BETTER TOGETHER

Chapter 1

Hi Guys! I have just become a member of fanfiction. This is my very first story and what is mentionable is that I am a Hungarian girl, so be patient with me if I misuse anything….

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It was an ordinary night in Asgard. Everything seemed normal. At least almost everything...

"What have you done?" a young man whispered in an angry tone.

"We just wanted to have training…"answered the other young man.

"Oh that's just nice. Training? In the middle of the night? You should think before you act!"

"It doesn't matter now since we already have the problem"

The other sighted in misbelief. "Why did you call me here?" asked he finally.

"If you could help to make this mess disappear I would appreciate it…" answered carefully the one who was asked.

"Of course…how do you manage to explain this to Father?"

"I don't know yet brother, but I hope you will be my partner in it…"

"Thor! Hide! Guards are coming!" warned a girl from the group of the trouble makers.

Thor grabbed the other young man's arm and pulled him behind a high stanchion. They watched as two guard approach towards the area with the mess was created by the group.

"Great! What now?" asked sarcastically the young man from Thor.

"Hold on. I have a plan" answered Thor with a smile. The other looked at him questioningly. Thor stood up and started to walk toward the guards. "Evening!" he said loudly. The young man who watched his brother slapped his face. The guards turned to Thor who has just wanted to start a long explanation what the guards didn't wait to begin. They grabbed Thor and pulled him towards the Palace.

"Wait!" said the young man as he stood up. " Can't we just discuss the problem together, gentlemen?" he asked gently with a smile. The two guards shared a look then one of them headed to the direction of the young man and grabbed him too. "Wait…does this mean a Maybe?"


"Again and again you cause trouble…"said the King of Asgard with a disappointed voice. " I punished you time to time but it seems useless. Now then, what should I do with the two of you?"

"Father, let me explain…Firstly, Thor caused the problem and I didn't take part of it, secondly,…"

"Wait! Didn't you tell me that you would help?" interrupted Thor.

"No I didn't say anything like that."

"What kind of brother you are? You leave me alone in trouble!"

"That kind of brother who tired of getting his own back to protect you!"

"Enough!" shouted the King. "Loki, is that true that you weren't in the group who were the mess caused by?"

"That's true, Father" answered Loki with a smile of satisfaction.

"Then why were you at the scene with Thor when the guards arrived?" asked Odin.

"I…Thor called to…." Started Loki but he didn't really know how to continue.

"Yes I assumed. You are partner in crime, son."

"But…."

"No but! Enough! You bring shame to me! I have to figure out how to stop the process of troubles you create. But for now, your task will be to clean up the mess you have made"

Loki smiled at that statement. It is an easy task.

"But you have to accomplish it without Thor's strength and Loki's magic. While you will be doing this I can discuss what will your punishment be to learn your lesson once and for all."

"But how are we supposed to do the task with the lack of magic and strength?" asked Thor confused.

"Like the mortals would do. With patience and intellect." Said Odin and with that the argument was ended.


Odin stood on a terrace of the palace, watching his sons grumbling and arguing at the square.

"Are you sure this is the best way to teach them?" asked Frigga in a worried tone.

"This is the only way for them to learn how to use their senses before their abilities of using magic and strength. Also, there is the possibility to become real brothers in not just thought but in hard times and fight."

Frigga sighted. She didn't feel convinced. "I hope you are right" she managed to say in the end as she went inside. "But a High School in EARTH?" she thought still worried.


End of chapter one. Hope you liked it! I try to create a great story with excitement and fun. Please feel free to review, not just your opinion but mistakes too. I am preparing for the English language exam, so it can be helpful.

Bye for now. Waiting for comments :D