Preview – Forever Kiss - Shoujo-ai / Yuri / Girl Love

This a yuri story, that means GirlxGirl. If you don't like that sort of thing, don't read it and don't comment. I'm not really interested in bigotry, prejudice, and/or hate. It would be easier if you just closed this page and found something else to read rather than causing problems. I appreciate your maturity.

This story is dedicated to Melah94, who inspired me to write it and has been a wonderful and devoted reader.

Welcome to my new Venus Versus Virus project! It's an alternate reality story, (I hope that's the right term) This is going to be a fun piece, lots of romance, drama, flirtation, jealousy, and excitement. It should be very enjoyable and hopefully entertaining!

I had intended to post the entire first chapter on Halloween, but I was very busy with auditions and school work...and partying. I apologize. This story will begin regular updates soon!

This is a clip from later in the story, Please review! :)


Pale, cold, motionless; the body lay in the middle of the empty courtyard. The moonlight streamed through the trees and onto the path where she emerged, breathless. A cool fall breeze gusted through her hair, whipping it about her panicked face as she ran towards the body. She collapsed to her knees and stared in horror at the girl who lay on the ground before her. She quickly picked her up and cradled her, taking in what she saw. The girl's once rosy cheeks and lush lips had gone colorless, gray like stone; her skin was like ice, as if winter embodied had kissed her skin and turned it to frost. Cautiously, like she was handling a porcelain toy, she shifted the body in her arms and began searching desperately for any sign of life. She listened for breath but was only greeted by silence, she felt for a pulse but the blood no longer flowed through the veins. She pressed her ear to the other girl's breast where she heard a quiet heartbeat; so faint, she wondered if it was her mind playing tricks on her in her frantic anticipation to discover that her partner was still alive. Nevertheless, it was there, that slow, almost silent beating. Buh-dum, Buh-dum…Buh-dum… buh- But the sound, so miraculous and relieving at first, was already fading as well, faltering until it would stop entirely.

"Please," begged the girl as she held the body, "… No… don't leave me! Please wake up!" But she knew that her pleas were falling on deafened ears. "I need you..." Tears streamed down her cheeks and before long she'd begun sobbing despairingly. She pulled the body close and hugged it into her own chest as she continued to plead with the gods, any god at all, to spare her friend. It was futile, this girl had no chance now; her heart had already stopped beating.


Alright! So now that you've read this you'll have to come back and keep reading to find out who the dying girl is and what has happened! Is there any hope for them!? oh the suspense! lol. I promise that this story will be worth the return so make sure you get alerted to my updates! :)

Edit (11/7/09) - I think I finally finished editing the first chapter and have got it where I want it, soooooooo... it should be posted soon! :D Get Pumped!