Luna was stunned, hecate wasn't allowing her godhood!
Percy and artemis seemed starteled as well, how could she be denied her birthright?
Hecate looked at the trio with a weary expression: "if she proves herself, I will give her godhood, until then, she remains mortal."
Artemis glanced at percy before asking hecate, "what if she's hurt, or killed!"
"if she is killed she will regain immortality, at my discression, if she…asks for it, she will die as a mortal."
Luna spoke up for the first time, "what do you mean?"
Hecate looked at her and said, "if death is your motivation, you will die."
Percy got a look of solmn contemplation: "what about this making her more…reckless?"
"then she shall die."
The ominous thought, and the cold manner in which it was spoken, terrified luna to her core.
Ok, I know it's short, but it's a good intro, don't hate.
Normally I don't do this, but I'm going to mention a few reviews, personal favorites:
Most motvational, tie, one was a semi-insult, but did the job, the other was something that made me feel like I needed to write this.
Sugar high- nook ftw!
Anonomous- how did you know I was an asshole?
Most demanding
pertamis lover- the creative process cannot be rushed, as in the lazer collection, "procrastination makes perfect"
most insane
satyr in training- what?
Only my response can describe this pair
notoptimistic132- shhh… I forgot about tp-ing
Hades' worst nightmare- umm… can I pull the fanfiction card?
Most cryptic
Anonomous- what one issue?
Pointing out obvious holes in my writeing style
King of ghosts- I cannot plot weave, end of story
Most terrifying
Anonomous- if I didn't kill annabeth who is that outside my akhaoiudshbvjoiaynh, ow…my face hurts now…
Funniest
Stargazingatmidnight- artemis wants me to tell you that she and the pebble made up, they are now very good friends and the pebble is now her third in command, after thalia…that's good… I might just sneak that into this story…
Most in character, i.e. as if my characters can hear them
Shooting nova dragon- sorry, don't feel bad, she didn't want to betray them, there was this plot movement that needed to happen, and she was convieniant, I used her. I am so sorry.
Most negative, and not very at that
Adhd-kid2811- thank you, I don't know if I ever did, that is, I think, why this site has reviews, I want more people to be honest about how they feel, even if they hate it.
Most embaressing
Brightemeraldrose- umm…about that…
Most insightful
Anonomous-I hate my annabeth too, but she's a plot device
Most agreeably
Anonomous, may be the last one, I agree that the characters act overly juvenile
And finally, I have become too bored to mention any more, except for one.
I would like to thatnk heastia-rue for inspiration and help.
And please those who may be insulted by what I wrote, but no that I mean no offence, I mean to honor those who have had the goodness in them to take the time to review.