Ah.! This is the first story ii've wrote.. EVEr! Read it, Reviiew it?
Tell me how to improve.
"Rae please, talk to me" I heard him say, followed by knocking and pounding on my door. I sighed, knowing Beast Boy he wasn't going to leave until we talked things over. I sighed again and got up, but then I suddenly froze. Damn. Did I really want to hear his apologizing and him proclaiming his undying love for his all around perfect blonde girlfriend? No, I don't. Especially not when she has everything. Everything comes easy to her, while I have to search and fight for what I want. For what I need. She could control her powers perfectly since she got them. I couldn't even show the slightest bit of emotion, without something blowing up or crashing! She had the looks, every guy wanted her. And me.. Well I'm just a creepy Goth chick or more precisely they saw the daughter of Trigon. The daughter of destruction. And god there right! I am the daughter of destruction, just pure evil. My destiny was to be the portal to destruction. But I didn't hurt anyone. I actually saved someone's life! I brought her back to life, but that didn't change the way the world saw me. It only changed the way he saw me. He tried to make it not seem obvious. He would still spend time with me just not as much. Eventually each day the time spent with me got less and less, and it bugged me. He wouldn't try to make me laugh anymore, everything changed. I followed him once, just to see where he was going. And I found him with her. Ha. He had replaced me with her. I acted like I didn't care. Dammit, I'm not supposed to care! I'm not supposed to have these feelings of anger, sadness, and betrayal? I don't know. But I can't fucking help it! I've read many novels about romance, and how when a girl's heart breaks the girl just cries and cries. But I can't do that. I don't have complete control of my powers yet, if I cry I might destroy the fucking tower. All I can do is let a single tear slide down my cheek and even then a nearby window shatters. "Raven, are you okay?" I heard from the other side of the door. Followed by more thumping and a sigh. I wiped my eye and used my powers to open the door, just ready to get it over with. "What do you want" I asked in my normal voice not letting any emotion show. Why should I show him I was breaking inside? "Raven, look I'm sorry-" "Sorry? Beast Boy sorry for what? For loving Terra, for being happy with her? You have nothing to apologize for." I said cutting him off. "You can't choose who you love" I whisper. "I love Terra, She's my everything… but I love you too Rae, you're like a sister to me. And your right you can't choose who you love, sometimes you love a violet haired girl, a blonde or maybe even a green freak" he stated laughing slightly at the end. "You'll find someone" he said turning serious as he left my room. "I did" I whispered once he was gone, too bad for me he found his blonde queen.