Just the background tell me what you think. Is this a good idea I'd like to know so I can make changes soon and continue writing. Please let me know what you think.
Background and info-
(all ages from GSD, will remain the same)
This story takes place 2 years after the second bloody valentine war. Kira, Athrun, Lacus, and Cagalli are all 18. Meyrin Hawke stays in Orb with the Archangel and is 16. Most of the world has been rebuilt and just when it seems like piece will reign a new high chairmen is named for ZAFT and a new president for the Atlantic Federation (suggestions for these names please). Together they sign an alliance treaty and join into one large nation putting all differences aside. This new nation is called the Zodiac Atlantic Union or ZAU. Tensions soon begin to rise in anger from other nations at the growing power of ZAU and they begin a war with Eurasia. Together Orb and Scandinavia plan to send refugees to a hidden nation that was long forgotten once they left the earth to colonize Mars. (they used machines to create an atmosphere for Mars and its moons.) This is where the story begins.
Characters:
Shin and Luna on a new ZAU ship.
Returning Archangel Crew
Returning Eternal Crew
Kisaki
Asagi
Mayura
Juri
and new characters I will introduce later so I don't ruin the surprise.
Mobile Suits:
Strike Freedom-Kira
Infinite Justice-Athrun
Akatsuki-Mu
Destiny (fixed up)-Shin
Impulse-Luna
Buster 2.0 (nuclear powered)- Dearka
Duel 2.0 (nuclear powered)- Yzak
other pilots and suits to be introduced