Okay I'm totally new here so plz be nice!!!!!!!!
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or none of its characters (I wish I did because I would so kill Sakura and Ino!!!!!!!! laughs evil)
Well anyways hope u like it.
Chapter 1: New Home
The night was cold and still, no one dared to go outside in the night, everyone will close their windows and lock their doors afraid that a vampire would appear in their doorstep and kill them.
In the street lights, there was a black carriage being pulled by four black horses, inside what a boy, around the age of fourteen with raven hair on each side there was bangs and on the back his hair was kind of sticking up, his skin color was a bit tan and his eyes were dark brown, he was wearing a long shirt that went all the way to this knees not letting his black short show, wearing black shoes.
Everyone knew the boy as one of Orochimaru's pets since he would always do as he was told and never had been seen smiling before the most of the time he would have sadness in his eyes.
"You're going be under the command of the most powerful vampire there is and our ruler, do you understand?" said the man that sat across the boy, he had white hair sticking up to one side and has one eye covered with some cloth and when he was talking his face looked bored and was reading some kind of perverted book not bothering to look up.
"Yes." answered the boy nodding
"Good, oh I almost forgot, what's your name?" asked the men finally moving his eye to see the boy.
"Sasuke." answer the boy looking outside the window
"Just Sasuke, you don't have a last name?" question the men but the only answer he got was silence.
When the carriage finally stops in front of a huge castle, it took almost a whole city area for only the house and that's not counting the front yard and the back.
"We have finally arrived, it was about time." said the man getting out of the carriage, Sasuke just stayed quiet and just stared at the castle once he got out as well "Impressive right?" but to his disappointment Sasuke just shrugged, "Well you sure don't talk much kid." whispered the guy walking toward the castle and motioning Sasuke to follow.
he acts just like someone I know would love to be with him
Once the two reached a eighteen feet tall door after passing like at least a million to Sasuke, the man told Sasuke to wait while he announces of his arrival.
"Alright." said Sasuke while the man went inside and closed the doors behind him.
Plz tell me how I did I want to be better
In the next chapter the Akatsuki would be introduce
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(Damn it didn't work!! On to plan B)
gets on her knees
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