Heey everybody,

This will be my first long story, if I'll like it then there will be more in the future. This chapter has some character traits form Cinderella, but later on it will be different. Some of the Soul Eater characters will be out of their character, like Blair (Sorry to all the Blair fans). I didn't know how long a chapter normal is, so maybe will future chapters be longer or shorter. Well hope you will enjoy reading.

Summary: Maka Albarn's live got a hell since her father got remeried. But when her last present of her mother get burned in the fireplace, decided Maka that she won't fear her stepfamilie or other people, but will find the courage to love again. A lillte fairytale like Cinderella and others.

Disclaimer: I don't own Soul Eater, and if I did there would be a second anime season.

Long ago, there was a girl with beautiful big green forest eyes and sandy blond hair that she always wore in two pigtails, because her mother liked it, the girl liked to read since she was able to read. (especially fairytales). Her name was Maka Albarn, Maka really loved her family. Her mother taught her to be good, nice and kind to everybody and everything. Her father always told her how much he loved her and her mother (what sometimes so annoying that Maka hid him with one of her books), to let her know that she was special in her own way. But something terrible happened, Maka's mother felt ill and couldn't be healed, her father just didn't want to see his wife suffer pain and was everyday away (there were rumors he was with other woman). Maka would visit her mother day after day, taking care of her. And everyday her mother would tell her a other fairytale.

A month later, on a really rainy and sad day, in front of a small grave with the text:

Kami Albarn

Beloved wife and mother

A young girl sat on her knees, her face in the air the rain sliding along her face, covering her tears. On that day the girl swore that she never again would believe in fairytales with happy endings.

Behind her in the shadows stood a man with red hair, he saw his only daughter crying, and it broke his hart for the second time in his live (the first time was when his wife felt unhealed ill), he wanted to hold that little girl in his arms but he couldn't, he knew his daughter wouldn't ever forgive him because he had left her and her mother alone.

Maka's father (Spirit Albarn) got a new job, where by he must travel a lot. On one of his journeys he met a woman, and fell in love with her at first sight. He thought he could marry her and give his daughter a new mother. So when they were married, the woman Arachne, who was beautiful and admired by many man. Arachne had black hair, which was always tied up in a knot and dark eyes with bloody red lips, and her two daughters, Medusa (the oldest sister, with snake eyes and blond hair) & Blair (the youngest sister, who had properties of a cat, she had wild purple hair) moved in by Maka and her Father. But people can be different in front of another person.

Time skips a few years

Maka was now a 16 year old, beautiful, fast tempered but kind girl. "Maka, you stupid pig!" Where are you! Come immediately here!" her stepmother jelled from downstairs. Maka sighed, and putted her book aside. Her live had become a hell since her father remarried.

Her stepmother let her do all the chores, and really all the chores. The staff had to look how Maka was doing it, and when her stepmother said she didn't do it right, the staff had to turn back everything as it was before, so that Maka must do it again. Her stepmother let her do it until her fingers were bleeding. And then when she would faint from exhaustion she must go to bed without food. And nobody was allowed to tell her father when he got back from his journey. When her father got back, Maka wasn't allowed to see her father. Her stepmother told him that Maka was to angry to see him. Then her father would start crying in the arms of that witch (oh what hated Maka that person, she couldn't get it over her lips to call her mother). Also was Maka not allowed to have any friends (but she still had a secret friend who was named Chrona, a girl with pink short hair who was really shy). And everyday Maka was forced to listen to Medusa and Blair about school, their friends and the many boys admired them. But Maka didn't hate it so much as one rule, the rule that she had to let her hair down, she absolutely couldn't tie it up, especially not in pigtails (so she did it in the secret when she was reading in her room). But today she was just too stupid to forget it.

"I'm here." said she when she entered the living room. SMACK, Maka felt her cheeks getting burned up because of the clap. "It's, I'm here, MOTHER, you rude child." Yelled her stepmother tilling her hand again in the air. "Nya, mother look, look she wears pigtails, pigtails mother, nya." song Blair, with her high-pitched voice. Arachne's eyes gotten smaller and a smirk scattered over her face. "Why do you still wear something so childish! Didn't I tell you that you can't wear them, because they resemble your ugly and weak mother! Do you want to remind your father of his first love!" yelled her stepmother when she pulled the braids out of Maka's hair. Maka felt her anger burning up, because Arachne had called her mum ugly and weak. "I wear them so that my hair don't falls in my face when I'm reading, STEPmother." answered Maka (she laid always the emphasis on the word 'step'). "Why would you be reading, you are only good for cleaning and stuff." Maka saw her stepmother getting irritated. "But reading is good to gather knowledge, STEPmother." Maka saw she did go too far this time, because her stepmother's eyes got that scary look. "So you want to gather knowledge? You want to become smarter?" Maka cringed. "And then when you got smarter you can bewitch my beloved husband?" The two stepsister got smirks on their faces. "So that you can become lazy at your chores? Well than will I tell you something! I WON'T TOLLERATE THAT, YOU SAME OF THIS FAMILY! Her stepmother was getting redder and redder from angriness, a second slap hit Maka's cheek. "MEDUSA, BURN THEM!" yelled her stepmother when she turned around and tossed the braids at her oldest daughter. Maka's eyes got bigger "No, please I beg you, those are the last things of my mother, please!" cried Maka, when she tried to get her braids back. Medusa smirked only, looking from her mother to Maka, when she throw the braids in the fireplace. "NO!" Maka tried to reach the fireplace, but was hold back by Blair, who was giggling. "Nyanyanya, bad girls will be punished!" and with that said the tree left after each other the room.

Maka felt on her knees in front of the fireplace, looking at the last present from her mother, burning too as. From that day on decided Maka that it was time for revenge, even though she still didn't know how. She would no longer fear her stepfamily but she would find courage.

Hope you have enjoyed the first chapter, I still think it's really short but didn't find a better point to cut it of. The second chapter is ongoing, I write everyday a little. Feel free to review even if you think it's the worst thing you have ever readed, hehe... hope you find not.

PS. A special thanks to the little sister of my best friend. When I and my friend had to babysit on her, she wouldn't go to bed until I had read her a story, what was Cinderella. Well in the end she didn't fell a sleep but my friend...

See you later \(^.^) *waves*