y^b^e you'll tell her
Release the m o n s t e r
Inside of you
It was simpler this time because of an amazing CC review from Curlscat. She (I think Curlscat is a she) said to focus less on the typography and to let the poem speak for itself. Thank you, again, Curlscat for your constructive criticism!
Did you get it? Was it not Daphne-ish? I don't know, I wanted to get inside of her mind when she's being brushed away all because she's young. I wanted to see if I could capture that part of her.
Hope you guys enjoyed, thanks for reading and (hopefully, possibly) reviewing!
~WireWriter