I have not read the revenge of seven yet so this is what i think the first chapter will be like. I hope you enjoy and PLEASE share your feedback or even just ideas for other stories. This is my first story so I really am excited about it so i hope u enjoy.

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN LORIEN LEGACIES

chapter 1

Six:

After Marina had reached me I made her invisible all we could do was stand and watch as the mogadoriens take eights body onto their ship. "We have to stop them." Marina whispered trying not to cry at the sight of eights lifeless body but deep down she knew we would not be able to take on all the mogs that were now helping five with his injuries inflicted on to him by Marina and her new found legacy. Weirdly enough they did not even search for us, like they had already found what they wanted.

Nine:

When the mogs left and we started our way back inland. No one has muttered a word since we left the Everglades and I now can see Marina feel the new scar that has burnt itself in to our legs. I feel like this is my fault eight is dead if I just don't opened my big mouth maybe he would be sitting with us right now.

Seven:

As we get off the boat and in to the car I hear six say something about getting hold of the others but to be honest I was not even listening all I could think about was eight and as he mouthed the words "I love you" moments before he died. When ever I think of nine that same icy feeling I felt as I almost took fives other eye out, after he stabbed eight even if he did not mean too he still intended to kill an other garde even if it was not the one he meant to kill he still killed of his own people.

As I look up I can six has stopped at a gas station probably to refill and get something to eat and drink and that is when I realize that the mogs will be all over the pent house in a matter of hours and there is no one there to protect Ella, John and our chests, its not that I do not trust the humans but I know they will not be able to take on a whole army of mogs without any of the garde.

So what are your guys thoughts of it? i hoped you enjoyed reading my story and it will definitely not be my last, do not forget to review! Thanks!