A/N:
Hi! OMG you are actually reading this! Wait! Please don't leave! Yay, You're still here! Ok, so this is not one of those no war kinda stories. This is a story about what would have happen if Tobias knew when and how the Erudite were going to make the Dauntless kill people, except the Erudite don't want to kill anyone. They just want to scare them and keep them from gaining information about 'you know what'. Also he knew about the whole "Bureau" thing. SO NO ONE DIES! The first paragraph comes directly from Divergent because, honestly, I couldn't figure out where to start. I don't plan on making this a thirty chapter story, but maybe more like ten or fifteen at the most. LET THE STORY BEGIN!
P. S.
This is my first story so don't blame me for my lack of writing skills! (That made more sense in my head.)
I OWN NOTHING. All rights go to Veronica Roth. And Susan Collins. You'll see what I mean later...
Chapter 1
"You think giving you a hug would give away too much?" he says. "You know," I say, "I really don't care." I stand on my tiptoes and press my lips to his. It is the best moment of my life. A moment later, Tobias's thumb brushes over the injection site in my neck, and a few things come together at once. I don't know how I didn't figure this out before. One: Colored serum contains transmitters. Two: Transmitters connect the mind to a simulation program. Three: Erudite developed the serum. Four: Eric and Max are working with the Erudite. I break away from the kiss and stare wide-eyed at Tobias. "Tris?" he says, confused. I shake my head. "Not now." I meant to say not here. Not with Will and Christina standing a foot away from me—staring with open mouths, probably because I just kissed Tobias—and the clamor of the Dauntless surrounding us. But he has to know how important it is. "Later," I say. "Okay?" He nods. I don't even know how I'll explain it later. I don't even know how to think straight. But I do know how Erudite will get us to fight.
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Later that night:
I wake up in the middle of the night with Tobias on my mind. I couldn't find him after the rankings were announced, so I guess I subconsciously woke myself up so that I could see him again. "Really romantic, brain. Please don't do this again!" I think to myself. I can't seem to fall back asleep, so I get up, put some decent clothes on, and let my feet take me on a journey to through the halls of the Dauntless compound. Despite the ridiculously late hour, the halls are still somewhat packed with drunken Dauntless. still celebrating the announcement of the new members to their faction.
Apparently, my brain still wants to see Tobias, because I end my walk right in front of his door. I knock lightly enough so that I wont wake him up if he is asleep, but loud enough that he will hear me if he is awake. To my surprise, he opens the door, and before I can say anything, he is dragging me through the halls. I wonder if he knew I would come to see him. We don't stop until me reach the chasm, then he brings me to his - our - hidden place deep inside of the chasm. "Whoa! What was that about?" I ask, laughing a little so that he knows I am joking. He doesn't answer me, but instead he just sits down, pulling me down with him.
Something isn't right. He never made eye contact with me. He is always looking past me or behind us. When he finally looks at me, his eyes were filled with determination. "Tris," he says," we have to leave. Now. It will be difficult for you to understand and even harder for me to tell." I take his hand and say, "Tobias, you know you can tell me anything. I will try my best to understand." We stare into each others eyes for what feels like a thousand years, and it very well could have been for all I cared. His hand, the one not being held in mine, and placed it lovingly on my cheek and pulled my face closer to his. Right as his lips were about to touch mine, he whispered, "Your amazing. How did I get this lucky?" Before I can answer, his lips are on mine and I feel like nothing else matters. What he was going to say is momentarily forgotten as I tangle my hands in his hair. He pulls me closer to him, if that was even possible. He pulls me onto his lap and kisses my jawline and my cheeks. He brings his face back up to mine and our noses touch, his eyes on mine. He kisses me again, and I pull away after a while. He looks at my, eyes wide, obviously failing at the sad puppy face. I place a light kiss on his forehead before saying,"You were saying something about leaving the city." "Can't that wait a while?" he asks, nuzzling his face into me neck. "Come on Tobias, Just tell me," I whisper.
"Alright," He says, "The reason we have to leave is that I have recently received news from...certain people about an attack on the Abnegation. And, if my informer is correct, then Jeanine Matthews is planning to get someone in Dauntless to inject all of us with a serum that will give her complete control over our bodies, giving her an army of well trained humans, who cannot even control their own thoughts. She may have even done so already. There is also a place not far out side of the gates called the Bureau of Genetic Welfare."
He goes on for what seems like hours, though it is probable more like minuets, about how the "Bureau" is always watching the city. "We must avoid them at all costs." "How do you know all this?" I ask. "Let's just say that Marcus wasn't watching his back enough. I followed him, sometimes, to his office. I would always here him taking to the people from the Bureau. Especially this one guy named David. I think he's in charge of the Bureau. Or at least the compound that is watching us. I am not sure if your parents were involved, but I know that their disappearing has something to do with all of this.
"But," he begins, hesitating a little," Marcus's office wasn't where I got all of my information. " But he trails of, not wanting to continue. "What do you mean?" I ask, curios as to what he is talking about. "There… there is this book called Allegiant. Tris…Tris it says you die! You get killed by David, from Marcus's office! I don't want that to happen? I can't let that happen…" he stops because he is starting to cry. He stares down at his hands, which are facing up and laying in his lap. What does he mean that a book says I will die? It's just a book, right? When he finally looks up, he pulls me into a bone crushing hug.
"Where did you get the book?" I ask. He pulls back and looks me in the eye, "There is a library in some abandoned street near the Erudite sector. It has so many books about things that have happened to other people. They have this trilogy called "The Hunger Games" and, Tris, you think the factions are bad. This place would be like a paradise to them." I am completely astonished and not sure what to do. "So, who's point of view is "Allegiant" in?" He looks away, and his cheeks redden slightly. "Both mine and yours... But Allegiant isn't the only one. There is Divergent and Insurgent." "Which are in my point of view?" I still don't understand. "Yeah," he answers, "These books predict a possible future, one that I will not let happen!" I pull him close to me and place a small kiss on his lips. I can taste the salt of his tears, and mine. I'm not sure when I started crying. "It's going to be alright," I say," We are going to get out of here and we are going to be safe. I will be safe. With you." I place a hand over his heart and I know how scared he must be. His heart is beating extremely fast.
After every thing is packed from his room, we go to the dorms to get my stuff, which isn't much. When we are finished, we go back to his room and sit on his a while we just sit here, not knowing what to do next. Then the shouting stops.
A/N:
Yes, I did quote Insurgent. Somewhat.
I just felt the need to.
I am only asking for one review per chapter before I update just so I know someone is reading this. However, I will not be able to update every day. Maybe every three or four days. I will definitely update at lease one chapter per week. It all depends on how much my algebra teacher hates me I guess. I also will not be able to update on Wednesdays and Thursdays for a while due to drama club meetings after school. Is this chapter short? It seems really short to me. Meh, oh well. I also want to apologize for my grammatical errors, there are probably more than I could count. I live in southern Louisiana so I probably word things different than all of the rest of the world.
Also, let me know if you would like (just put a number in your review) 1: more short chapters or 2:few long chapters. Shorter chapters will probably be posted more often than longer chapters.
PEACE OUT PANSYCAKES!
P. S.
Just to clarify, the cameras that the Bureau is using are only in public places. So they can't see or hear what they were doing or saying. Just putting that out there. I'm not sure how it was in the books, but this is a fanfiction and things are hardly ever accurate in fanfictions.
K. That's it.
-NotHisDate
